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Posted: 13 years ago
i like the concept #3 there are too many stories going on like #1 and 2. actually on second thought i would like you to write stories on all the three conccepts starting with # 3
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Posted: 13 years ago
my vote is for concept 3
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Posted: 13 years ago
GEET MUST BE LOOKIN G GORGEOUS IN THE DRESS
WONDER HOW MAAN WILL CONTROL HIMSELF
LOVING THE VALENTINE DATE
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: NaimaMSK1

Well well well !

Here i am

will start typing

and i have replied ot all the comments please see

Ummm i was thinking to write another story on Maaneet which is different than this one so wanted your suggestions ..

1 .. Maan is totally a spoilt rich brat and gets what he wants .. And now he desires geet

2 .. Maan married geet for revenge which later proved to be a mere misunderstanding .. he behave harshly with her and when the truth is out will geet forgive him ??

3 .. Both of them hate each other but circumstances force them to get married ..

Pease please please tell me which one should i write ..

Will write the one with the most votes


I LIKE NUMBER 3
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Posted: 13 years ago
i will like u go with concept 3
i really like all three concept
but will like u go with concept 3
Luv
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Posted: 13 years ago
all the three are good
But second concept will be great
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Posted: 13 years ago
All three sounds interesting

But the 3rd one sounds nice. I hope u write all three stories

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Posted: 13 years ago

😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you soo much for all the comments .. I have replied to all of them 😃 please see 😃
And yes a very important note need your suggestions 😃

Ummm i was thinking to write another story on Maaneet which is different than this one so wanted your suggestions ..

1 .. Maan is totally a spoilt rich brat and gets what he wants .. And now he desires geet

2 .. Maan married geet for revenge which later proved to be a mere misunderstanding .. he behave harshly with her and when the truth is out will geet forgive him ??

3 .. Both of them hate each other but circumstances force them to get married ..

Most voted will be written 😃

PART 42
He led her further ahead to hr surprise and she was shocked .. She couldn't believe her dream had come true.. Yes she always wanted to go to a cruise and enjoy the beautiful waves under the moon light .. and this cruise seemed the best ..
She went inside and saw the whole path covered with red roses ' The path was illuminated with lights at the end and had roses petals everywhere .. she stepped on them one by one enjoying each and every part if it .. The path led inside he ship where there was a pool side area and open o enjoy the view.. She noticed that the pool side area was also decorated with roses and petals everywhere and all around the fence were scented candles .. This was even better than her dreams .. she turned to see maan standing there and ran and hugged him chanting Thank you thank you thank you ..
Maan who was watching her all the time was just soo happy to see her loving every bit of it .. He was amused at the lovely faces she made making her all the more beautiful .. he looked at her in the moon light and she looked gorgeous In the dress that he had gifted her .. She had applied no make up yet she managed to look out of this world it was soo surprising because girls these days are literally loaded with makeup all the time and then manage to look presentable and his angel , his princess looked soo beautiful naturally.. His thoughts were broken when she suddenly hugged him .. first he was a little no very surprised but then he hugged her back with all the love ..

They went in the ship ..

Do you like it ?
Like it ?? OMG I loved it .. Thank you .. She said and smiled widely ..
Not so soon .. He whispered ..

He held her hand and took her to an area where there the terrace was decorated with red and white curtains .. and in between all the candles was a table for two set .. visible in the spot light .. she smiled .. In between all this was a heart written Happy valentines on It ..

She turned around only to find him not there .. She was surprised .. She was about to call him when he started to sing ..
Tu hi meri hai saari zameen
Chahe kahin se chalun
Tujh mein hi aake ruku
Tere siva Main jaun kahan
Koi bhi raah chunu
Tujh mein hi aake ruku
He slowly approched her while the spot light followed him .. He went towards her and conveyed his heart .. Telling her that where ever he may be near her or far she is always with him .. she is like a shadow who follows him .. he says whatever way he goes .. whatever path he follows his destination will only be her .. it will only be her for whom he will do anything and everything .. There is no one and neither would be whom he would care for so much in the world .. she means everything to him ..
Tum Mile To Lamhein Tham gaye
Tum mile to Saare gum gaye
Tum mile to muskhurana aa gaya
Tum mile to jadoo chaa gaya
Tum mile to jeena aa gaya
Tum mile to mene paya hai khuda
He continued telling her how it felt eternity when she met him .. the time froze it seemed as if there are only him and her in the whole world no one else .. only them .. How when she met him his sorrows were forgotten .. how he learned move on from his past and did something which he had not done in years .. he smiled .. That smile which he had lost long ago .. But he did smile and this was only because of her .. The air was filled with some king of magic some love .. when they met .. she had taught him how to live a normal life ... The thing which had not done long back .. she was the one who taught him the really meaning of life .. She was everything to him .. He went to her and grabbed her towards her waist slowly swaying while conveying the truths .. He kissed her eyes and bowed down infornt of her saying the last line she was soo over whelmed by this gesture that tears of happiness flew from her and she just hugged him tight ..
Tujh mein kinara dikhe
Dil ko sahara dikhe
Aa meri dhadkan tham le
Teri taraf hi mude
Yeh saas tujhse jude
Har pal yeh tera naam le
Still in her embrace he sang further .. telling her she was his evrything .. like a ocean for a thirsty .. an oasis in the desert .. I find support in you .. My heart ..my breath everything belongs to you only you .. she separated from his embrace and looked at him as he uttered those words .. she pointed towards the left side of his chest where his heart was and then to herself as if asking Does this really belong to me ? He nodded and she placed a kiss there .. He further assured her by telling this heart all the time takes only her name and will keep on taking it ..
Tum mile to abb kya hai kami
Tum mile to duniya mil gai
Tum mile to mil gaya asra
Tum mile to jadoo chaa gaya
Tum mile to jeena aa gaya
Tum mile to mene paya hai khuda
He parted from her sand and this twirling around telling her that he founf he world when he found her .. There is now nothing he wants .. His incomplete life is complete all because of her .. After she is with him this world is at their feet .. he cares for no one except her .. She taught him life .. she was huis salvation .. He went near her and cupped her face .. He kissed her eyes .. her forehead .. telling her she is meant to be the world for him .. his prayer .. his salvation .. his Universe .. She just kept looking at him in awe too stunned to react ..
Din mere tujhse chale
Raatein bhi tujhse dhale
Hai waqt tere haath mein
hooo Tu hi shehar hai mera
Tujh mein hi ghar hai mera
Rehta hai tere saath mein


He made her sit on the swing and kept his head on her lap while at first she shied but the soothed him by carrasing his scalp .. he sand further telling her .. requesting her that he wanted every morning to start from her and every night to end at her .. He wa shis world .. his city his house .. She was everything to him .. He turned further in his lap and placced a kiss on her stomach while she blushed but he smiled ..
Tum mile to mil gaya humsafar
Tum mile to khud ki hai khabar
Tum mile to ristha sa ban gaya
Tum mile to jadoo chaa gaya
Tum mile to jeena aa gaya
Tum mile to mene paya hai khuda

He got of from her lap and made her stand still .. He kissed both her hands ever so sensuously and then kept her leg on his thighs .. He took out two gold payals from his pocket and made her wear them .. They were his mothers payal which she had given him before her death and told him to make that girl wear it whom he would love uncondiotionally and who was meant to be his .. and today her found her .. he placed a kiss on each ankle after tying the payal and she shuddered under the touch... Tell her that she was his companion .. his soul mate .. his life partner ... since she came he actually knew what he was doing and where he was .. he didn't seem to be lost in work all the time .. There was magic and love all over him .. she had taught everything to him .. He again bowed down towards her but she stopped him in mid way and hugged him while he kissed her cheeks ever so sweetly .. he then took her to towars the open sky when there was a sudden fire cracker in the air written
I LOVE YOU GEET ..
Geet was so shocked .. She didn't know what to do and how to react she was so overwhelmed by all this that she became too numb to react .. Maan took it otherwise He thought that maybe he had hurried it a little and she was not ready ..
Geet agar tum ye nahi ..
But she cut him off when she hugged him tight telling his that she loved every bit of what he had done for her .. she was only his and she belonged to him .. maan needed no assurance he could see
the love and aceptance her eyes .. her eyes always spoke volumes .. They were meant to be ..
They parted and geet was all shy shy again ... He smiled ..
He again went on his knees and took out a diamond ring from the red velvet box and whispered ..
GEET WILL YOU MARRY ME ??

She took some time to digest all the turn of events she couldn't imagine it could be soo beautiful and so dreamy to be proposed by someone .. all she did was just bend down on her knees and hugged him nodding a yes .. He slipped the diamond ring in her finger and they stayed in each other embraced .. felling peace .. feeling love and contented .. She just kept hugging him tight fearing to loosed him .. Now all the things were making sense to her .. His telling her not to marry .. His telling her that she could meet her parent everyday .. And the hero .. heroine scene .. the kiss .. she blushed .. the letter and everything now made sense .. he was so confident about this all the while because he had loved her and she mentally cursed herself for not knowing it ..

How was it ???
PRECAP : romance and teasings 😆 Raat abhi baki hai 😉
Edited by NaimaMSK1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update

awsome

heyy rabby


koi muje bi aise propse kre


loved it'



waiting for the next

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