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Posted: 13 years ago

Helloo ! And am very sorry for the delay as told the reason earlier .. I love all the comments you guys give but am sorry couldn't reply to them individually but please don't stop commenting will reply as soon as possible '

Ok so some one wanted geet to be jealous (sorry don't remember who) and Many of you wanted maan to prove geet he is not gay so will do that in the next part ..

PART 34

The arrangements were at it's full swing everyone was running here and there to get everything perfect .. They had already sent Mr and Mrs handa out so that they could prepare the surprise in there absence ..

Buss geet sab ho gaya aab tu jaa kar change kar lay '

Haan veer jee main bus janay lagi hoon ..

Nahi geet tou abhi jaa ..

Par veer jee maan sir tou gifts laiyee he nahi she said and pouted ..

Main yahaan hoon .. Maan announced ..

And ranbir left leaving maan to face his sister's wrath for coming late ..

Ye koi time hai anay ka ?? Main kab se aapka wait kar rahi thii .. Pata hai party honay wali hai aur aap ka koi pata he nahi .. maine girfts ka kaha tha meri he ghalti thi main kaise bhool sakti hoon aap tou Maan Singh khurana ho aaona kam marzi se kartay ho aur .. She wanted to keep on blabbering but was stopped by his finger on her lip ..

CHUP .. BILKUL CHUP !

Kitna bolti ho tum Ms bak bak ??

Main kuch boloon ??

She was about to open her mouth to say something but he pressed his finger further tight on her lips indicating her not to speak .. She nodded instead he smirked ..
Good ..

Aab jaoo tyaar ho sab loog atay hoon gay ..

She again nodded and was about to go when he handed over a packet to her .. She looked at him confused ..

Wo ye tumharay liay .. Ye pehen loo ..

Par sir main ye kaise ?? Nahi sir main yenahi lay sakti ..

Geet main keh raha hoon na ..

Please sir acha nahi lagta ..

Chup .. Main tumhara best friend hoon aur usse haisiyaat se day raha hoon samjhi ..,

Par ..

Agar tum ne kuch aur bola tou main bata doon gaa kay wo teddy Vicky ne nahi diya tha .. He smirked she gulped and then proceeded towards the stairs ..

Geet got ready in the dress maan had given ..She came down the stairs and all the heads in the party turned towards her .. She looked like an angel descending down the strairs .. Maan had given her a white saree .. With black and mauve border .. It's pallo had shades of pink in it .. She had left her long straight hair open and applied kajal and lip gloss .. She wore a few bangles and a pendant .. She had long diamond jhumka's on and no other make up or jewelry piece yet she looked the best one in the party .. Maan was literally drooling over her .. He had imagined geet in this saree before but could not fathom that she would look even more beautiful then hisfnatasy .. Infact reality was soo beautiful that he didn't want to dream ..

Here geet got a little conscious on how everyone was staring at her but then she saw maan and their eyes locked .. her trance was broken when Vicky compliments that she looked gorgeous ..

As all the guests were here it was now time for Mr and Mrs handa to be brought .. When they entered they were shocked to see all this and felt soo proud of their children .. Everyone came and wished them Happy anniversary .. When they got to know that geet had planned all this they all got emotional as to hoe mature their baby had become .. to which geet got offened and said she was not a baby any more everyone laughed .. \

As per planned the lights went of and the spot light was on geet who was playing the piano .. And then ranbir took the mike and started to sing ..

Ye tou sach hai kay baghwaan hai

Hai magar phir bhi anjaan hai

Dharti poay roop maa baap kaa ..

Us vidhataa ki pehchaan hai ..

All the while looking at his parents with gratitude and smiling .. conveying his heart out ..

Then geet continued ..

Janamdata hai wo , Naam jinse mila ..

Thamkar jinki uglii hai bachpan chalaa ..

Kanndhe par beithkae , Jinke deekhaa jahaan ..

Gyaan jin se mila .. Kya bura kya bhala ..

She said getting all emotional and remembering all the good times .. The parents smiled while everyone in the hall were impressed ..

Yash continued ..

Itnee upkarr hai kya kahain ..

Ye batana na aasaan hai ..

Dharti pay roop maa baap kaa..

Us vidhataa ki pehchaan hai ..

Here Both the parents were getting emotional by the amount of love their children were showering on them .. Yash bended his head down infront if them telling them they had soo given them everything and they could never pay off .. Mr handa came and hugged yash ..

Janam deti hai wo ..

Maa jisse jag kahe ..

Apni santaan main ..

Praan jiske rahee '

Loriyaan hontoon par ..

Sapnay bhunti nazar ..

Neend jo vaar dee ..

Has ke har dukh sahay ..

She remembered all the time spent with her parents how they use to pamper her ' especially he mama use to do anything for her .. all the time she was awake all night because she couldn't sleep or she was sick .. he mama never complained she always smiled .. Every dream every demand before she even thought about it was fulfilled' She looked up to her mum with eyes full of respect and gratitude ' Mrs handa came and hugged her .. her eyes got tary and she wiped her tears indicating her not to cry she smiled ..

Rahul continued ..

Mamta kay roop main hai prabhu ..

Aapse payaa vardaan hai ..

Dharti pay roop maa baap kaa ..

Uss vidhaataa ki pehchaan hai ..

..

Ranbir bought his harmonium and started to play while yash and rahul played guitar .. Geet wanted to play guitar too but they wouldn't allow so she made a big grumpy face and sat there on the piano seat .. The brothers chuckled and kissed her one by one convincing her .. She finaaly smiled while all looked at them in awe seeing the amount of love and care between the brother sisters ..

Aapke khwaab hum .. Aaj hokar jawaan ..

Uss param shakti se kartay hain prathna ..

Unki chaya rahay .. Rehti duniyaa talak '

Ek pal reh sake hum na jin kay binaa ..

By this time all four of the children were on the stage .. There then hanged a photo of their child hood .. They stood in front of the with their hands folded and all of them sang

Mr and mrs handa remembered how they wanted the three brothers to pamper their little princess always and take care of her .. They smiled seeing the display of lovee ..

App donoon salamat rahain ..

Sab kay dil main ye armaan hain ..

Dharti pay roop maa baap kaa ..

Us vidhataa ki pehchaan hai ..

They bend down to take their blessing and sang .. the parents picked them up and hugged them getting all emotional and touchy touchy .. They sang and continued dancing while dragging everyone to the stage ..

Everyone appreciated their love care and concern they were really awed by all this ..

Maan and vicky too got a little emotional remembering their parents but then Mr and Mrs handa hugged them telling that they were like parents for them and need not to worry .. They smiled and hugged them back ..

PRECAP : Same as teaser 😉
please comment and tell 😃
Next part ..
Edited by NaimaMSK1 - 13 years ago
abinash079 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved the surprise planned by their family
waitng for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww loved it
the surprise by the kids was awesome
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
woow nyc update dear...
waiting for nxt one...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome update
loved it dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... next part waiting ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Naima darling u r such a big tease mujhe laga k teaser iss update mein hoga par ab next update tak wait karna padega not fair
khair the update was really cool geet complaining and maan giving her dhamki hehe
ab maan k diye hue saree mein geet toh sabse khoobsurat hi lagegina
love-Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome updae
loved it..
song was too good
waiting for next..
con soon

thank you for Pm😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved the surprise planned by their family
waitng for next part

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow. Beautifully written dear.
Love HSSH. And you used the song perfectly here.
Lovely part dear. Very well done.
Cant wait for more :D

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