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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Asha_ArSha

loved the update...loved how u explained all the relations...

Kriaansh...Swaron...Krisha...Sharey...Kriyam...Reyam...all were cute...

update soon😊

thnx
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 21Neha21

awsme update..

it was realy mind blowing...
i realy loved d scene where kria cleaned rey's wound..dat was so adorable..
best of luck for ur exams..


thnx a lot
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Eyesfriendly

loved the update...


didn't get a pm 😔

sorry n thnx n next time pakka pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anamika143

sorry yaar recently i hd my exms so was not able to comment ...so i will give a combined comment...i love the kriyaansh swaron tu tu mai mai...n rey n swayam changing roles...swayam bcoming mastikhor n rey-serious...n yes theres only 1 person who cn handle rey n its kriya...

n ha i will eagerly wait fr 20th march fr ur exms 2 get over i always get excited wen i get ur update ka pm...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thnx a lot
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyaanshd3

res
srry for "res"...
unres...
amazing yaar!! bechara rey!!!!😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey i got ur pm [ may be bymistakely ] but i really enjoyed it thx 4 d pm i hope ill get d others soon :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sharon looking at the two beds in the room..
sh(loudly) : i dont want to sleep on different bed...awww sharon baby is scared...😆😆😆

sw: why?? r u scared to sleep alone?? don't worry..!! ghost bhi tumhe dekhkar bhaag jayenge...n giggled...😆 hey thats funny..😆😆😆😆

sharon shot a dagger look at swayam...

but rey interupted
r: n agar wo phir bhi nahi bhaage toh swayam toh hai na u can sleep with him...😉😉 hmmm so rey ke dimag mainnn😈😈😈

at this both swayam n sharon in unison " shut up rey..."why shut up ... thats a great idea...

r: see u both thinks like same y dont u both try...good idea reyy

sh: shut up rey or i will kill u...
(n started running after rey in the room)

just then kria stopped them...
k: sharon room mein bhaagna band karo warna chot lag jaayegi here comes our mother teresa...

sharon n rey stopped n stood at their places like a small kids ...n started looking at kria...😆woowww kria will be a great mum...😆😆😆

..


with thinking that she took a stool n stood on it n tried to balance herself on it but the stool just slipped n sharon's hands flew in the air n a loud screamed released from her throat...she was about about to fall but a strong hand caught her in the middle of her fall...👏👏 noo prize for guessing awww😭😭😭😭

sharon's eyes were shut...kriyaansh came running to her.. she opened her eyes ..she was in our majnu's hand..she was continuosly looking in swayam's eyes ..they both were looking at each other...their look look hawa hawa session was on...but both were brought back on earth by kria's voice..

k: sharon tum thik toh ho na??

sh: mai bilkul thik hu...

(still in swayam's arms.)

k: tum.. tum sambhal kar kaam nahi kar sakti...kitni baar bola hai apna dhyan rakhna seekho but tum toh tum ho na... sunti kaha ho kisi ki...as i said they all are living wit mother teresa young version...

sw: kria tumhari little sis sach mein 'little' hai...kuch bhi thik se nahi kar sakti...yeah he can't live a day without irritating her😆😆😆

sh: what do u mean by that... mai apna kaam khud kar sakti hu...ohhh reallyyy...


sh: tum...tum na maha khadoos ho...we all know sharon but i believe u'll turn this maha khadoos into a romeo...

sw: ek aur word bola na toh mai tumhe gira dunga...

sh: whatever... maha khadoos...

lo...!!! he droped sharon down (he he🤣
🤣)...although she wasn't seriously hurt but she was angry on him...hawww thats bad *fake anger*

she ran after him like tom after jerry...😆😆

r: let me help u...

k: no need i can do it myself...

r: but i can help u in arranging ur wardrobe...how u can help in arranging girls wardrobe hmmm somethings fishy...

k: look this is girls wardrobe..n exactly how can u help me... exactly my point...

r: look as the matter of fact i am very dashing n good looking...i have many girlfriends n i have also reached to their rooms n wardrobe u see... 👏👏

k: gross!!! ... mr. reyansh singhania... u know what?? u r a gross...!!! i agree ... this is sick...

k: n as the matter of fact i don't find u dashing n good looking...hence i will do it myself...woww i love ur snappy tongue kria...
with that kria started to do her work...

😲😲rey smirked at her ..he was totally loving her attitude... he laughed at himself as in reality he never went beyond his limits..he is not that kind of person what he just said now , he just exaggerated about himself to her...to know how she reacts to it n now he loves her unexpected reaction...wowww he is the eight wonder of the world exaggerating himself to be a play boy...

rey went back to placing the books in another cupboard...

swaron were still fighting...n running after eachother...

martin came in their room...to see if they need any help...but he was shocked...😲😲😲

he again shouted in his signature shout more than extra dramatical tone "HEY BHAGWAAN" 😲😲😲

all four stopped their respective works n looked in his direction...

r: now what martin ?? u discovered what new??

m: oh i was shocked to see swayam baba running like jerry... n u working seriously... 😆😆😆wowww martin kya timing hai

both swayam n rey gave him "what the hell " look...

m: what?? u both definitely need docs...

just then sharon stepped beside martin n said...

sh: ya u r right , this maha khadoos definitely need a good doc...
n hi fived with martin which he gladfully reciprocated..👍🏼👍🏼

k: if u r going to get a doc then plz take this creature named "reyansh singhania" also with you...he needs more than swayam...👏👏OMG this is something to remember all my life ...😆😆😆😆👏👏👏👏

rey's face was like someone bashed him badly...
now rey's ego was hurt...

r: look miss whatever...!! if u think like that then its u who needs the doctor most...all the the girls of the world go gaga over me ...
u should feel highly prevailage to be reside here with me in the same house...do u get that...??

k: oh really!! (sarcastically) i really like flying in the heaven... to live here with reyansh singhania , the charming god...!!😆😆👏🤣🤣wow kria ur great... charming god...

as soon as kria uttered these words...all three (swaron n martin) started to laugh like maniac...as no one even dared to retort back to rey like that... even he couldn't stop himself from laughing...😆😆


sh: lets get back to work guys we have lot to do...

the atmosphere was light one...everyone was indulge in their work...when one loud scream snatched all the attraction...

it was sharon's scream..she had hurt her leg in the process of moving a suitcase...
all ran towards her ,although there was no bleeding yet it seems a cramp has occured in her ankle...

she was screaming at the top of her voice...

kria calmed her down ... n said

k(very caringly): sharon its ok, i will cure it ok...don't cry... everything will be fine... i am here na... kiddo!!!

sharon instantly stopped crying... it was the beauty of their relation ...kria knew what to do n when to do...n sharon would follow her with full faith...
when kria would call her " kiddo" it was very soothing to her ears..she felt like she is near her mom... n kria is indeed her mom n dad both...awww thatsss soo sweeet...


kria was about to apply oinment on her ankle but sharon cried in fear ..

sh: kria it will hurt..

k: kiddo i haven't started applying oinment yet... don't worry !! i here only na...!!

all reyam n martin stood there watching the whole scene they were totally overwelmed to see their loving relationship...exactly my currrent state ...




he took another frame which contained krisha sister's childhood pic...he guessed it easily its theirs..

r: hey itni fat ladki kaun hai??

kria looked at where he is pointing...she raised her eyebrows...

k: itni moti bhi nahi hai..

r: arey iski nose toh dekho kitni pluffy hai...

k: nahi hai..

r: hai...ears elephant jaise hai...

k: nahi hai...na iski ears elephant jaise hai n na iski nose pluffy hai...

r: oh really let me see ...
with that he came forward n pressed kria's nose...

r: see i told u its pluffy...😊😊
😊
with that kriyansh both burst out laughing...thatsss cuteee

rey was again lost in her way of laughing ...her laugh seems like a sweet song to him...

swayam noticed rey staring at kria..
he coughed a bit which was enough to bring back real rey...awww poor baby ... can't even stare properly at his lady love...

rey was back at his work...

he started nailing at the wall ...kria was still laughing n rey stared her from the corner of his eyes ...in this process he lost his concentration n hammered his hand...

rey shouted in pain...

swayam came to him n rey saw his hand bleeding ...swayam took him to the living room while kria followed...
swayam shouted "call the doc martin"...

martin hurriedly called the doc... kria was amazed the way swayam n martin were behaving...


he cried in pain almost on the top of his voice...he slapped the doc who was trying to dress his wound, pooor doc... it must have been hard ... he wouldn't let him do a single thing...even sharon was shocked to see his condition...the doc was somehow able to give him the injection of tetnus but rey wouldn't let him clean his wound...rey shut his eyes closed...

doc has almost gave up but kria took up to volunteer...
kria was a bit surprised to see him sweating, she held his hands ...while rey opened his eyes...n looked at kria who weeped the tear that ran through rey's cheek... while looking at his face...kria took cotton n started to clean the wound ..

with the first touch on wound rey started to shriek... and about to look at his wound but kria interupted him by addressing him as "reyaansh"... he looked at her face...
till now kria understood that rey has fear of blood...
she tried to divert his mind...she continued...

k: reyaansh... u didn't told me what were you doing in club on new years eve night...

she knew it was a lame question but she couldn't come out with any other question at that time..

rey started to respond her...

r: that day was newyears eve so me n swayam went to celebrate in that club...

he answered her blankly n lamely..while kria continued to dress his wound ...unconscious to him...he was just looking at kria blankly...

k: what's the name of your 28th girlfriend??

r: ummm...

he tried to think but was unable to remember his girlfriend's name...

all doc , sharon, swayam n martin stood quiet where they were ...and looked at rey who was busy thinking and also looked at kria whose face was towards rey but her hands were still dressing the wounds...

r: i donot remember her name...
(again lamely answered)

k: try to remember.. i know u can do it...

r: her name... her name...was...

kria interupted...

k: doc its done...!!

while doc and all other looked at this little girl who almost made impossible thing possible that is handling rey at such situation...

sw: thank god at least its done...

doc: who is she ?? never met her before...

sw: doc she is kria n she is sharon ..they shifted here today only..

doc: you r such a great child...god bless you...!!

while sharon chirped in between
sh: see i told you ...kria is the best...😊😊

m: ya indeed...😲

now rey was also in his senses... he was normal now...as the fear went away...

he looked at kria with greatfullness n said "thanks"

which she reciprocated by her sweet n caring smile...😊😊yup she did an impossible job😊😊😊😊

m: its pastry time... kids...i'll go n make some yummy pastry for u all...

r: i want ice-cream n burger too...

martin turned back..n said
m: mr. reyaansh u r not getting any ice- cream at this hour of evening...u get that straight...and here comes our hitler chef😆😆😆😆

martin n swayam: we are not ready to handle your sneezing nose...

at this doc commented : me too!! not ready to accept your one more slap...😆😆

rey made a baby face n said "sorry doc uncle i didn't do it intentionally"

d: i know beta ...

r: now can i get ice- cream...😉

all in unison "NO !!!"

this shuts rey's mouth for future arguements...

and seeing his face all burst out laughing ...
while rey just frowned..😆


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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome funny updt
loved itt
only kriya can handle her
as she s the best..!!!
loved kriyaansh n swaron nohk-johk
they r funny
+ martin ..lol..he's soo sweet..lol
will wait till 20th march
good luck with ur exams
see yaaa =)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: _Monu_

wow awesome funny updt

loved itt
only kriya can handle her
as she s the best..!!!
loved kriyaansh n swaron nohk-johk
they r funny
+ martin ..lol..he's soo sweet..lol
will wait till 20th march
good luck with ur exams
see yaaa =)


thnx a lot

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