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Saniya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#291

However Scarlet didn't love him back till it was too late. Will Khushi do the same? You'll just have to wait and find out ^^ reading this from your note got me really scared! The update was fab, ArHi are pure magic.<3 I loved their scene & the effect Arnav has on Khushi! I love how Khushi is always teasing Payal, poor girl & aww she told Akash? & omg they're only 16, that's young! My heart went out for Arnav, being part of the family he's still not quite! Loved the update, CONTINUEE SOOON! :D

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shree99

@shree99

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Posted: 13 years ago

#292

I can already tell.. this story is going to be epic..

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oh.petite.one

@oh.petite.one

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Posted: 13 years ago

#293

wonderfully written and very gripping *thumbs up*

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603840

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Posted: 13 years ago

#294

beautifully written. but god sake arnav stop manhandling khushi. its getting horrible. :(

great update. loved the cute anjili and khushi part

xxx

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karisma

@karisma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#295

m glad that arnav saw how innocent she was even if briefly.😳 this gives us sthg to fall back on whenever he'll be misunderstanding her in the future

loved the whole update!!☺️ ahh another wedding coming up-payash.

i don't know y but i feel all this is the calm before the storm or maybe we're already in the eye of the storm. i can feel sthg momentous about to happen in this story

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mimi

@moon_mine

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Posted: 13 years ago

#296

the last part ws the best!!!!!

absolutely adored it!!!!

pls cntinue soon!!!!

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madmaxine

@madmaxine

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Posted: 13 years ago

#297

Gone with the wind was an awesome surprise. I haven't actually read that book..though I have seen the movie. (Clark Gable...drool!). I liked this update. So like Akash to take one look and be like..yep..she's da one.😆 As for Arnav...he needs to get a grip. Or Khushi needs to lay one on him for always treating her badly. Either way...loved the atmosphere you've created. Nicely done.

Cheers!
Vidhya

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#298

this is so beautiful... please make arnav stop manhandling her i cant bare.. she is only 16 same age of his sister... loved their scene ..khushi doent know what is happening to her when he is inches away from her 😍 loved akash and khushi convo and relation. poor arnav he is feeling so left out from his own family 😔
cant wait for more