Pyar ke pal:Go to pg.45 Fast!!! the end!! - Page 22

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: hawoo

lol...thnkzz yep ak will finaly talk😉

xoxoxo- Hawa😊



lol no prob...jaan.....continue sooner this time!😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
nice part....cont soon

good luck for ur finals! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: hawoo

yea lol i edit tha post then type the next prt!!

ok😆. it was a wonderful part hawa. continue soon.

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Posted: 19 years ago
hey guys thnkzz 4 tha commentzzi'll try and cont today!!!! 😛

xoxoxo- Hawa 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
oh nice, cant wait continue soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: hawoo

Part 18

Recap: kripa meets her old friend shahid...angad in a world of his own..until he see's the time and realizes its 5 and aaliyah mite b waiting for him

Angad hurridly ran from there and ran all the way to his campus so he can get his car then pick up aaliyah

while at the party site aaliyah madam was busy wen she lookz at the time and see'z 5:05

aa- OH NO!!!! bhaiu mite b waiting for me

aaliyah qiuckly goes up to karthick

aa- bhai!!! halp me yaar im in big trouble jaldi se drop me at my campus

ka- why aaly?

aa- b/c bhai mite b waitng for me and if he cumz home then my surprise is ruined!!

ka- kk fine...hurry up!!!

aalliyah and karthick quickly go to aaliyah campus and wen they het there itz was 5:15

by the time angad got to his car it was 5:10

a- oh no aali is going to kill me today!!!

he gets in his car and drives off in full speed for a minute until a signal came and a traffic officer

o- excuse me son..do u know u are driving against speed limits

a- uhhh

the officer doesnt say anything else and just gives him a ticketand a long lecture

karthick drops aaliyah a block away from where angad is suppose to pick her up

aa- thnkzz bhai just take care of everthing for me at the party

kk- dont worry aaly

aa- thnkzz bhai!!!

aaliyah run up to the place where angad is suppose to pick her up

aaliyah waits there for 15 minutes by now she calls angad but he doesnt pick up

until she gets a call

aa- hello bhai were r u???😡

p- hey alliyah...oh umm im not ur bhai

aa-embarresed- oh hi kripa how r u?

k- im good and u?

aa- rly bad

k- why wut happened?

aa- explains her situation

k oh do u need help?

aa- uhh..yea omg kripa u r a life saver thnkzz

k- of i'll bring simone with me...where is the party taking place

aa- oh blah blah blah blah (tells her tha place)

k- oh ok u noe wut we will change there in one of the rooms

aa- yea good idea i'll bring my clothes also

aaliyah hangs up and calls angad again but as she does a car comes rite infront of her

a- reaaly fastly-omg im sooo sorry aaliyah itz just that i was working on my consinemt and wen i saw the time it was 5 o clock then i ran to capus got my car and rode off really fast bt the traffic officer caught me and gave me a ticket and a HUGE lecture on driving fast nd all

he was out of breath wen he finished his sentence

aa-thinking- so he thinks i've been waiting for him for a long time..pheww or else i thought i'd be caught

aa- and i care abt all this b/c???😡 u noe how long i have been waiting for you???😡

a- sorry

aa- urghhhhhhh😡

a- sorry kaha na

aa- thik hai lekin ek shaart per

a-thinking- uh oh iski shaarte bhi bhout hi expensive hoti hain

a- kya?

aa- hum kal ki tarah icecream kkyenhe(eat icecream)

a- aaliayh tum bhout moti nahi hogi icecream key liye?😛

aa- bhai😡..hmmphh i dont want to talk to u!!!

a- ok fine w/e just get in the car

aaliayah nd angad are going homw wen aaliyah gets a call

while kripa goes to her dorm

k- simone

s- yea

k- a friend of mine..aaliayh invited us to a party

s- oh kripa...so wen is it

k- we actually have to go now b/c itz a surprise party b-day party for her bro

s- oh

k- we have to go now so we can help...if u want to u can come later

s- yea i think that will be a better idea since im really tires rite now

k- of so the party stars at 8 and here is tha address

s- k kripa..thnkzz

kripa takes her party wear and puts it in a bag and goes off in her car( o yea btw her car was shifted from nyc to london)

kripa gets there and sees a beach area where the party will b taking place

k-thinking- aww such a nice place for a party

aaliyah goes up to someone and taps his shoulder

the person turns around and is none other than ....karthick

kk- u???

k- app??

kk- oh sorry i didnt mean to b mean

k- sorry

kk- so wut r u doing here

k- oh my friend aaliyah has a party here and needs help since she was short on people

kk- aaliyah is my lil sister

k- so wait this is your brother angad's birthday..the from the meeting?

kk-yep..hez the one

k-oh

*****end of prt*****

sorry 4 not contining

ok

Attention: I am changing the title of this ff...from the next prt it will be "Pyar ke pal" and NOT " Everthing's fair in love and war"i just wanted to tell u all😊

preview: the party

xoxoxo- Hawa😊

ok u guys now this ff will be called "pyar ke pal" i changed the name b/c i had a different concept for this story but it turned the other way around...lol😆 i dont know if it has happened to you but it happens a lot with me wat ever i want the part to be about it just wont fit in or is just plain weird😕... and i also learned that i cant always cont wenever i have time so the ff wont be a as long as i thought...but it wont be short😉...but i do promise you this summer i will rite prtz...but i also have to study for my SSHSAT exam so i can get into a good H.S.

hope you all understand

xoxoxo- Hawa

P.S. im cont. in a lil while😃

Edited by hawoo - 19 years ago
ruby89 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
lol hahaha yeah its ok it happens 😆 . continue soon cant wait 😊 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
hawa. u r right! i forgot that my ff has a name 😆 😆 one day when i luked an ff called pyaar, i luked at it and then realised its my own ff 😆 . its ok hawa. continue when u can. all the best for ur exams
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Posted: 19 years ago
gr8 part
cont soon
cnt wait 4 da next part
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Posted: 19 years ago
thsi is really gud plz continue!

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