Pyar ke pal:Go to pg.45 Fast!!! the end!! - Page 23

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Posted: 19 years ago
hey ppl im rly sorry but i had some weird cookie problem 😕 ...neways since that stuff is all taken care of i can finaly post up tha next prt!!!! yay...so just give me sum time and i'll post it!!!! 😃 😃

xoxoxo-Hawa 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome!!! lookin forward 2 the next part!!
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Just the entire fanfic!!!!must say u r a real gud writer!!!!cont soon hawa
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k jaan i 'll wait! i cant wait thoughm to know what happens next!
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lovely part !! 👏

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Originally posted by: hawoo

Part 18

Recap: kripa meets her old friend shahid...angad in a world of his own..until he see's the time and realizes its 5 and aaliyah mite b waiting for him

Angad hurridly ran from there and ran all the way to his campus so he can get his car then pick up aaliyah

while at the party site aaliyah madam was busy wen she lookz at the time and see'z 5:05

aa- OH NO!!!! bhaiu mite b waiting for me

aaliyah qiuckly goes up to karthick

aa- bhai!!! halp me yaar im in big trouble jaldi se drop me at my campus

ka- why aaly?

aa- b/c bhai mite b waitng for me and if he cumz home then my surprise is ruined!!

ka- kk fine...hurry up!!!

aalliyah and karthick quickly go to aaliyah campus and wen they het there itz was 5:15

by the time angad got to his car it was 5:10

a- oh no aali is going to kill me today!!!

he gets in his car and drives off in full speed for a minute until a signal came and a traffic officer

o- excuse me son..do u know u are driving against speed limits

a- uhhh

the officer doesnt say anything else and just gives him a ticketand a long lecture

karthick drops aaliyah a block away from where angad is suppose to pick her up

aa- thnkzz bhai just take care of everthing for me at the party

kk- dont worry aaly

aa- thnkzz bhai!!!

aaliyah run up to the place where angad is suppose to pick her up

aaliyah waits there for 15 minutes by now she calls angad but he doesnt pick up

until she gets a call

aa- hello bhai were r u???😡

p- hey alliyah...oh umm im not ur bhai

aa-embarresed- oh hi kripa how r u?

k- im good and u?

aa- rly bad

k- why wut happened?

aa- explains her situation

k oh do u need help?

aa- uhh..yea omg kripa u r a life saver thnkzz

k- of i'll bring simone with me...where is the party taking place

aa- oh blah blah blah blah (tells her tha place)

k- oh ok u noe wut we will change there in one of the rooms

aa- yea good idea i'll bring my clothes also

aaliyah hangs up and calls angad again but as she does a car comes rite infront of her

a- reaaly fastly-omg im sooo sorry aaliyah itz just that i was working on my consinemt and wen i saw the time it was 5 o clock then i ran to capus got my car and rode off really fast bt the traffic officer caught me and gave me a ticket and a HUGE lecture on driving fast nd all

he was out of breath wen he finished his sentence

aa-thinking- so he thinks i've been waiting for him for a long time..pheww or else i thought i'd be caught

aa- and i care abt all this b/c???😡 u noe how long i have been waiting for you???😡

a- sorry

aa- urghhhhhhh😡

a- sorry kaha na

aa- thik hai lekin ek shaart per

a-thinking- uh oh iski shaarte bhi bhout hi expensive hoti hain

a- kya?

aa- hum kal ki tarah icecream kkyenhe(eat icecream)

a- aaliayh tum bhout moti nahi hogi icecream key liye?😛

aa- bhai😡..hmmphh i dont want to talk to u!!!

a- ok fine w/e just get in the car

aaliayah nd angad are going homw wen aaliyah gets a call

while kripa goes to her dorm

k- simone

s- yea

k- a friend of mine..aaliayh invited us to a party

s- oh kripa...so wen is it

k- we actually have to go now b/c itz a surprise party b-day party for her bro

s- oh

k- we have to go now so we can help...if u want to u can come later

s- yea i think that will be a better idea since im really tires rite now

k- of so the party stars at 8 and here is tha address

s- k kripa..thnkzz

kripa takes her party wear and puts it in a bag and goes off in her car( o yea btw her car was shifted from nyc to london)

kripa gets there and sees a beach area where the party will b taking place

k-thinking- aww such a nice place for a party

aaliyah goes up to someone and taps his shoulder

the person turns around and is none other than ....karthick

kk- u???

k- app??

kk- oh sorry i didnt mean to b mean

k- sorry

kk- so wut r u doing here

k- oh my friend aaliyah has a party here and needs help since she was short on people

kk- aaliyah is my lil sister

k- so wait this is your brother angad's birthday..the from the meeting?

kk-yep..hez the one

k-oh

*****end of prt*****

sorry 4 not contining

ok

Attention: I am changing the title of this ff...from the next prt it will be "Pyar ke pal" and NOT " Everthing's fair in love and war"i just wanted to tell u all😊

preview: the party

xoxoxo- Hawa😊

okie ppl that was tha recap next prt comin in a lil while!!!!😃

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Posted: 19 years ago

part 19

recap:look above u

kripa and karthick get along really well while preparing for the party

while decorating kripa asked some questions about angad from karthick so she can know his choice and make it like so he likes it!!!

while karthick and kripa were decorating

k- uhhh karthick..does ur brother like flowers?😕

ka- no..not really but aaliyah does

k- well then they are going out of here..no offence!!!

ka- why?😕

k- well b/c no.1 itz angadz party not aaliyahs..number 2 it would actually look kind of like a wedding or engagement type of occasion

ka- lol thats what the flower deliverboy told aali...wen she choose the red roses

k- well if she did then i'd think that i was at the wrong place

ka- but what are we going to do with these flowers

k- dont worry... i think i now just what to do

ka- ok

a little while later karthick gets a calland he has to go somewhere and he tell kripa and she says no prob since there was only a little left

kripa added a few touches to the decoration hall

by the time she was done it was 7:00 and the sun was about to set

kripa always loved sunsets so she went to the beac and just sat there on top of some rocks and looked at the sunset

*******

ok ppl we go bak a few hours bak to brother and sister

angad and aaliyah are in the car laughing and eating icecream

then you see the car parking in a drive way

aa- bhai wat are u doing this evening

a- nothing why?

aa- so can i borrow your car?

a- aaliyah darling then wat will i use

aa- ur motorcycle

a- ok fine

angad give aaliyah the key to his car and then aaliyah runs inside and goes to her room

a-thinking- whats rong with her😕

aaliyah comes downstairs after five minutes with a a bag in her hand(ppl u noe those coach bag types😕...wait letme show u!!!)

(kripa also had sumtin like dat but anothe design)

Aaliyah runs out of the hoes and drive the car to the party location

wen aaliyah gets out and goes were the party is...she is memerized by the way the place has been setupit was awsome...but she was surprised her flowers were gone and wondered were they went😕

aa- thinking- i paid a good amount og money for those blue flowers but then she goes a little bit more in side the hall and sees angads birthay cake surounded by the flowers aaliyah bought and between the flower and the cake there were five candles around which made the cake look soo nice

aaliyah looked at the time and realized it was 7:30 and called kripa

aa- hey kripa

k- oh hey

aa- where are you..the place lookz AWSOME!!!

k- thnkzz ...im rite here at the beach looking at the sunset

aa- there is no difference between u and my bhai he also like the sunset and loves the beach thats why party is here

k- oh ...look behind u

aa-why😕

k- just look

aaliyah turns around and kripa is standing there

aa- hey...why arent u ready yet!!?!?!?!?

k- sorry ...i was a tthe beach

aa-of fine lets go to the hotel near by and change

k- yea ok lets go

both gals take their stuff and head toward the hotel

after 30 mins

kripa was wearing this

and aaliah wearing this

********

ppl i will post another prt tonight!!! rite now i have 2 got 2 tha hospital my cuz is havin a baby and since she is tha first daugter in out family to have a baby she is gettin lotz of attention...lol all of my bhabiz r kinda jelous cuz we are trating my cuz like a queen😆

tc

xoxoxo-Hawa

Edited by hawoo - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
ohh cant wait for the new part 😃 continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
ppl plz do comment...my dear jaan muqu go to tha page b4 u 😉 .... 😆

xoxoxo-Hawa
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part 😊 😊 😊
continue soon plzzzzzzz 😊

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