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magical_mania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#751

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha
Aww mania dis was da awsome part...sachi bohat hi jyada uttery buttery surprise tha 😃

n da song which u used in dis update is my fav 4m jane tu na jane mai...n moreover imaging arsha on dis best part

Aww kunwar kissed her on cheeks...dats shoo chweet...n hahaha kunwar's delima on its nt a date...i love dat

awww...shaffy i my mood has lighten up...i could imagine your face😆😆

woww...thats kinda co incidence...ur fav song became a part of my FF...hope this added to your enjoyement level😃

hahahahha poor kunwar he has to get over his dillema soon😊

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magical_mania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#752

Originally posted by: kuhu_Arsha
amazinggg,,,,,,,,,,,,,it was really mindblowing update,,,
jst luv it

thank you dear😊

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Aditi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#753

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Screamsss...

what was that Manu!!! Was that a plan to kill me!!! OMG!!

How you can write such a deadly update which left me hyper-active...

It is SPLENDIDLY Amazingly outstanding update...👏

from where I should start...hayeee...😍

He came to her house to pick her up...she was looking stunning...OMG!! I can imagine Amar's condition after looking her in that green dress...😍

Kunwar was convincing himself that it's not a date...IT IS A DATE MY DUMBO KUNWAR...you were looking at her..feeling tickles...couldn't resist her..OMG!! Manu how you managed to create that burning sensation in readers...this is one unique quality...I have to take classes from you for romantic updates..as you can see I always fail to move ahead from a hug...hahahahaha🤣🤣

Then Shakti's curiosity about the dinner...she is one smart girl..she got it that why he took her to dinner..hahahaha..and jhalla Kunwar still saying it's not a date...

MANU!!! How you can show Shakti that sensuous while eating hahaha...haye...don't get me wrong but that was a salivating moment for Kunwar...OMG!!! Mera kal raat ka non-veg bhoot nahi utra...🤣🤣

and then dance...hayeee...this song is one of my favorite...they danced on it..I can imagine the dim lights and ArSha there...

😍

Their proximity..ufff..I need a bucket of water...I am feeling like watching haye rama..☺️

He spoke it..I feel home..matlab ladka toh gya...😉

she showed coziness and comfort..it mean ladki bhi fasi...official kar de...😉

Then they drove back..itni jaldi...😡

she walked towards home...but Mr. hawt to handle followed her...now comes the spine electrified moment..she was in tears...then acceptance to being close...a tender kiss on cheek...and what an conceptualization..sunrise...I had goosebumps ...what a beautiful interpretation...🤗

Manu!!! Hatts off...really you have made a lifetime pankha of urs...

How you managed to write anf think like this...you are my divine writer...LOVE is your forte...😊

I am feeling like living love right now...😍

Thanku so much sardar for this update..🤗

As a reader of this wonderful story, I owe you my salute...⭐️

Love you forever...🤗

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magical_mania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#754

Originally posted by: Roxxy47
Superb part 👏...
Liked it how Amar was all the time saying "This is not a Date" 😆...

Aww he is so sweet 😍...

Loved it ❤️...

N thanks for the pm 😊.

ur welcome 4 d PM part

yesh he is damn sweet😍

thanx 4 d review😊

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magical_mania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#755

Originally posted by: yogini64
Poor rey . . . . Ye to pura pagal ho gya 😆
& his being on time & arranging dinner,,, making her feel special is already making kriya feel suspicious . . . 😉
awww . . . Lovely song 😍
& his thoughts in between . . . 😃
thats the sweetest line he said to her 👏
time to drop her home back 😔
awww . . . She's cryin & overwhelmed wid his efforts... 😛
sunrise!!! . . . . . Itni raat tak bahar ghoomi ghoomi kar rahe they 😉

awww...yogini was waiting for your comment

buh i think u didn' like this part

coz pure comment me u used the word REY instead of AMAR 😆😆

its okay feelings is what matter most😃

hahahahhahaha pyaar diwana hota hai

kuch to kar hi rahe honge😉

thanx 4 d review😃😃

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magical_mania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#756

Originally posted by: kitttu1309.
awsome update...
Thankx 4 d pm
update soon

ur welcome😊

thanx 4 d review

will update in few minutes😃

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magical_mania

@magical_mania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#757

Originally posted by: Asha_ArSha

Hey Mania, sorry for not commenting on earlier topics

lovely update, love how slowly ArSha r falling for each other😍

its okay😊

m glad you liked this fiction😃

thanx 4 reviewing😊

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ash

@CrazyGirl.21

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#758

soo beautifully written mania !!! 😃

especially the song prt...i loved it a lot.. do updt soon 😃

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magical_mania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#759

Originally posted by: akanksha_arsha
aaawww... Such a cuteee update... Aawww... I loveddd it... Especially der this unofficial date...aaawww... Nd a bbbiiiggg wala SORRRYYY to u mania... Its d first te i read ur stories as i couldnt read earlier bcz of lack of tym... Nw finaly finished of wid ur all the updates... Loved them a lllooottt ya... Waise b i usualy love arsha stories even more rather than kriyaansh... Hehehe lolzzz... Keep going dear... All The Best... :)

AWww...this one indeed is the ever sweet comment🤗

its ok akanksha

i hope u can take out your time now😃

same is the case with me

if Kriyaansh is my heart then Arsha is my soul☺️

thank you 4 d review and wishes

❤️