IPKKND:The'TeriMeri'Series OS1 P74/OS2 P78/OS3 P83

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Richa :D

@Richie-Rich

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#551

Wow!! The third OS is amazing!! :)
Lovely 👏
God!! I can't wait till Monday now!! :P

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#552

Hey Amal My Love 🤗 ...Just read all three OS's...and I just loved it to the core...I mean the way you describe their feelings,emotion, their state of mind...JUST AMAZING 👍🏼 ...I am so looking forward for more so do post more and keep PMing me...Take care..and ofcoure ...I LOVE YOU...!!!❤️

Lot of Love

Geet

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Soumya

@Siaa_Rickman

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#553

Read both the OS!! It's really beautiful...Loved reading'em :D

Keep'em coming hun :D

P.S Thanks a lot for the pm :) :)

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Maaneet4eve

@Maaneet4eve

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#554

Like button not working... but update was absolutely great!!!!!

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Paulomi

@paulomi_taAnu

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#555

love khushi's expression..omg ...so much in love ❤️

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#556

Caught up with chits, Amal. You've captured each moment beautifully. I like the word play you use and synchronise it with picture. Looking forward to reading more..

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Silhoutte92

@Silhoutte92

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#557

wow this one was to good nice peice of wordings

Edited by sashazmohit - 13 years ago

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sayani2807

@sayani2807

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#558

Brilliant!!!! 👏 👏

Thnxx for ur PM!!! 😊

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sayani2807

@sayani2807

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#559

👏 👏 👏 The fabric of her thready drape glided by his fingers and he hated that it was the only interface standing in between the two. An ethereal beauty was playing under his palms; her lustrous, soft hair was soothing them causing havoc to her bloodstreams. Effortlessly, with him as her prince charming, she let go, meaning to see her world but ended up seeing something more than just that. Gravity was being a slave to their desires and she saw nothing more than her universe falling upon her. Arnav..👏 👏👏
Mindblowing!!!!Simply fantabulous!!!!

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sharme

@sparklystarstud

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#560

lil missy...u've got me hooked to this...SERIOUSLY!!!!!

the play of ur words...AMAZING hun...

Like fire and ice colliding to form a dangerous combo, they twirled, holding hands.

Gravity was being a slave to their desires and she saw nothing more than her universe falling upon her. Arnav...

To quench his thirst, he drove her smooth palms down his face, telling his soul that she was his very own; she obliged dutifully, reinforcing an unspoken promise to be his salvation.

the best lines that got me mesmerized ...

LOVE IT!!!!!

they're short yet they go rite thru ur heart...the feelings ur words cause...

FREAKING AWESOME !!!!

~~~sam

Edited by sparklystarstud - 13 years ago