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..Damsel..

@..Damsel..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#301

loved the update...

and love the atmosphere you have created...the relationship Khushi shares with everybody seems to be so warm and perfect...I understand Arnav's jealousy, because she fits into his family more than he does himself...

waiting for the next part...continue soon

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#302

wow awsum update

beautifully written plzz cont soon x

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Vika

@vikadesigirl

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#303

OMG your chapters keep on getting HOTTER and HOTTER!! by the day... damn tat was amazing update... loved Arhi encounter.. and finally Khushi making Aakash realizing his love for Payal and ohh hw sweet Anjali... got a proposal.. and what the... Khushi is only 16?? please don't tell me Arnav is 10 years her senior? luking forward to the next uD thanx for pm dearie

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-Garima-

@-Garima-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#304

Aww, one of my favorite updates so far! (:

I can't tell you how much I'm enjoying this story! It's soo intriguing, every time a chapter ends I always think about what would happen in the next! Arnav's aggressiveness is so fiesty, I think Khushi should give him a piece of her mind some day so he understands that manhandling isn't always the best option, although I really do enjoy this feisty Arnav! ;) loll. Akash & Payal are so cute <3 I did feel bad for Arnav at the end where he thinks that he's been replaced by Khushi, I hope they have a decent conversation about this situation in the next part! Can't wait to read it! (:

--Garima

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monkeydog18

@monkeydog18

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#305

Loved the little arhi romance in beginning!! Big age difference wow! And poor Arnav- baby your truly needed!! Thanks for pm

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Maira

@MairaKhan1180

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#306

My love for this story increases with every chapter you write:)

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thecraze92

@thecraze92

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#307

omg i love this FF! perfect ❤️

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arshia

@ashvez

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#308

@ Munchy,

This FF has become my personal fav.I am so enjoying it..ASR- The Brute...is creating a turmoil with Khushi' s senses...Just 16 and so Naiive.

It's beautiful.

Always love ur writing skills.Muanh!! Hugs!

Ash.

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queenie11

@queenie11

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#309

i just love this story to death

i think it is brilliant how you write the arnav khushi interactions, with the intensity, distance they experience, unconscious understanding, arnav's cruelty, and the attraction between them.

i really look forward to the next update, adn i think its a shame that more people dont read your story because it is beautifully written