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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

amazing start you have chosen a controversial concept , i wish you best of luck as at Geet forum i try to write on a ind pak my readers stopped .

best of luck .do pm me

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Addie07

@Addie07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Munchy... everything u described.. every line u wrote had Magic in it.. i was so absorbed in that that it felt like being transported in another land... U have written it so beautifully that i will never be able to find words to tell u how much i loved this... i read ur update twice and both the times i had the same feeling...

It was magical...👏

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Beautiful Start 😍 Totally Unique :) 😳

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Angels11

@Angels11

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Interesting premise & u got me hooked. Plz PM me wen u update this 1. I loved the political overtones & undercurrent. Hindu-muslim love. Hmm u ve chosen an explosive & awesome backdrop 👏

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A...

@A...

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Mini...yu r showing the traits of an outstanding writer⭐️...different concept and entirely different treatment of the situation regarding Arhi...completly out of the box and serious ...and totally opposite frm yur previous works..but i like political dramas and complex stories...so,i'm all ready for an another roller coaster ride...Gud luck Dear😊

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Alisha

@luv angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Great start! Thanks for the pm!

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Just call me Sumi :)

@xsumi

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

it was amazing
thnkss
xxx

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

i loved it and il iked the back ground of the FF it's gonna be thrilling to revisit our partition and independence days plzzz continue soon and mini it is interesting thanks for the pm dear