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Posted: 13 years ago
Fab update dear like always =D
Continue soonnn
Really like arnav in here
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Posted: 13 years ago
i'm enjoying how the story is going forward
thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
that s a cool update...nd very nicely shown hs care 4 her..
I lovd ther convo abt thr parents...
Thank u 4 pm.
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Bujai:what are you saying ?

Arnav: just got up he reached the door

Payal: jija ji ab nahi she stop him at the door

Arnav: i need just 2 mins please

Payal: no jija ji she just closed the door

Khushi: jiji

Payalchup karo or i will tell buaji

Arnav: look at her "What you will tell?"

Payal:that last night you lock the door

Arnav: acha acha thek ha ,khushi did we expected this from them . see how we both helped them and today they are treating us like that.

Payal: khushi jiji she just placed her hand on her shoulder as the door was closed and she could not see Arnav"should i show buaji your hand?

Khushi: dekha do jiji , my husband name is written no one else she just walk back to the bed.

Arnav: heart just jump with joy at her comment he just walk back. to look at buaji who was doing NK NK and NK was looking at her in confusion, he just look at babuji and maa he walk to them he kneel down in front of babuji wheel chair "can i marry khushi tomorrow ?"

Buaji: look at him in surprise

Arnav: i promise you, i will protect her, and will not make her cry

Babuji just try to keep his hand on his head .

Buaji: Kal

Arnav: look at her if you can manage today i dont mind

buaji: just pull his ear " sanak gai ho tum"

Arnav: so can i ask Nani to come with the proposal

Buaji: ha ha kyun nahi

Arnav: NK he shake him

NK: are you getting married ?

Arnav: yes why what happen?

NK: nothing

Payal: she is saying have your breakfast

Arnav: look in side she was just looking at him ,he just sat and started eating and calling Anjali to come with nani .

Buaji: just walk in to room and hug her " i am glad you got the best"

Khushi: just shyly smiled

Buaji: sanak devi aur sharma rahi ha

Khushi hide her self .


At RM

Anjali: dancing with joy

Shyam:kya huwa aap ko rani SB

Anjali: meri bhabi na ha kar di

Shyam: bhabi

Anjali: yes yes ,she saw nani coming

Nani: chota is saying come, she just hug her

Shyam: will any one tell me

Anjali: Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada , wait i get maa kangan . she just quickly walked to her room

Shyam: just felt a lump stuck in his throat..

Anjali: come with us

Shyam: started coughing "when it is decided ?"

Nani: chota loved her for long, he was just scared to say . i have read his eyes long back.

Anjali: aap ko pata tha

Nani: he said yes for LA as he saw Khushi in her pat her , but then he realized he will not be able to stay with out her ."you dont remember LA said to you Arnav will get married when he want to"

Anjali: now he want to lets go before he change his mind .

Nani: it will not change Anjali , they walk out

Shyam just stand with a open mouth

Akash: you thought you will hurt them and bhai will let her stay in pain and fear , he will not .

Shyam: look at him

Akash: i warn you stay away from my bother the sisters Anjali di and Khushi

Shyam: akash woh

Akash : please we respect you a lot , dont let us he paused as he saw Mami ji comming

Mami ji hello hji bye bye i am late she just ran out

Akash: let us all be happy please he walked out too.


AT Gupta place

buaji: beta till your nani arrive i will go to temple , i had a maanat ,she just walked out with khushi amaa

NK: khushi ji that why you always take Naanva side hmmm now i got .

Khushi: when i took his side ?

NK: yesterday when you were wearing sari . yaad aaya

Khushi: i just wanted to say

Arnav: just walk in "NK wait " he just hold her hand and pull her with him to the room

Khushi: what are you doing ? Nana ji

Arnav: smiled he cannot do any thing now ? he just closed the door .. khushi could hear Payal and NK laughter .

Khushi: aap bhi na kya ha

Arnav: uff your attitude khushi

Khushi: just turn her face " i am going to be Mrs Arnav so i should have attitude like him "

Arnav: Khushi you are

Khushi unbelievable

Arnav no you are mental

Khushi: oh then why you are marrying me?

Arnav: because i want this mental to make me too hug her tight, just listen one thing i may have to go home now just dont be scared i will ask NK to stay here , and if you want me call me any time.

Khushi: look at him he was removing her curls .

Arnav: i will try not to go dont you worry .i have changed your cell number .

Khushi: just hide her self in his arms

Arnav: kissed her head no more tears please give me a smile

they heard car noise he just kissed her quickly .. and open door , walked out left her to over come, he bang with NK as he was trying to hear

Arnav: just smiled and walk away to help Anjali

NK: khushi he look at her "what happen?"

Khushi: nothing she wipe her tears

NK: naanav na kuch bola

Khushi: no he did not .

NK: smile then "by the way why you became my date?"

Khushi : smiled she fold Arnav clothes , we had a fight

NK: you broken my heart ..act as he crying

Khushi: sorry

Anjali walk in and hug khushi so you are the one who live in my brother heart.

Khushi: just shyly smiled

Anjali: nani is calling you she just walk with shy Khushi ,made her sit in between Arnav and Nani

Nani: just talk to buaji and placed the kangan on her hand .

Buaji: just started crying as she was guilty for what all had happen with her in passed . she just cried her heart out by saying i could not sleep as because of me she was hurt .

Arnav: just covered up as he didnot want her to disclose the name " i promise you i will look after her" suddenly the atmosphere sad

NK: hello everyone why to cry on past ?lets be happy after all it is Snaka devi and Laad governor shadi

everyone started laughing.

buaji: ha ha now this Laad governor cannot see her

Arnav: why ?

Buaji: bus she ask khushi to go in she just un willingly went in .

Arnav: but i will stay here

Buaji: smiled you can stay here . as Payal told buaji Shyam has scared her and Arnav is just very protective she just have no objection .

nani: we have to go you come home Khushi can get ready at home.

buaji: yeh thek ha

Arnav just relax as everyone cooperated with him.


they atmosphere became lively nani and Anjali left Gupta home

Arnav: just walk to the room as buaji was showing him eyes to stay away from Khushi

Khushi buaji kya ha

Payal smiled

Buaji: just twist her ear ,"kal tak to LG LG and today " she just hug them both.


It was After noon when Arnav took Khushi and Payal with him to RM as they have to get ready for the Sangeet

Anjali just welcome khushi " you both go in your husband to be room to get ready as the guest room are occupied.

Khushi :Anjali ji

Anjali: Di

Khushi: DI it is not fair

Anjali: then ask chota to go to Akash room you both share his

Khushi: that a good idea she look at Arnav

Arnav: just look away

Khushi: dekha you go in jiju room

Arnav:no way ,i cannot share my room

Khushi: then how will you share with me

Arnav: that is other thing

Anjali:smiled

Khushi just walk up as she didnot has time to waste . her dress was laying on his bed it was a tea pink lenhga .she felt he walk in ." now let me change and dont stare at me "

Arnav: just smiled he just

Anjali: walk in "chota are you teasing my bhabi"

Arnav: she had teased me so much .

Anjali: you go and change i will help you i will see how he tease you. khushi was about to walk to washroom

Arnav: you change here i am going out he just walk to pool side closed the french door behind him .

Anjali: my over possessive bhai.,"you change call me i will help you with jewellary " she walk to akash room

Khushi: just lock the door . she quickly change she was tying the doori when his cell started ringing ."arnav she just called him he didnot listen she open the door

Arnav: was gardening "what happen?"

Khushi: your phone she gave him

Arnav: look at her she was trying to close the doori he just walk to her, she felt he his presence .he was talking on phone but .his hand was tied the doori."aman wait a min " he just kissed her shoulder look at her who was standing like a statue "yes Aman where were we ?" he walk out

Khushi just came back to life .

Anjali: just knock at the door.

Khushi: just open the door

Anjali kya huwa she look at the door and saw Arnav walking and talking on cell "so chota na phir tang kiya"

Khushi nahi nahi

Anjali :smiled lag to raha ha

Khushi: he didnot

Anjali:: just help her in fixing her duppata and her jeweler.

Arnav: got ready in between

Anjali: you bring her with you we are going

Arnav: ok Di


Khushi was ready she was sitting on the bed , he just wore his sherwani

Arnav:now you stop looking at me ,

Khushi: hum na kab dekha she just started looking here and there.

Arnav: chalo i enjoy when you blush. just gave her his hand , how you are managing this heavy clothes ? you ladies they just walk down

Khushi: just didnot reply ,with in few mins they reached the hall. everyone was there

buaji now can i take her

Arnav: smiled yes he gave her hand to her ..

same look
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0Rl6Yw4y4yg[/YOUTUBE]

sangeet started

Arnav and Akash just dance jump next to there love ladies

buaji showed them eyes

kachchi kaliyaan mat todo maalan degi gaaliyaan (khushi and payal push them )

kachchi kaliyaan hum na tode, le jaaye pura baagicha (Arnav and Akash pull them in front of them )
maalan teri bagiya bhali hai, har ?? mein kaliyaan khili hai ( pull them aside showed them eyes)
bhanvare hum prem ke pyaase, sunenge teri gaaliyaan (Arnav and Akash again succeed to pull them aside)
kachchi kaliyaan mat todo maalan degi gaaliyaan -(buaji just pat them )

kaliyon ke gaalon pe til hai, aur kaano mein baaliyaan ( arnav and AKash just twisted them both peck on the cheeks of their respective love ladies left them in shocked )
kaliyon ki aankhein nashili par par par ( winked at them Khushi and Payal )
kaliyon ki aankhein nashili par honto pe gaaliyaan (khushi and Payal just in anger look at them
bhanware hai ya bhais hai yeh, gaate sunlo kaise hai yeh ( khushi just hold Arnav arm and pull his scarf that Anjali placed around his neck. and tie with a pillar)
apane toh ?? mein khuti se inako hai baandhana (winked at him )
kachchi kaliyaan mat todo maalan degi gaaliyaan( she dance with buaji and payal)

suddenly light went out and it was all dark music stopped
Arnav: just ran to hold Khushi as she was just a feet away from her
Khushi: i am fine as she felt his tight embrace
Light came back music change
NK came on the floor
Bachnaa ae haseenon lo main aa gayaa
Hay, bachnaa ai haseenon lo main aa gayaa
Husn ka aashiq, husn ka dushman
Apni ada hai yaaron se judaa, hai ho!
Hai, bachnaa..

he was dancing but Arnav was boiling "i will kill him " he had just wrap his arm around Khushi waist

Anjali chota now you can leave

Arnav: why he closed the light?

Anjali: he didnot

Arnav: just hold Khushi hand in his he just look at Shyam in anger

Khushi: aap

Arnav: just tangle his fingers with her's

music change but he was not interested any more to leave her hand


Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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******loved the update..loved from start to end.loved protective akash..loved how payal teased them.and then buaji..loved arhi moment.loved the sangeet part..the room sharin,the dori tying,the dance sequence,then the over protective arnie..loved its every bit xcept that creep.
Edited by sarach - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarach

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******loved the update..loved from start to end.loved protective akash..loved how payal teased them.and then buaji..loved arhi moment.loved the sangeet part..the room sharin,the dori tying,the dance sequence,then the over protective arnie..loved its every bit xcept that creep.

i was planning to apart them but he is so over protective that i drop the idea .. it will be a let down to Arnav
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update as usual =) =) =)
Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww finally they're going to get married
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow they are going to get married super duper excited
awesome part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loveeed it... :D
More than amazin one...
Love u moreee for givin us a LonG updatee. :D x
Continue soon
And yes do update othere ss of yours
Love All of em' :)

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