~*VoH hO tUm*~(ak) FINAL UPDATE PG138 - Page 110

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Rim_

awesome part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



thx alot 😃😃
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: blah_blah

awesome part!!! 👏 👏 👏



thx alot 😃😃
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: girlie18

thnxs she did lose da kid so who did da prank.cont soon



thx alot for the commnet 😃😃
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: me_iq

awwwwwwww that was an amazing part....aww kashish i m gonna miss the ff deraly....dont cont soooon....gr8 job...


Iqra



awwww thx alot hun 😳 me ganna mis it too 😭 thx alot for the comment 😃😃
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: IndianCutie13

i'm happy that she didn't loose her kid poor karan got slapped
great part



thx alot for the commnet 😃😃
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: sahr_8

awwwwwwwwwww sooo sweet awsome part kashish
NOOOOOOOO u cant end thys ff 😭
other than that thys ff was awsome 😃 ur a gr8 writer and thankz for the 2 slaps karan diserves it kripa ya ok by wathcin kyph she really deserves the slap 😡 😃 😆

👏 Fo ur ff 😃
waitin for the last part



awwww thx alot 😳 me ganna miss this ff too yaarr 😭😭 thx alot for the commnet and i agree kripa does desever a slapp 😡lol 😆😆 i hope she get one in the dramma heheheh 😆😆😆
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Posted: 19 years ago

TRACK SONG😃😃
MALE:(Shows the back of angad)
Maine jisko dil yeh diya hai, dil yeh diya hai(angad turns around and has a gutar in his hand)
Maine jisko pyaar kiya hai, jisko pyaar kiya hai(he see a girl run by him but her duppate cover's her face)
Maine jisko dil yeh diya hai(angad then move through beautiful flowers)
Maine jisko pyaar kiya hai(angad picks up a flower and kripa turn around )
Voh ho tum voh ho tum, voh ho tum voh ho tum - 2 (angad looks at kripa and goes close to her)

FEMALE:
Maine jisko dil yeh diya hai, dil yeh diya hai(kripa in the garden )
Maine jisko pyaar kiya hai, jisko pyaar kiya hai(thinking of angad)
Maine jisko dil yeh diya hai(she run everywhere)
Maine jisko pyaar kiya hai(she goes near the water and splashes it)
Voh ho tum
voh ho tum, voh ho tum voh ho tum - 2(she see angad and goes toward him)

MALE
Voh ho tum voh ho tum,(angad grabbed kripa hand and kripa turns around )
Voh ho tum voh ho tum

Hey before i start all i want to say is that today is the last update for the ff!!
Thx u all for ur support with out ur support nothing would have been done. thx
a lot for the encouragment i really appreciated all ur comment and ur support!! I'll miss
all ur comment and I'll really miss this ff cause it was my second ff i did!! I hope u all enjoy
the last part and give the last comment for this ff 😃.
here is the last part enjoy:


4 yrs past
u see a big house
it zooms in the house
u see one kid behind the sofa and the other behind the curtains
k- NEHAA ...PRATEEK..where are u
kripa see the curtains move
kripa goes toward the curtains
kripa looks in the curtains
k- PRATEEK i caught u
then NEah come out
n- that not fair mom
k- wat not fair
n- dad
then u see angad cumming downstairs
neha run to angad
n- dad mom cheated
k- wat i didn't cheat
n- mom
a- neha u didn't get caught it was prat eek then
n- he my baby brother(in attitude way)
a&K- achaaa 😛
neha started laughing
p- papa
a- come here super boy
prateek ran to angad
prateek kiss angad
k- where my kiss
neha gave kripa a kiss
a- boy on one team and girls on the other wat say
k- fine
n- does that mean were all gonna play hide and seek
a&k- YUP
a- kripa u pple count first
k- excuse me new pple count first
a- ur exused 😆😆
k- angad (hit angad in a playful way)
a- fine 😆
angad and preeteek were count and were peeking
k- angad stop cheating
a- wat it just a game
k- angad ur'll never change
a- cause after all am ur angadd
k- of course
p- okie mama papa lets play
a- okiee jaan
p- 1...2....3..4..5...6..7..8..9..10
a&p-here or not am coming
a- preetak i find kripa and u find neha okie
p- okie papa
angad few where kripa was
angad went upstairs
kripa was hiding in the room
angad went in the room and pretended her never noe kripa was in the room
angad locked the door
angad then walked toward kripa
angad reached out angad gabbed kripa
k- angadd u cheater
kripa stood up
angad pushed her toward the wall and put his hand over her mouth
a- shhh...
k- angad (whispering)
angad went close to kripa
kripa was losted in angad eyes
angad went too close to kripa
angad went close to kripa
then they both kissed for a long time
then angad kissed kripa neck then her shoulders
kripa then moved angad
k- angad the kids are waiting for us
a- don't worry
k- angad hatoo naa
kripa push angad and ran away
kripa went down stair and saw neha angad preeteek playing with vade
(vade is karan kid!! after all karan did get married and u pple could guess woo???... yup ur Right angili lol. karan and anjli were happy in there life)



IN the night
vad left
angad, kripa , neha and preteek where sitting down watching a movie
k- noe u all get up the movie finished
n- mom plzz 2 min
k- no get up
p- mama plzz
k- lets goo u Kidd
the kid went to there room and get ready for bed
angad and kripa both gave the kids a kiss angad said goodnight
they both put the kids in and left

angad and kripa were both sitting on there bed
k- angad i never imaged us coming this far
a- why not
k- cause we had so much fight and so much separation
a- well noe were together and that was the past and noe we have to thing about the future
k- we have a happy and full family
a- no not yet
k- wat
a- yup cause i want another girl and a boy
angad moves close to kripa
k- angad tum bina that a lot of responsibility
a- it;s okie am always there for u
k- angad no
angad moved close to kripa and pulled her toward him
angad and kripa were so close
angad and kripa goo close and close
angad lays kripa on the bed and the lights fade away .............

Maine jisko dil yeh diya hai, dil yeh diya hai
Maine jisko pyaar kiya hai, jisko pyaar kiya hai
Maine jisko dil yeh diya hai
Maine jisko pyaar kiya hai
Voh ho tum voh ho tum, voh ho tum voh ho tum - 2

Maine jisko dil yeh diya hai, dil yeh diya hai
Maine jisko pyaar kiya hai, jisko pyaar kiya hai
Maine jisko dil yeh diya hai
Maine jisko pyaar kiya hai
Voh ho tum voh ho tum, voh ho tum voh ho tum - 2

Maine jisko dil yeh diya hai
Tumhe paake dilbar mujhe lag raha hai
Meri zindagi mein na ab kuch kami hai
Ho, tumhe paake dilbar mujhe lag raha hai
Meri zindagi mein na ab kuch kami hai
Tumhaare labon pe jo bikhri kali hai
Voh shabnam nahin hai, vafa ki nami hai
Jisne mera chain liya hai, mera chain liya hai - 2

Maine jisko dil yeh diya hai
Maine jisko pyaar kiya hai
Voh ho tum voh ho tum, voh ho tum voh ho tum - 2

Maine jisko dil yeh diya hai

Sambhaala tha maine bahut apne dil ko
Magar yeh deewaana machalne laga hai
Oh, sambhaala tha maine bahut apne dil ko
Magar yeh deewaana machalne laga hai
Mili teri meri nazar jab se dilbar
Khayaalon ka mausam badalne laga hai
Mere bas mein na mera jiya hai, mera jiya hai - 2

Maine jisko dil yeh diya hai
Maine jisko pyaar kiya hai
Voh ho tum voh ho tum, voh ho tum voh ho tum - 2

Maine jisko dil yeh diya hai, dil yeh diya hai

Maine jisko pyaar kiya hai, jisko pyaar kiya hai

Maine jisko dil yeh diya hai
Maine jisko pyaar kiya hai

Voh ho tum voh ho tum, voh ho tum voh ho tum


Voh ho tum voh ho tum, voh ho tum voh ho tum .........

I HOPE U LIKED THE LAST PART!! 😳😳

kashish


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Posted: 19 years ago
nice endin really good ff n i hope u write more
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Posted: 19 years ago

awwwwwwwww kashish Amazing fantastic n fab ending...(i will edit it wen i cum bak frm skool)i will surely miss this 1!! 😭

bakk hailaa i never wondered u will end it soo sooooon gonna miss it alot .....fun nahi yaar i wasnt feeling well the whole yes cuz of ur ff end n cuz of food poisoning..............this was a gr8 fanfic...hope u start another sooooon....

miss u n luv u


Iqra
👏 👏 👏

Edited by me_iq - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
great fan-fic. 😃 nice ending.....

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