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moonlight99

@moonlight99

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Hey! Loved the start! Is this going to be sad or happy? Is Khushi dead? Can't wait to find out! I love your writing style!

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moonlight99

@moonlight99

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Thanks for the pm! This is an awesome start! Love your style of writing!

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Beautiful Beginning :) 😍

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..Damsel..

@..Damsel..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

excellent start and very very beautifully written...love it...

love how Khushi is not actually with him, but he does everything how Khushi would like it...and his heart knows she is somewhere...

waiting for the next part...thanks for the pm hun

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@invalid

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Ahh tel me about the missing commenters and likers ! Such a pain to PM over 350 people! I understand your pain...

Anyway, awesome start, really emotional, and beautifully written AS ALWAYS, looking forward to this story xx

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Jasleen

@Jasleen

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Beautifully written, so much passion and longing ⭐️ Loved how Khushi is still with Arnav and helps him make the right decisions. Awesome job!!!!!

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karisma

@karisma

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

very beautiful idea!

i found this line very touching:

The heart knows, di. It always does.

it's got a wealth of meaning in it.poor arnav is carrying so much grief..hope he finds his khushi soon

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hiddenpearl

@hiddenpearl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

That was really really awesome
very emotional
just fab ,
loved it

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489321

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Wow! Arnav having faith that she is still alive is so beautiful.
Love the way you've portrayed his feelings and that he tries to be a better person for her. :D
Can't wait for the next update!

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Miss sadist...*sigh*... Wat do i do with u...lol...
Very well written part... Awesome... I know khushi is alive...but poor arnav have bear so much pain,,,

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