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AquaBluez17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#221

whoa!! that was really good! i love the political stuff you hav put in there it felt rele good to read bout

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bookadict303

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Posted: 13 years ago

#222

Hahaha the water scene was funny...continue soon :)

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@MereMahiyaa.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#223

Amazing Update \loved it😃

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madmaxine

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Posted: 13 years ago

#224

Lovely. I caught up with all 3 chapters at one go..best way to read😊! For the book...my guess is The Ice candy Man/Cracking India by Bapsi Sidhwa..either that or Khushwant SIngh's Train to Pakistan. I've read both a long time ago. I could be completely wrong of course...that's been known to happen too. 😆

Anyway...loved the story. Loved Arnav's languid arrogance. Loved Khushi's innate mischievousness. It's nice to see all the same characters, same personalities in a completely different setting. I enjoyed this the best of all your works so far. Awesome.

Also, Anjali's Mom is named Vidhya! Sweet. I feel special. 😊

Cheers!
Vidhya

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hilly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#225

Heey Miniii ! :)

The chapter was brilliant.. I was longing for this chapter from many days, and yaay that you've updated.

Loved it, the way you've paid so much attention to detail and imagery.. and all the partition issues ! It just feels great, i was actually engrossed while reading it.. though less Arnav and Khushi scenes; loved it nonetheless.

Please do PM me whenever you update any of your work, now that my inbox thing is empty..

thanks.

I want more , this PM keeps me exciting and waiting.. one of very fav so far ! do update sooon .

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monkeydog18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#226

Munchy I love it!!! And i hope the next part is steamy ;) idk what book but the water fountain scene reminded me of hum aapke hai kaun? When madhuri pushes salman. But anywho I loved the riot conversation and how Arnav stood up looks like arhi will fall in love and then partition will separate them! Thanks for pm

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rozina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#227

Munchy that was awesome, amazing, fantastic and so much more that i cant find words to express how good this update was!

I loved the opening segment and you wrote it amazingly munchy i seriously dont think you could have caused offence to anyone!

Ewww i hate that shamsher guy and im so glad akash was there to tell the slimy shamsher off! totally hate that creep! ewww he was perving on khushi while she was reading namaz the freak!

I love the bond between khushi and the raizadas its so nice to see love like that!

Hahaha i cant believe what khushi did! I seriously couldnt help but smile when i read it and the fact that khushi came running down infront of him after throwing water on him! Shes so crazy it makes me laugh!

Cant wait for the next update munchy! Im sure arnav isnt going to let khushi get away with it

rozina

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malose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#228

that was great update i just love it =)

thnks for the pm

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489321

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Posted: 13 years ago

#229

such a great chapter! so glad khushi did that, arnav had it coming! :D

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sharneil92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#230

RES. will be back with a BIG REVIEW! SO MUCH TO TALK ABOUT!

sorry, fr being MIA. I'll skype to tell you what EXACTLY happened! :(

okay, you know what happened, so i wont tell that ONCE AGAIN! don't wanna live it again! *shudders*

ANYWAYS.

BAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!

i'll tell you why i was HOWLING with laughter!

"Arnav had soon had enough of the insipid teasing and couldn't help but smirk sardonically at the lack of knowledge that these young boys had about sex and how to please a woman."

"The back of Khushi's calves hit the base of the water fountain and she had a wild idea. She waited for Arnav to come close, till he was only inches away and she could feel her kameez getting wet due to him dripping on her, before she grabbed him by the collar and pulled him forward while she feinted past him. He went splashing in to the water."

"both Khushi and Anjali raced away arm in arm but not before Khushi turned around to give Arnav a teasing grin."

BAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

I hate Arnav. But he's far too condescending. Maybe that's why I love him.

And Khushi, SHE'S MY IDOL! 😆 Well, you know that don't ya! 😉 SHE'S SOOO COOL!

btw, AS UR... uhm... CLUB MEMBER, I DEMAND THAT YOU TELL ME WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN!!!

please?

look at poor me...

i'm so sad.

Edited by sharneil92 - 13 years ago