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ishka virani

@LilApple

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Posted: 13 years ago

#341

wow

it was somthing awesome i got ...

thanku so much for the pm

nice plot and mindblowingly written...

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niti

@U_R_Beautiful

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Posted: 13 years ago

#342

omg POEM REALLY MADE ME MISS MAH DAD I MISS HIM IT WAS DEEP REALLY U FAB AMAL I CAN'T TELL U HOW GOOD U WRITE I LOVED IT LOVE JU❤️

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#343

That was a beautiful OS, Amal.. I enjoyed the light beginning, grinned foolishly at some words and laughed heartily at the Shah Rukh Khan and Karan Johar thingy..And smiled earnestly at the flower girl who was tending to her flowers like caring for babies..Thanks for the PM 😊

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niti

@U_R_Beautiful

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Posted: 13 years ago

#344

FREAKING AWESOME os
RES WILL ADD UP MORE [:d]

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Lekshmic7

@Lekshmic7

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#345

Awww... Dat ws totally a different proposal!!!! Brilliant job dear, loved it. Thnks alot 4 d pm

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Laila.N

@Laila.N

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#346

I so loved it !! That was so simple and so amazing at the same time !
Very good job, loved every words of it... Thank youuu !

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Radhika

@chainreaction.

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#347

Bacchii i loved the poem <3 It was amazing :) i was left in awe of your writing 👍🏼 you portrayed childhood innocence so well, and how children see the world so simply, and so honestly. They see it for what it is. idk if this makes any sense 🤣 Its wonderful to see how amazed the child was, just by looking at the world and at nature when she's standing with her dad! It seemed like everything was okay and the world was a lot better when the child was just holding her dads finger. It felt like the child was protected from everything when he/ she was holding his finger :) and the last paragraph was what left me so astonished. It was beautiful and it really showed how children do become independent and they don't rely on their dad for everything, but whenever we need our dad then we can always go to him and he'll still be here to protect us and just to comfort us and make us feel that everything is gonna be okay. No matter how old we become, we still need our dad. Yes, we do start our own lives, but what i think you portrayed in this poem was that even if we go out on our own and begin our own lives, we don't have to be worried because if there are any problems, our dad will still be standing there, like he always was to help us through difficult times. and also whenever we get joy in our life or when we're happy, he'll always be there to share our happiness and to increase it. Because no matter how grown up we get, we always need our dad to share our sorrow in our bad times and to share our joy with him in our good times. And i think that your poem conveyed this perfectly. You should really get more comments for this, because i feel its your small works like this that really show how skilled you are as a writer. Because you haven't mentioned any couples or any characters we know in this, but i still love it because of the way you've written it. So well done :)

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abandoned

@abandoned

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#348

Author's Note to YAS readers : Okay. Now I am totally running out of words. I COULD LITERALLY BANG MYSELF ON A WALL AND STILL FEEL HORRIBLE. So there was this me who gave up studying even though I have an exam tomorrow and I randomly noticed the Awards thread. AND IMAGINE MY SHOCK to see YAS being nominated. You have no idea how pathetic I feel to have actually both YAS from you guys and the kind of love all of you are showing is blinding me. I am out o all options now. And I promise tonight, as soon as I finish studying, I am hell kick starting my favorite work of all times. And this time I am going to go wherever it's taking me. I will NEVER ever forget this guys. This makes me feel a million touched than when I knew my OSs were nominated. I am, of course, grateful there too. But YAS is right now at an aimless place and to get this kind of recognition and sincerity; damn, am I the luckiest woman on earth? I HELL WELL AM. So yeah. NO WAITING. I am beginning YAS. And that's final. Just wait up till I am done studying. Should be up by midnight according to the Indian Standard Time.

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Radhika

@chainreaction.

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#349

Originally posted by: SmokingDreams
Author's Note to YAS readers : Okay. Now I am totally running out of words. I COULD LITERALLY BANG MYSELF ON A WALL AND STILL FEEL HORRIBLE. So there was this me who gave up studying even though I have an exam tomorrow and I randomly noticed the Awards thread. AND IMAGINE MY SHOCK to see YAS being nominated. You have no idea how pathetic I feel to have actually both YAS from you guys and the kind of love all of you are showing is blinding me. I am out o all options now. And I promise tonight, as soon as I finish studying, I am hell kick starting my favorite work of all times. And this time I am going to go wherever it's taking me. I will NEVER ever forget this guys. This makes me feel a million touched than when I knew my OSs were nominated. I am, of course, grateful there too. But YAS is right now at an aimless place and to get this kind of recognition and sincerity; damn, am I the luckiest woman on earth? I HELL WELL AM. So yeah. NO WAITING. I am beginning YAS. And that's final. Just wait up till I am done studying. Should be up by midnight according to the Indian Standard Time.

OMGGG YOU'RE STARTING YAS 😲 I AM SO HAPPYYY! I LOVE YOU <3 DO IT QUICKLY! Are you starting from the beginning or continuing the original? This has made me so happyyy 🤣🤣🤣

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niti

@U_R_Beautiful

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#350

Originally posted by: SmokingDreams
Author's Note to YAS readers : Okay. Now I am totally running out of words. I COULD LITERALLY BANG MYSELF ON A WALL AND STILL FEEL HORRIBLE. So there was this me who gave up studying even though I have an exam tomorrow and I randomly noticed the Awards thread. AND IMAGINE MY SHOCK to see YAS being nominated. You have no idea how pathetic I feel to have actually both YAS from you guys and the kind of love all of you are showing is blinding me. I am out o all options now. And I promise tonight, as soon as I finish studying, I am hell kick starting my favorite work of all times. And this time I am going to go wherever it's taking me. I will NEVER ever forget this guys. This makes me feel a million touched than when I knew my OSs were nominated. I am, of course, grateful there too. But YAS is right now at an aimless place and to get this kind of recognition and sincerity; damn, am I the luckiest woman on earth? I HELL WELL AM. So yeah. NO WAITING. I am beginning YAS. And that's final. Just wait up till I am done studying. Should be up by midnight according to the Indian Standard Time.

🥳C O N G RA T U L A T I O N S
jU DESERVE MANY MORE AWARDS AMAL,,,!!👏Wowww me soo happy finally i'll be waiting For the updates ekksss😆😆 excited ...🤣🤣 ME gONNA COME NOW TO CHECK OUT the update though i have literally NO time to breath also😛