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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
Part 32


He pressed his lips on crook of her neck as his hands stopped in mid before opened the dori of her blouse.
His phone vibrate.
Maan(abhi nhi maan)
He take step backward and go outside.
Geet : maan
She doesn't get any answer.
She opened her eyes and not found any sign of maan.
Geet :maan aap kaha hai,
Please mere samne aaiye,
But he doesn't come front of her.
Geet : maan mujhe ase mjak bilkul pasand nhi hai,
Please mere samne aaiye na,
Geet :maan

Kaka : kya hua betiya
Geet : kaka, maan kaha gye.
Kaka : maan bete,
Wo to yaha aaye hi nhi
Geet :kya
(mummer) pr wo to yaha the

Kaka : betiya sb thik hai na
Geet :ji
Kaka : betiya wo anjli betiya ka phone fir se aaya tha
Geet : ji, bs ja rhi hu
Kaka : thik hai


She came outside and sit in car.

Geet : driver chalo

Kaka :maan bete ye sb
Maan :mein janta hu kaka,
Aap kya khna chahte hai
Aap pareshan mt hoye
Geet thik hai


Maan Monologue
Sorry geet,
Mein janta hu, tumhe mere achanak jaane se, ya kahu ruk jaane se, takleef puchi hai,
Geet, pr tum bs ye ek sapna smajh ke bhul jana,
Geet, ab tumse dur rha nhi ja rha tha,
Isliye tumhare samne aa gya,
Ye nazre tumhe dekhna chahti thi,
Ye dil tumhe pyaar krna chahta tha,
Pr tumhari khatir, ya kahu khud ki khatir mujhe rukna pda.
Geet mein beetein hue kal ko to nhi badal sakta,
Pr aane wale hr pal mein,
Mein tumhara daman khushiyo se brna chahta hu.


Geet monologue
Mera dil janta hai, maan aap yhi the,
Yu paas aake,
Apna ehsaas dilake,
Tum dur kyu ho gye,
Wo sapna nhi tha, wo yaha the,
To achanak se chale kyun gaye aur jana hi tha,
To mujhe kaha kyun nahi,
Fir kaka ne ye kyun kaha, wo yaha aaye hi nhi.

Driver :madam hotel aa gya hai
Geet :hmmm

In party hall

Anjli : ye kya hai geet, party me itna late

Geet : wo di
Anjli : chl ab jaldi chl
Kavya : hey geet

Geet : hey jiju, aap kaise ho

Kavya : tumhare samne hu

Geet : jiju ek baat puchu
Anjli : geet tum kavya se baat karo, mein abi aati hu
Geet : hmm
Kavya : geet tum kuch puch rhi thi
Geet : jiju kya maan yha aaye huye hai
Kavya(think) : ab mein kya kahu, maan ne to kuch bi btane ke liye mna kiya hai.
Geet : jiju bataiye na
Kavya : geet mujhe nhi pata
Geet : hmm
Jiju mein abi aati hu

Kavya : ok
He immediately call maan.
Kavya : maan, tune ab kya kiya hai
Maan : kya hua kavya
Kavya : geet tere baare me mujhse puch rhi thi.


See below

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42



Maan : to tune kya kaha
Kavya : yhi ki, mujhe nhi pata
Maan : thik hai..
Kavya : ab tu kaha hai,
Maan : teri party mein
Kavya : kya ?
😲
Tu pakka mujhe marwayenga,
Abhi maine kaha tha geet se,
Aur tu
Yha
Maan :tu relax kar
😉
Mujhe bar counter ki taraf aake mil

Kavya : ok
At the side of bar counter

Maan (think): maan geet ko bhut bura lag gya hai, ab usse kaise mnayu.
Geet try his number many time but his phne no. Come busy.


Geet(think ) : pta nhi kiss se baat kr rhe hai.

He pick her call.

Geet : maan
Aapka phone busy kyun aa rha tha,
Kisse baat kr rhe the aap,

Maan (ab to mujhe geet ke babaji hi bcha sakte hai,
Itna gussa
😡 hai madam )

Geet : ab aap kuch khte kyun nahin

Maan : geet
Ye kya hai..
Na hey, na hello
Ye tak nhi pucha aap kaise ho,
Sida gussa ho gyi

Geet : maan aap kaha ho
Maan : tumhare dil me
Geet : mere khne ka matlab hai,
Maan aap ghar mein ho kya
Maan : geet maan to apni geet ke dil ke ghar me rhta hai
Geet : maan
Maan : geet mujhe asa kyun lag rha hai, tum mujhse puchna kuch aur chahti ho, aur kh kuch aur rhi ho
Geet : maan aap ooty mein ho na
Maan : ha geet
Kavya : Maan
Maan covered his phone with palm
Kavya : ye tune kya kh diya geet se
Maan : tu 2 min. Chup ho ja
Geet : mujhe pata tha, fir maan aap mujhe bina btaye kyun gye,
Pta hai, mein kitni pareshan ho gyi thi.
He carefully listen all her complains and cute talks.
Maan(ab meri mishti kuch thik lag rhi hai.)
Geet :aapko pata hai. Kaka ne mujhse kaha, aap yha ghar pe aaye hi nahi.
Maan aap kuch khte kyun nahi
Maan : geet jab tum mujhe kuch khne dongi, to mein kuch khunga na
Geet : hmm
Maan : mein to ghar pe aaya hi nhi tha
Geet : abhi to aapne kaha, aap ooty mein hai
Maan : ha geet,
Pr mein ghar pe nhi aaya
Geet : wo
Maan : iska matlab geet, tum mere sapne dekh rhi thi,
Meri mishti, mujhe itna yaad kr rhi thi, isliye mein yha ooty aa gya.
Geet : maan, fir mere samne aaiye na
Maan : geet, mein tumse kl aake milta hu,
Is waqt mujhe kaam hai
Geet : hmm
Maan : mishti udas kyun hoti ho
Maine thode kaha tha, mujhe chodke tum ooty jao, wo bi 2 weeks ke liye
Geet : maan ab bs kriye
Maan : love u jaan
Geet : love u 2 maan
Ab mein phone rkhti hu
Maan : hmm
Geet (geet tu bi kya kya sochti hai)
Sch me maan, mein aapko bhut miss kr rhi ho
Mein to maan se ye puchna hi bhul gyi - wo ooty kis kaam ki wajah se aaye hai
Maan (sorry geet, maine abhi bi tumse sch nhi kaha, geet shi waqt aane pe tumhara maan tumhe sb sach jarur batayenga.)
Kavya placed his hand on his shoulder.
Kavya : wha maan, thankgod mein bch gya,
Nhi to tumhare wajah se meri sali sahiba apne jiju se naraz ho jati.
Note :- sorry friends.
"wanna be my chammak challo"
Part was not ready. Plz gussa mt hona. Next part me pakka mil jayenga.

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
awswm love maneet conversation wait for chhammak challo
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
awesome
loving maaneet like this happy
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
superb update dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
beautiful udt⭐️⭐️
bt yaar ye maan geet ko itna preshn kyu kr rha hai😕
ohhh me confuss😕
ek toh itne dino baad updt ufff ab fir se gayab mat hona
updt soonnn😍

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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
love their convo...

but y is he hiding from geet??

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
original posted by
pari kashyap

beautiful udt⭐️⭐️
bt yaar ye maan geet ko itna preshn kyu kr rha hai😕
ohhh me confuss😕
ek toh itne dino baad updt ufff ab fir se gayab mat hona
updt soonnn😍


dear jaldi pta chl jayenga, have some patience
priya_21 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
original posted by
jyoti

love their convo...

but y is he hiding from geet??

continue soon...

thnx for PM...


dear jaldi pta chl jayenga, kuch ache ke liye ho, kya pata

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