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Posted: 13 years ago
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lvd it...
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THANKS JI...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was awesome...

cant wait for the next update


THANKS
SUNDAY KO MILENGI...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ok...toh geetji apne maan se issliye gussa hai k woh late ho gaye...wow...dats gr8...

beautiful update...


loved the chemistry b/w maan n geet...

thank u sooo much fr d lovely update n also fr d pm...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt update...


JI HA...LATE AAYE TO GUSSA HONA TO BNTA HAI BOSS...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its nt fair kha aake rok diya yr

nyways nyc 1


AAP SB SOCH RHE HONGE RANG ME BANG DAAL DIYA
SO SORRY...😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 43


Flashback in

Geet : sir design tyaar hai, jaise apne kaha tha, maine waise hi bnaye hai
Maan : geet wo to mein dekhke hi batayunga na
Thik hai ya nhi
She give the papers.
Maan : geet kuch kmi hai abhi bi, tum color combination change kro,
Aur isse dobara bnayo
Geet : ok sir
Sir papers
Maan : ye papers yhi mere pass rhne do
Ab tum jao
Geet : ok sir
She leaves and enter in own cabin.
Geet : khudko smjhta kya hai
3 baar maine same designs bnaye, aur har baar koi na koi galati bta dete hai
Mein inhe chodungi nhi
Dust khi ke
In maan's cabin
Maan : perfect design
Jaise mein chahta tha,
Par miss geet handa..
Kya karu..
Tum chup bilkul achi nahi lagati.. Tum jb non stop bak bak krti ho, wo acha lagta hai.
Maan ye tu kya bakwas soch rha hai. Maan dnt behave like a stupid. She is just an employee. So focus only on your work.
Geet enter in his cabin.
Geet : sir ab thik hai
Maan : nhi..
He shouted on her.
Geet maine koi training school open nhi kiya huya hai.. Jo tumhe mein khud designs bnana sikhayu.. Ek baari mein tumhe kya smjh nhi aa sakta.
Fresh tears were flowing down her cheeks.
Maan(think) : maan tu ye kya kr rha hai, bina baat usse daat diya..
He stand from his chair and goes near to her.
Maan : geet
Geet : sorry sir
Maan : geet tum sorry kyun kh rhi ho, wo to
Geet : sir, sorry jo maine socha, aap ke sath kaam karungi, to mujhe kuch sikhne ko milenga..
Maan : geet
Geet : sir, aaj apke sath kaam krne se mujhe ek baat ka to pta chl gya hai
Maan give a questioning look to her.
Geet : aapko mujhe pareshan krne me bhut mja aata hai,
Maan : geet tum mere baare mein asa sochti ho
Geet : sir apne to karke dikha diya..
Maine socha tha apko designs ache lagenge, par aap ne to hr baar hi galati nikal di,
Maine saara kaam bilkul waise hi kiya, jaisa apne mujhe krne ko kaha..
Fir bi..
She paused for a sec.
Fir bi, aapko ek baar bi pasand nhi aaye..
Maan : geet asa nhi hai, saare designs bilkul perfect hai.. Wo to bs mein tumhe
Geet : mein tumhe pareshan dekhna chahta tha..
He held her shoulders and pinned her to the wall..

See below
Edited by maanetpriyanka - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome sweetu, loved it.

Do cont soon and do PM me.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Maan : chup bilkul chup
Geet : sir,
Maan : maine kaha na ab mein aur kuch nhi sunana chahta..
Maine jo bi kiya, bs wo ye janane ke liye kiya, tum itni shant kyun ho
Tumhe khi meri koi baat buri to nhi lag gyi,
Tum thik to ho na,
Tumhe koi takleef to nhi hai,
Tum to mujhse aake kuch kahungi nhi..
Mein bs tumhe gussa dilake ye janana chahta tha
..
Mein janana chahta tha, bak bak machine ek dum se itni shant kaise ho gyi..
Geet : apne mujhe bak bak machine kaha
Maan (mummer) : baki sb baaton me se isse bs yhi word note krna tha
Maan : nhi geet, wo to bs ase hi
Geet : chodiye mujhe.
He removed his both hand from her shoulder. She move out. He held her hand which made her current run down her spine. He also thought so like that but he shrugged it off immediately. Geet said angerly " chodiye mujhe "
Maan admired her cute anger.
Maan : sorry geet "aaj meri wajah se in aankho me aansu aaye "
Mahi mein mahi mahi ve...
Both lost into each other eyes.
Geet : sorry sir, maine na jane aapse kya kya kh diya
He pressed her lips from his index fingers.
Maan : sshh
Ab ek sbd aur nahi
Geet : pr sir mujhe laga tha, aap meri bak bak miss kr rhe the.
Both laughed together.
Outside the cabin
Tasha : sasha
I mean sasha madam
Geet ko maan sir ke cabin ke andher gye huye kitna time ho gya hai.
Sasha : to
Tasha : madam, khi kuch gadbad to nhi..
Dono ke hasne ki awaz bi aa rhi thi
Flashback out


"maan" she moaned in pleasure kissed him with same passion.
His lips moved to devour her clevage. She felt his lips on her breast, where he sucked her, kissed her and bite her.
He wanted to tease her, so instead of entering, he grinned his manhood on her sensitive parts, the naked contact of their private parts made her crazy "maan please " she said wanting him in her right now. Her hand clenched the sheet tightly as his lips played with her breasts, his tongue flicking her nipples and bitting them softly. He held her shoulder and let him in her so gently.
Edited by maanetpriyanka - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awsmmm parts lvd it...
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Posted: 13 years ago

awsome update yaar

maaneet toh steamy hotey jaa rhe hai😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part dear continue soon plzzz update kyph ka flash back after dinner what maan do when he know about geet his chilhood frd n secrectry

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