IPKKND:Fatal Attraction Chapters 1-6 - Page 31

ummm hello

Originally posted by: anonymous4444

awesome post. Aditya sound interesting. Moreover I understood it was Arnav who kissed her on the dance floor or else she wouldn't have loved it.

Just a simple suggestion from my side. In IPKKND Arnav is at a denial of his love for Khushi and even Khushi wants no answers from her Devi Maiyya. I have very little expectations from the jealousy track as well.

I feel the jealousy track, can only make Arnav realize his love for Khushi. But, confession may not happen because Arnav thinks love is another name for weakness in a man, but he doesn't understand the fact that our weaknesses are on itself are our greatest strengths.

Till now whatever character was introduced be it Lavanya or NK they were all at loss or will be at loss because they either wanted to hang around with Khushi or Arnav. They tried to come between Arshi's complicated relationship, so their hearts had to be broken.

You can introduce a character in the FF who has no feelings for either of them, but wishes to take advantage of Arnav ( let that person be business rival or anybody who wishes to take revenge from Arnav) through Khushi as he/she is aware of Arnav's feelings for Khushi. So then Arnav will try hard to bring Khushi on his side by hook or crook. I think Aditya can be that character. Basically my suggestion is we need a hard core villain in the story, as it is said love will drive them apart but misunderstandings will bring them closer.

Anyways you have written it really well, looking forward to the next update. Keep it up the story has got a lot of potential.

Originally posted by: SiRul

When will u update ? 😆 Im addicted