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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

Great update! I loved it! She pushed him into the fountain. 🤣 Can't wait to read more!

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mimi

@moon_mine

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#242

very interesting story...pls cntinue soon!!!!

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Vanisha

@TheBlueAngel

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#243

Beauty wid Brains huh...dats called tit for tat...way 2 go Khushi...👍🏼
poor Arnav he was already soo tensed..on da top ov dat bkz ov Khushi he hd 2 go through such embarassmnt..i really pity him😆
bt Arnav is no less..am sure he''ll surely tke his revenge..😈
awesme update Munchy🤗

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..Damsel..

@..Damsel..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#244

fantastic update...

absolutely loved this part...especially the ending...

can't wait for the next part...thanks for the pm

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FAYKHAN29

@FAYKHAN29

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#245

Absolutely loved it loved it loved it! beautifully written lve wht khushi did 2 arnav! snake gve me creep! really cant wait 4 nxt part plz update sooon,i b could b wrong not sure the name?migth b "train 2 pakistan" not sure it bn soo long time, keep up i know i sound crazy i meant it i really can not wait nxt chapter hurry!!!xxx

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Jasleen

@Jasleen

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#246

Great job⭐️ Loved the update! Can't wait for the next part.

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#247

Harshu is sooo sorry for the late reply!!!
But she had fallen ill!!! 😔

But she did thoroughly enjoy the update, reading it on her cell phone on her antique cell phone. . . . 😳 😃

Thanks for the PM, Munchy!!!

And oh yeah!! I dunno whut book you're talking about. . .

My knowledge of books is sadly just M&B, Harlequin. . . . . 😳 😉 😆 😆 😆

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#248

Apologies for the late reply to the last two updates..

I loved both the updates. The essence of Khushi and Arnav is the same. The same defiance and happy girl and the guy with a past and a personality he cannot come in terms with..
So Lavanya is a chipkoo in this too?? And Shamsher is still the sleazy guy with an obsession for Khushi 😆
BTW, the background of the story is so intriguing and it makes me wish, I had read this story in my tenth standard.. History would have been so easy..😆..
On a serious note, the story to me seems like a mirror of that time - representatives of Congress and Muslim league within the same family. And Arnav's opinion about how India needs a third party reminds me of what some Lord(I-don't-remember) said... Although he knows that he'll never be accepted as one of them, I hope he realises soon that he will never be one of them..

Thanks for the PM..😊

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nj123

@nj123

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#249

I love the concept of your ff. You have written it BEAUTIFULLY!! 😊

continue soon.😊

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soni_md

@soni_md

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#250

As far as the update is concerned, you know you always manage to blow me out of the water ... I'm so thankful that you don't rush any scenes. You complete them with patience, so that we can follow the characters, and we can see exactly what's happening, bit by bit ... thank you!Book, no idea if the fountain scene is the one you're referring to, but if it's the argument, then I'm going with "Train to Pakistan"! Lovely update, love!