It should be illegal for you to write a story, especially when you dont update because my dear, there are people who die of curiosity, not you arent aware of that. I don't know what to say, but I want to say so much that I cant stop myself either. So where should I begin? Hmm... Well, lets start with how awesome a writer you are, but that might really just take days, so I wont emphasise too much on that. I mean, wow man, you did it! You successsfully wrote four chapters of a story that has enough depth in it to captivate anyone, this is exactly what I call a love story. Simple, delicate, and real. And the thought of Arnav just sooo makes me blush, mostly owing to your excelllent writing skills. The way he takes care of Khushi, the way he makes ssure that there shall be no problem in her treatment. In a lot of fanfics, the author very comfortably label Arnav as "the opposite of her prince charming". is it so, really? Isnt he the ultimate prince charming every girl waits for..? The poor guy has suffered, thats why he has developed a demeanor that intimidates many. In no way does that mena that arnav is not THE ULTIMATE guy, because he so is. and m so floored by your story, i cant get enough of it. had it not been the fact that i find reading any written work more than once tiring, i would probably have each word memorised by now. Its not one of those fanfics that are all about drama, its just, well about love. his love. her love. their love. i have been talking about arnav all this while, completely ignoring my dear khushi. but khushi's love too, cannot be competed. she forogot everything she had lived, every moment of her life, everyone she had loved, her own self, but she could not bring herself to forget their love. thats why they say, love is greater than everything else. it just seems so surreal, the hole story, its like m living the story. hats off to your writing yar. and that she is actually sharing the same bed as him, makes me smile. i know its too BTM a thought, but really, I have been watching this serial for over 3 months now, inspite of everyone i know teasing me about watching a hindi serial because apparently hindi soap operas are supposed to be tpp full of drama, with not an iota of reality in them. whether thats true or not is not something i would like to discuss, because generally i do feel, that ya, thats true. but iss pyar ko is just a whole different story all together. anyone who says hindi serials are not worth it, has not set his eyes on mr. arnav singh raizada. and u just made him more adorable than ever(imagine that!) all in all, i would like to say that ur story has touched my heart, and that i dreamt about it last night. thanks for writing :)
Edited by beautiful_me - 13 years ago