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zafi

@zafi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#421

Wow!!! Superb ending. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Hottness Personified.

Loved it. Well done.

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Bazzinga

@Bazzinga

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#422

I have noo words left in my mouth to describe this update, but why last part

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@A...

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#423

That was Killleeerrr !!!!!!!!!👏👏👏All the time,i was holding my breath...Awwweesum Mini Darling🤗🤗

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sonudew

@sonudew

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#424

very steamy and hot...a really good Os...

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667300

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#425

This was so hot and funny at the same time Munchy!

Loved it! Khushi is so naive and yet not at the same time. I love how neither of them even stop to think now before they just get into the shower with one another :P

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-Janet-

@-Janet-

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#426

Muffin Muffin! You know my deals with FFs and SSs bey. Waiting for updates is like Chinese torture. So, I stay away from either, as a rule. It's just that your OS was so bloody short and erm well nothing happened, so I was like UFF, don't we have the CVs for that already?!

Chal, saare like kar diye! I've replied to your PM, but since there seems to be a 'like and comment' revolution going on, I'll just say things here too, I guess!

My strategy worked really well coz there was no waiting time for me bey! You sent me the link and I could read all the other 4 parts at one go, phew! I would've turned into another Shyamu if I had to wait for updates :O

Shyamu se yaad aaya.. snake?! :P :P :P :P I cracked up so badly bey! Snake, I believe. And songs to go with it, no less. Last part of course is my favorite. Given the closure et al. Rub away continues to crack me up so badly!

Aur OSs likh bey. For FF+SS-phobic people like me!

Thanks for reducing my Monday blues :-)

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#427

im sorry i thought i commented on this SS... the update left me speechless and hyperventilating that forgot to comment im so sorrry 😔😭😭
i still dont know what to write to describe the update... im lost of words...
u r gem in writing these stuff so beautiful and in limit... hats of to you 🤗🤗

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#428

Whoo!!!! No other words are coming to mind

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Nishttha Nath

@EimenEnchanted

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#429

I never knew that i enjoyed being a pervert so much 😆

it totally .. hello hi bye byed me :😉😳

Edited by Mohi_nisH - 13 years ago

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Dee (Daisy)

@drdee142

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#430

Hi I came across your FF Pandora's Box a couple of days ago and was so entralled by it that I couldn't stop till I read the whole FF, unfortunately I was dissappointed that you had to abruptly end it.

I then searched for more writings by you and found Spiral Staircase which just impressed me so much more then I couldn't stop till I read all your works.

I must say you have an amazing writing skill & your story telling is so intriguing.

I love your story lines, they are funny, romantic, seductive, addictive & hot & steamy. I like that your sensual scenes are also written so tastefully.

I've read several FF's though not too many Arhi FF's but you are one of the FF writers who has really impressed me so I had to write this note.

I do hope you take up writing seriously, you really should think of writing a novel or a screenplay, trust me I'm a voracious reader and am addicted to reading so I should know when I see real talent.

Here's a big applause from me for all your works👏. I would appreciate if you add me to your PM list and if you would PM me the link to all your works

Dee