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magical_mania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#761

Originally posted by: akanksha_arsha
nd yeah... Congratulations for ur 100 pages... Keep going like this girl... :)

thank you akanksha😊

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magical_mania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#762

Originally posted by: Isshh
awww
so cute n amazing
loved it 2 d core
n 100 pages already done
ab toh update krna hian

hahahahha yesh dear updating in few mins

thanx for loving it😃

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magical_mania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#763

Originally posted by: achuAR
Awww...
so cuteee

thanx achu😊

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magical_mania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#764

Originally posted by: kvarsha
nice updatee..
thnx 4 pm😃

thanx😃

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magical_mania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#765

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Screamsss...
what was that Manu!!! Was that a plan to kill me!!! OMG!!

How you can write such a deadly update which left me hyper-active...

It is SPLENDIDLY Amazingly outstanding update...👏

from where I should start...hayeee...😍

He came to her house to pick her up...she was looking stunning...OMG!! I can imagine Amar's condition after looking her in that green dress...😍

Kunwar was convincing himself that it's not a date...IT IS A DATE MY DUMBO KUNWAR...you were looking at her..feeling tickles...couldn't resist her..OMG!! Manu how you managed to create that burning sensation in readers...this is one unique quality...I have to take classes from you for romantic updates..as you can see I always fail to move ahead from a hug...hahahahaha🤣🤣

Then Shakti's curiosity about the dinner...she is one smart girl..she got it that why he took her to dinner..hahahaha..and jhalla Kunwar still saying it's not a date...

MANU!!! How you can show Shakti that sensuous while eating hahaha...haye...don't get me wrong but that was a salivating moment for Kunwar...OMG!!! Mera kal raat ka non-veg bhoot nahi utra...🤣🤣

and then dance...hayeee...this song is one of my favorite...they danced on it..I can imagine the dim lights and ArSha there...

😍

Their proximity..ufff..I need a bucket of water...I am feeling like watching haye rama..☺️

He spoke it..I feel home..matlab ladka toh gya...😉

she showed coziness and comfort..it mean ladki bhi fasi...official kar de...😉

Then they drove back..itni jaldi...😡

she walked towards home...but Mr. hawt to handle followed her...now comes the spine electrified moment..she was in tears...then acceptance to being close...a tender kiss on cheek...and what an conceptualization..sunrise...I had goosebumps ...what a beautiful interpretation...🤗

Manu!!! Hatts off...really you have made a lifetime pankha of urs...

How you managed to write anf think like this...you are my divine writer...LOVE is your forte...😊

I am feeling like living love right now...😍

Thanku so much sardar for this update..🤗

As a reader of this wonderful story, I owe you my salute...⭐️

Love you forever...🤗

Storing for the last coz its indeed a special one🤗

No, Adi how can I kill you you are to my SAMBA * i want a muahz sign* 😆😆

hahahahha this is called revenge😡

if u can make me hyper active everytime just by your review then y not the time to pay back😆

i hope you love this revenge😊

I so wanna c all this to be real and Amar's jaw droppind to the ground🤣🤣

hahahhaha no ways i should bow down to you in this regard

you know its easy to write a hawt update than a sweet one

the way you portray Hug in your updates compensates for all these lovey dovey things n i mean it

☺️

hahahahaha adi yesterday you made me fall from the sofa...but dun worry i've tightened my grip on my chair this tym...but what was that salivating moment...🤣🤣

you are making me go BONKERS 🤣

hahahahahha hamara dimaag should go under various lab chechs

i'm telling you it's not at awl gud for OTHERS HEALTH🤣

i know you like this song and it's one of the reason i added this plus it was adding stars to the situation...atleast for KUnwar...jiske saamne ladki khadi hai

still he is singing KAHI TO HOGI WO 🤣🤣

ab toh pakka sabse joote padne wale hai 😆😆😆😆😆😆

hahahhaha yesh u r right ladka to gaya buh ladkiyan you know na...we are frenz...chalo special friends hehehehhe

itni jaldi offiial kaise kardu...abhi to tadpana hai sabko

EVEL LAUGH

🤣🤣🤣🤣

awww...adi aaj tojhpar pyaar lutane ka mann karing

but i have to control public place hai🤣🤣

Buh for now 🤗 isi se kaam cha le

thankyou darls 4 marking my heart with your loving comment😆😃

LOVE is in the air🤣

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magical_mania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#766

M back again😃

Sabse pehle jaadu ki jhappi 🤗 for all my reviewers

u guyz deserve a lot❤️

A Special THANKYOU for my spamming queens

aromakriyansh (Sowie i don't know your name) , cookie, misha (Born2Dance) and himani😊

apology if i m leaving some one

As per the promise here you go with another update

Luv

Mania❤️

Edited by magical_mania - 13 years ago

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magical_mania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#767

UPDATE 15

Chadi mujhe yaari teri aisi
Jaise daaru desi
Khatti meethi batein hain nashe si
Jaise daaru desi

Ladkhadane lagi mushkurane lagi
Bewajaah har jagaah aane jaane lagi
Tu mujhe main tujhe
Jo bhi ho dil me woh khul ke bataane lagi

[Amar' POV]

5 most beautiful days or may be…..

1^st Day

We were on a trip to Goa for some d3 shoot sequence. Poor Shakti, had fallen down. Normally unscathed but not this time. I was always there to help, mostly to keep her company when she needed it.

"So you're crepe will take one day more to get off" I asked, as I was at her room dressing her ankle. She had her leg propped up on a small pillow, as she nibbled light on the cap of a pen put beside her. A rare habit she had of doing only when she was distracted or thinking hard about something in particular she looked up at me, staring wide-eyed, as if she was embarrassed to be caught.

"Thinking hard about something?"

"Yeah, I suppose this is last night for my pain, as no worries on it screwing up the healing process." She assured me.

[Shakti's POV]

Kunwar still lightly blamed Archie for my broken ankle, if it wasn't for him, I wouldn't have fallen out of the stage during dance with him.

But in Kunwar knew Archie hadn't intended for that to happen, but the moment was too good of an opportunity to pass up revenge. So Kunwar teamed up with Maccie and Shan and they got their revenge, and they got it good. Suddenly, TONIGHT started playing, and Kunwar's phone vibrated along with the tune.

"Uhm, I think Enrique is having a concert in your pants." I teased.

[Amar's POV]

"Oh!" Iexclaimed as I realized that it was my phone. I pulled it out from my front pocket and glanced at it quickly to see who exactly was calling. It read SHAN in bold letters across the front and I flipped it open to answer. "Hey Shan, was sup?"

"Archie just got out of the shower and he knows it was. Just calling to give you a hands up. He is storming around the room right now, looking for you, but it seems as though he found but you're at Shakti's room. I'd run bro."

"Thanks," I said into the phone as I closed it, packing up my stuff at the same time.

Shakti crossed her arms across her chest, and huffed out a sigh. "What did you do this time?" she questioned as if I always get into trouble.

"Well, I certainly did not put pink food coloring in Archie's shampoo knowing well enough that he'd dumb enough to use it during his shower. I mean, how sneaky do you think I m Shakti? Have some trust. Revenge? Who cares about that?" I shrugged my shoulders.

"U didn't!" Shakti screeched, with amusement hidden her voice. She laughed "I think turning Archie's hair pink, was truly the ultimate plan of revenge against him."

I walked towards the door and grabbed the handle before responding "Yeah, I did do it but that was Shan calling me to warn me so until I'm sure Archie doesn't want me to beat me up anymore, I'm gonna lay low." I said with a slight chuckle.

She laughed. "Hope u make it tomorrow," she said with fake enthusiasm. "Kunwar?" she called out to me just before I left. I turned around in the door way and walked back towards her. "C'mere, closer," she instructed as I happily obliged. I was completely caught off guard when she bent forward to hug me, and kissed me on the forehead.

"That's a thanks for everything you've done."

"For turning Archie's hair pink or for helping with the crepe?" I questioned.

"Both, always both," was her reply.

"May be u should go dancing with Archie more often…" I said, only as a joke. She reached behind her to grab a pillow to chuck at me, but her aim was off.

"Darn," she mumbled. "Don't you have to make daring escape now?"

I snapped my fingers together, as if forgetting about the reason for leaving in first place. "Right, I probably should leave now." I said, walking back towards the door, and then shutting it behind me.

[Shakti's POV]

"Kunwar, you're something else…"

"Get out of the bike now and take your beating like a men Amar!" I heard Archie's blooming voice from down the street. I just heard the bike pick-up speed and take off. "Damn it!"

I guessed that Kunwar had gotten always after all. I corrected myself; Kunwar really is one in a million.

2^nd Day

[Shakti's POV]

5, the number of washings it took for Archie's hair color to return to its natural brown color. It was a bright sunny day in Goa. As all the sequences of the day had been shot. It was time for a volleyball match in mid-evening between the male star cast and the production team which involved others as well.

The final round would be played a little differently, as a best out of 5 game, and so far boys team had two games. This could be the final one with a score of 23-24 with boys team winning, all Siddharth sir has to do was miss his serve, and the point would be ours. Kunwar had always been a sports-y type of guy playing a range of sports for the time he was lad.

Siddharth sir bounced the ball a few times, waiting for the referee to blow his whistle, signaling that he was now able to serve.

He took a few steps, and the referee finally blew his whistle, signaling that he was now able to serve. He threw the ball up nice and high and jumped to hit it as it started to make its decent down, sending the ball flying over the net, into the court. Kunwar was ready in the back row, passing it up to the Archie who set it outside left for Kunwar's attack, but the other team was able to stop Kunwar's fierce hit.

The rally continued this way for at least another minute; neither team seemed willingly to give up the point.

"Come on Amar, do something!" Sam boomed from the stands.

"Kunwar…Kunwar..." I started to chant and soon others joined in with me. It wasn't too long before almost everyone in the stands had joined in. It was the first time I liked the name Kunwar from other's mouth. The loudness of the voices just kept cresending up.

You could tell boys' bodies were wanted to give up, to give in to the other team. Sweat was pouring down from their faces as they ran all across the court chasing the ball.

[Amar's POV]

"U can do it Kunwar!" Shakti shouted.

"Remember what I'd told you, and u can win this!" she was the captain of her volleyball team during her school days, so asking for techniques were apt.

I stole a glance up at Shakti, and knew exactly what she was thinking about. The next set, I free-balled it over, giving the other team a nice easy set up. Just as Tahir Sir jumped to hit the ball, I did too, blocking the ball sending it back down onto his side of the court.

Shakti, along with Sneha, Sam, Alisha, Vinti and Priyanka ran down onto the court to embrace US. "Oh my God, U did it!" Shakti shrieked. In a second, her arms were wrapped tight around me, and I snaked my arms around her.

"I'm actually feeling forgiving today, so dinner and movie at my place!" Archie exclaimed out of excitement and with that Archie and I hugged. "Let's head on over to my place to figure out what to eat," he suggested.

"You guys all go ahead, we'll meet with you later." I said as I wanted to tell Shakti something.

The others packed up all their belongings and headed over to Archie's room, leaving Shakti and me behind. I leaned forward to take Shakti's hand in my own, and she happily placed hers there for mine.

"So what is that you wanted me alone for?" Shakti questioned after the court had been deserted.

"You'll find out at 80'clock tomorrow," I said with a smug look on my face.

She looked me in the eye and I couldn't help but smile. Suddenly, it seemed as though 8 wouldn't come soon enough for us.

Will meet you all on thursday or friday

till then keep commenting😉

Luv

Mania❤️

Edited by magical_mania - 13 years ago

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magical_mania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#768

Originally posted by: shiksha_03
amazing update...pls continue soon

thankyou😊

have continued😃

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Akanksha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#769

okay... mania.. on a serius note... update was really awesoommmeee... 😳

lyk.. it was cutee... simply cute... 😳

bt 1 complaint... why u didnt pm me...?????????? 😭 😭 😕

this is sooo not fair... 😕

plzzz pm me yaad se next time...

nd yeah will be waiting for thursday n friday...

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Yogini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#770

Originally posted by: magical_mania

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awww...yogini was waiting for your comment

buh i think u didn' like this part

coz pure comment me u used the word REY instead of AMAR 😆😆

its okay feelings is what matter most😃

hahahahhahaha pyaar diwana hota hai

kuch to kar hi rahe honge😉

thanx 4 d review😃😃

holy shit . . . . Finally maine ye galti kar di . . . . 😔
amar ko rey likh diya . . . Aur shaku ko kriya 😆
sweety clg shuru ho gye hai shayad isiliye dimag upar niche ho gya hai 🤣

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