CINDRELLLA STORY (rajat tokas mugdha chapekar)RTMC FF PT22 updating-73 - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice one dear😊...

but now i am more worried for anu...she doesn't know that this marriage is just a deal for Singh family...& this 50 crore non-transferable money...oh no...she doesn't want money but...i hope it will not create problem for her in future...

& veer...i hope he will not behave rudely with anu...i don't want to see anu in pain now...she has suffered enough😭...now she deserves happiness😊...& i think veer is also hurt...hope they will be able to heal each others wounds of past😳...

plz update soon...eagerly waiting for their marriage...hope it will be completed before SM finding about this...
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Posted: 13 years ago
So sorry fr catching up la8
Awesome story
luvd it
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
plzzz update soon!!!!!!!!!!
cant wait hehe!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for update n pm
ohh god i feel very pity for innocent ananya some1 is referring her lottety n some engaging her for money. n she own don't have any interest in that money n property which gave her pain
poor girl don't knowing abt marriage contract
n veer is thinking anaya knowingly kept 50 crores non transferable
but thanks to mr. rai that he thought so much for ananya's security
thank god marriage is happening at last
hope it get completed before tht evil trio finds ananya

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Posted: 13 years ago

guys how about miss suri cruise playing piyu
Edited by pranita1202 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 11

A old woman is sitting the closed room she had placed her head on the edge of the bed was sitting on the floor.she seemed very exhausted and weak as she was deprived of food & water for the night.Suddenly the door unbolted she got scared, the evil trio entered .

stepmom- a day of diet is enough to wear off u r stubbornness or should I torture u more

Nanny- pls give me some water I m thirsty

Shasha- first tell us where did u hide anu then you'll get anything

Mukul- ladies ladies...why so harsh on poor womwn . shasha go and get some water

Shasha- but...

Mukul-do as I say (unwillingly she brought a bottle. Mukul gave to nanny and she drank it the entire bottle rapidly .mukul sat beside her)

Mukul-so ms d u served this house for so many years so now r u gonna betray us by harming the girl of the family

Nnny- I'm harming anu, u all r doing it. I 'm the only one in the house who thoroughly cares for her

Mukul -Oh how touchy,let me wipe my tears shasha get me a tissue(villain kahika)

So u r not gonna open u r mouth . f9 I know how to make u speak (he took his cigarette lighter out and placed it near nanny's cheek and lit it)

Mukul- now I m gonnna count till 3 if u won't speak up I m not responsible for the result.

1...2...&...

Nanny- f9 f9 I 'll tell u (mukul smirked at sm & shasha)

Sm-c'mon now tell

Nanny- u r too late my anu would have been by married now. She has escaped from her trap from now

Shasha- mom I think this oldie has gone chukkoo that's why she is speaking such rubbish

Nanny- no missy I have not gone chuckoo. u all r gonna ,when u will see anu's hubby & family she married into.

Sm- tell to whom she is gone?

Shasha- u believe her bogus claims

Mukul-shasha keep quite. Tell us to whom she is been married?

Nanny- To veer singh

Shasha- veer singh, mom I saw his photo in magazine would it b the same guy

Sm-Singh they r the other share holder of khurrana industries.

Mukul-Is it possible that anu is with them

Sm- Anu is a gold mine anyone can let her in. damn we have to rush . we have take police to singh mansion

Shasha- But mom yesterday u were hesitant abt the involvement of police

Sm-Don't use u r brain. They r singh family I can't take my goons to their house

Mukul- I'll arrange all the papers regarding anu's mental condition& shasha take this oldie with us else she might alert them.

At singh mansion

Inside the bedroom seema and the wanabies are getting anu ready. They gave her green & red chudidar dress to wear after along discussion coz saree wasn't option as she wouldn't be able to handle it. Lehenga n choli is gonna be too heavy so that too is out of equation.So they decided on chudidar.ananya is wearing the dress i.e. chudidar &salwar and standing in front of mirror and seema is fixing her dress

Annaya- I know I m too skinny the dress won't fit properly

Seema- Don't worry I'll do the fitting (she is stiching it with needle and thread accidently the needle pricks anu) O I'm so sorry

Ananya- Its ok never mind it didn't hurt(poor gal has became numb coz of the drugs)

Gia -lets do the makeup

They made ananya sit and surrounded her and started doing the makeup(frankly speaking painting her) . Gia applied thick eyeliner and black eye shadow to anu's eyes , Ria was applied foundation, compact,pink blush etc. Piyu was peeking in the room Anu saw her and smiled at her but she ran away. Finally they applied burgundy color lipstick on her.

Seema -Wat abt the hair .their is no time to tidy it up. Lets just tie it up

Wannabies- Finally done.can't do anything better then that unless u get a plastic surgeon or Ginie

Seema- zip it gal

Wannabie-mom help us to pick dress

Seema- Why do u need 2 dress up

Wannabies-C'mom someone has to look good at the wedding

(they dragged seema along with them leaving anu alone)

Ananya got off &went to the wash room .She was bewilder to see her image in the mirror.She said to herself "what is it all ?why I m looking like this ".in turmoil she untied her hair & she splashed water all over her face her liner started running and all the makeup spread

Mrs singh enters the room searching for anu but she did't found her there as she was gonna leave the room seema enters.

Mrs singh -where is anu.?

Seema- "she is not here ? "

MRS SNGH - DO U SEE HER ANYWHERE HER?

Seema-she was her when I left to help the gals

Mrs singh- why do u leave her alone

Seema-did u check the washroom

Mrs singh denied so both of them went towards the washroom door .It was locked from inside.Mrs singh knocked the door but no reply. Hearing all the knocking the wannabies came from the adjoint room

Mrs singh-anu pls open the door

Gia-omg wat is this psycho upto!

Ria-gia wat if u said earlier came true if she kils herself

Seema- both of u shut up its coz of u I had to leave her alone

Suddenly the door is opened a gal with all spreaded makeup comes out. Her liner is running

Mrs singh-wat is this anu

Ananya- (sadly) all the colors make me look different. I was looking like a clown so I washed it off

Mrs singh- O dear wat r we gonna do the judge has arrived

Seema- Ma go out .I will take care of everything.(mrs singh leaves)

Gia- Mom wat r u gonna do she is looking like a raccoon

Sema- Gia if u can't help just leave

Gia-f9 mom,I will get the makeup remover

Seema- We have no time for that . Just give me the jug of water and some towels..

In the drawing everyone is present . groom and bride are sitting beside eachother across the table judge is sitting.bride is in ghungat(veil)

Ria- Mom u r great! wat an idea OF GHUNGHAT to concile the makeup mishap

Gia- duh ! it is no to conceal the makeup mishap but avoid chachu from seeing her bride.wat if he backsout after seeing her then my trip to London will b cancelled as dad will not b able to pay 4 it.

Ria-poor chachu first that witch &now this zombiebride

Seema-last time I'm telling you to shut up or else I will throw you off the wedding.

Judge-miss ananya are u getting into this matrimony without any pressure and by u r own will

Ananya- yes

Judge-and u mr veer.(veer's eyes r looking 4 piyu but she wasn't there)

Veer- huh! Yes (ananya smiled)

A fleet of police cars and a BMW stood b4 the mansion . stepmom ,shasha ,mukul came out of it (locking nanny in the car)with some police officers.

Part-12


Edited by pranita1202 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
By pranita1202 at 2012-01-08






this is anu's attire . i know it is not fancy as anu is still not recovered .and atmost 7 days have past till the story started ..so hope u guys understand.

btw see piyu's pic on pg 20

Edited by pranita1202 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dear...here i am the first one to comment😊...

awesome update...that dress is beautiful...

but what is that makeup mishap 😔...anu would have looked better without makeup 😊 but now how will others react?...

poor nanny 😭...& now that evil trio has reached there 😲...oh no...

plz plz update soon...eagerly waiting to see what happen next...
Edited by sanyogitaprc - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful part
loved the attire n piyu is so cute
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update!!
they tortured granny to know abt ananya. but nanny told them little early
poor ananya every1 is playing with her emotions😭
😭n these gia n dia playing role of her another step sisters?😡
liked anu's dress
very pity tht seema pierce her needle n worrying abt canceling of her trip to london🤢
veer shuld teach all a good lesson
but he also not interest in all this or anware of it
hope their marriage completes before evil trio enter in to singh's mansion😲
Edited by shruja - 13 years ago

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