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ChocoBloc_12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

I Look forward to your updates... and you never fail to surprise us... it was a brilliant update... Thanks for the PM...update soon :)

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queenie11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

my god, you're such an intense writer.

i really hope khushi and everyone doesnt fall into evil snake shamser's trap.

loved the arnav khushi scene - why does arnav have to be so mean 😭 but you do an amazing job writing him

cant wait for the update!

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hilly

@hilly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Miniii ! Loved the update..

the details, imagery, dialogue.. it's just amazing, how you've provided with the indo-pak issue before the partition.. I dunno, It just feels like that.. the way you've set up the plot and ah, I'm loving it. I know it's gonna get depressing further on, as the time comes to partition.

Anywho.. I quite didn't expect such a thing from Arnav.. I knew the beaded blouse was going to come in.. hoping he sincerely apologizes, and kind of more than that. poor khushi, awh. well, i've waiting for your update, and it was finally here... can't wait for the next !

Hurry it up woman ! teehee, i'm just kind of greedy. Lovin' your work..

do update the other FF's please and thankyou.

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farhacassim

@farhacassim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Fabulous update...simply loved, loved it!!! You are one talented writer, Muffin. Thanx for the pm.

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bookadict303

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Omg...continue soon :) :) :)

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smileyhug7679

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Update was awesome

Didn't like wat Arnav I hope he regrets it

Poor Kushi I hope she doesn't go in his oath for a while

I love ur ff always waiting for pm from u thanks a bunch

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Awesome update!! It was soo intense and descriptive.. LOVED IT!! Didn't expect Arnav to go this far to hurt Khushi... Although there is big bad ASR bhoot inside Arnav... I hope he feels some kind of regret or remorse for his actions!!

Thank you so much for the pm!! Seriously very addicted to this FF!!

Plzz continue soon!!

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-Garima-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

This is what I call pure passion and perfection. I absolutely LOVED this update! (: I can't tell you how much I love this FF..I want to keep on reading more and more!

I liked how you added the broken pearls and their symbolism, and I also liked how Arnav was feeling a bit remorseful when he realized what he had done. I am soo excited to read the next chapter, continue soon! (:

--Garima