CINDRELLLA STORY (rajat tokas mugdha chapekar)RTMC FF PT22 updating-73 - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pranita1202

guys been to amritsar , manali trip from college got back on tuesday i'e 2day will update soon.

but now i m dying read other ff updates


ok dear...i hope u enjoyed the trip...but please update asap...we r waiting desperately...& plz give the long part...
Edited by sanyogitaprc - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sanyogitaprc


ok dear...i hope u enjoyed the trip...but please update asap...we r waiting desperately...& plz give the long part...

very same here.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sanyogitaprc


ok dear...i hope u enjoyed the trip...but please update asap...we r waiting desperately...& plz give the long part...

very same here
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Posted: 13 years ago
@sweetsanyo.
thanks 4 the banner and vm
Edited by pranita1202 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
guys firstly sign this petition to save rtmc show.do publicize it
here is the link -

http://www.change.org/petitions/colors-plz-telecast-rajat-mugdha-being-paired-24-frames-romantic-thriller-show#


here's the ud pls forgive spelling , n grammer mistake n caps . did it in a hurry


Edited by pranita1202 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 12


Sm=stepmom,naintara


Everyone strode towards the main door.

Sm- (rang the bell)open the door

Servants answered the door.Before they could inquire anything.

Naiantara surpassed them followed by the police. She entered the drawing room ,seeing this chaos everyone got off their seats

.Naiantara rushed towards ananya and raised her veil.She saw her faced with washed off liner in her eyes & slight pinkish color on her cheek.

Naiantara - ananya my baby. wat have they doneto you. how did they trick you!

Veer- Who are u & wat r u doing in my house

Police-who is veer

Veer-I'm

Police-there is warrant against u for kidnapping a mentally ill gal

Veer- who?

Police-MISS Ananya Khurana

Mr rai- officer, I'm a lawyer.There has been no kidnapping

Naiantara (She raised her voice pointing finger at Mr rai)- YOU planned everything

Mr rai-Stay in your limits. Officer miss ananya came her by her own will . tell them beta

Ananya- Yes I came myself

Mr rai- officer Ananya is an adult

Naiantara- But her condition(she signaled mukul)

Mukul- I'm her psychiatrist. I have all the reports to prove her condition is unstable

Mr rai- This only proves that miss ananya unstable. But it doesn't stop her from getting married.From now her husband Mr veer will take care of her treatment.

Naiantara -What!!!!!!!!!

Mr rai- U heard it right. The documents are already being signed ananya is now veer's wife.

Police- Your honour are they married ?

Judge confirmed. So the police apologized and left . Mr rai came to drop them out. also shasha & mukul had to leave .

Police- Sorry for the inconvenience

Mr rai- Its alright u were doing u r job.

Suddenly mr rai heard a voice calling him. He looked around someone was banging the car's window. He rushed towards the car & opened it.MS D'souza (NANnY) came out in haste & holding mr rai's hand asked "is the marriage done".

Mr rai- yes it is

Nanny- (heaved a sigh of relief) thank god my ananya will be safe

Naiantara was adamant not too leave without ananya. A police officer was requesting her to leave but she didn't budge

Police-madam pls come with me

Naiantara -I'm not going anywhere without my daughter.

"""""""Ananya my child did I do any bad things to u , have i ever mistreated u. I nurtured as my own.even if your condition was bad I never gave up on u""""

(giving the phoney the speech ,she went towards anu. But veer stood between them)

Veer-O that's why you kept her in one room for 4 yrs . drugged her, let her starve

Naiantara-she was ill . wat I did was for her own good. You don't have any clue abt the situation.anu my child I love u, I care for u. these people want u only for money.once they are done with u they will throw u out

Veer- U don't have to worry abt ananya .She is my wife now. I won't let anyone or anything hurt her.(anu smiled) Now u may leave

Police officer escorted her out .but while leaving she said


""""ananya you will regret this . when these people will show their true colors u will come back to u r mom.""""""""

Mr rai brought nanny inside. She was very happy and hugged anu.Ananya was delighted that her nanny is safe.

In anu's room

Nanny has cleanse her .she was wearing white skirt and a grey top with sweater. Her hair were frenzy.

Ananya-Did u see how he stood for me

Nanny- Sure I saw it

A-He said she is my wife now

N-Aren't u?

A-Yesterday he was so alienated towards me. So formal. Even told me if I wished to backout. I was worried if he disliked me

N -if he didn't want u , liked u .would he have married u?

A- Maybe after seeing me he was having second thoughts

N- Don't b silly . u have seen eachother now only. It will take time for u to warm up to eachother. You will get along eventually.i think he doesn't want to rush u

A-u think so

N -ofcourse

Outside in garden mr rai is with veer

Mr rai-she is just 20 but has seen a lot of hardship in her life.she is too naive. You must support her. . Ananya just wants some love

Veer- I will give her everything . make her comfortable in this house. All amenities will b provided to her. But love'...There is no love left in my heart to give to any other woman.

Ananya heavy heartedly bid adieu to nanny &mr rai. Mrs singh & seema assured them they will take care of ananya.

In study mrs singh, mr gupta,seema and manoj r sitting

Mrs singh- O got wat a mess. Press is gonna eat us alive. I can see tommorows headline. "business tycoon veer pratap singh elopes with a girl".gosh how I m gonna handle. I guess I m gonna go mad

Mr gupta- one mad is enough in the family.why u wanna join the league?

Mrs singh- I 'm not saying she is mad but a little weird. How on earth I'm gonna introduce her to the social cirle

Manoj- relax mom u don't have to

Seema- I don't understand why all of u are talking this way abt anu. The poor girl ill b in her room ,she won't trouble anyone. I guess u all should stop yapping abt u r reputation & think abt reestablishing singh industries

Mr guta-I m aware of it. Tommorow I have arranged a board meeting. I'm sure veer will unanimously voted MD of khurana industries. For now all of u take rest ,this much drama is enough 4 the day. I'll leave now.

Wannabies

They were sitting in there room .gia was surfing net

Gia-look Europe is so beautiful,can't wait to get there

(ria was lost in thoughts). Hey wat r u thinking

Ria- I feel bad 4 the girl even with all the money she had to marry without a proper dress & rituals. Then the charade pulled by her stepmom

Gia- I feel bad for chachu .after his wife leaving, he has to marry this ugly duckling.

Ria(sighed)- life isn't fair


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Veer is sitting at the pool side on the patio sofa set .Suddenly anu comes from behind and place her hand on his shoulder hesistantly.He gets startled and turns back

Ananya- I don't mean to scare u . I was just..

Veer- no need to apologize , I was engrossed in thoughts and u came in. anyway . pls sit down


(she sits at the edge of the sofa, he at other . both r facing straight n she is kinda smiling/ blushing)

Veer- (He just gave a mirthless smile )WE are couple now. So be relaxed. couldn't u sleep?

Ananya- For long time I have never been anywhere else my room.There is to much furniture in there so I feel crowded

Veer-Don't worry I will tell maid to get rid of it.It is my duty to make u comfy. Didn't we agree like that

Ananya-Marriage isn't a duty

Veer-( he got up) u shud come in . its cold outside

Ananya-I miss fresh air


.(while leaving he took off his jacket and put in on anu so she couldn't feel cold and began to leave.piyu wa watching this from the balcony.she got upset &went inside)

Ananya-I think people shouldn't marry to fulfil any obligation but for love.atleast I did for love

(veer was astound by her remark. He came and sat on side chair )

Veer- U don't have to pretend that u r in love with me

Ananya- I'm not pretending I'm telling the truth

Veer-how can u fall in love with a person whom u have met only once

Ananya- Ofcourse u can, my mom and dad fall in love with eachother this way.

AS for that matter I have seen u earlier

Veer- where

Ananya-At royals club During the polo match after party . U really played well .You even shook my hand and smiled at me.don't u remember

Veer- no

Ananya- I thought u didn't forgot me. I though after hearing my situation u came to my rescue like a hero

Veer-Hero is u who helped us without any selfish reasons not me

Ananya- I don't understand

Veer-never mind. Lets go inside

If u r afraid leave the lights on piyu does the same.

Ananya- R u sleeping in another room

Veer- no I'll crash on the couch in my study

Annaya-aren't married people suppose to sleep together

Veer- but our casse is different.get used to it

Ananya- u doing this coz u care abt me

Veer- why r u saying this

Ananya-Things happened suddenly,first we have to get to know eachother

Veer ' pls don't glorify me

Ananya- I m not .I m just saying u r very special 2 me. You r my prince for whom I have been dreaming abt my entire life. Now I think I should go and sleep .good night

Veer is dumbfounded by the pure words of love of this innocent girl .

Part-13

Edited by pranita1202 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
guys do criticize and give suggestions . writing after a while that why


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
😊😊ananya is really a serene soul., pure and pristine...😊😊
i just loved dis ud...⭐️
so long!
i was eagerly waiting.😃
veer is really responsible-😊
d way he defended any frm stepmom...is really adorable.
their convo around pool is really sweet😳.
i m really in love vid dis ananya😳...she is d most adorable, ma cute little princess.

SAD PART- veer's family ignoring her completely😡...i feel sorry for her...
her life is really merciful😭. i really want piyu and anu's bond to improve.
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...👏
thank god before they got them...marriage was completed...
the way veer came infront of SM to save anu...i toh loved it...😊
n anu to joined them...good girl...finally she raised her voice...for herself...i m proud of u...👏
thank god nanny is safe...
n all the family members are worried about press...they are thinking that couz of anu their name is going to runied...how can they think like this...😡
n veer is taking care of anu...but he doesn't love her...😭
the way he put his jacket on anu...that was so sweet...😳
n pihu is upset with this...dear anu is very nice...atleast give her a chance...
n the wannabies...plz someone wake them up from their la la land...😆
n gia anu is not ugly duckling...just wait let her recover then see...
she is the most beautiful girl...understand...😉
n the way anu talked n said about love n marriage...amazing...
even veer was dumbfound with girls word...😉
update soon...
luv u...😊

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