Don (RN) Pt12 'Realisation pt2' pg35 - Page 5

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Shaina_b thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

The starting was brilliant and the Mumbai mafia was well described!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

I loved the way you introduced Rajveer as a sharp and cruel Don!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Uske saamne baithe aadmi ki toh haalat kharab thi!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

I just loved it when Raj shot that guy and said in style that he hates people who speak in a loud voice and especially those who speak when they are told not to!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

It was totally a dialogue and style to which the audience would cheer and wolf whistle!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Raj did the right thing by killing that bas***d as he deserved to be punished for what he did!!!!! 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Jo kaam zameer ko marde woh usse kabhi maaf nahi kar sakta!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj's power is just amazing and he rules over his illegal businesses as a king rules over his empire!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

It is great to see that inspite of being a Don he is still principled and has not lost his ethics in this bad mafia world!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

He is good enough to take care of the girl's family!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj has a killer attitude and he is too hot as Don!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj and Naina's first meeting was too good!!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Naina was late for an appointment and tried to get on the lift Raj had gotten into!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

But his guards prevented it and she was irritated to the core with them!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

When their eyes met for the first time, they were enchanted and just couldn't look away!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

Raj is mesmerized by her beauty and her amazing bold eyes aur woh toh gaya kaam se at first sight!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj could have let her into the lift and helped her but being the arrogant guy he is, how can he make things easy for her??πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

He just ordered his guards to close the doors and Naina was sooo angry!!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

She swore to teach him a good lesson if she saw him again!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Poor Naina finally reached for the meeting but there also Raj's bodyguards stopped her!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

When she entered, Raj said about her being late but hearing her voice he turned around to see her!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina realized he was the same man who she had vowed to teach a lesson but she had to leave personal opinions out now as he was her client!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

Raj is rude to her for being late and wasting his time and then just staring at him!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina started narrating the proposal but Raj is lost in her sweet voice and busy observing her instead!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

First he interrupted her to ask her name and felt it was a sweet name just like her and so true for her as her eyes were beautiful!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina is uncomfortable by his staring and just wants to finish the presentation!!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Instead of listening to the presentation, Raj is mesmerized by her and lost into her magic!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😍 😍 😍 😍

Naina is really practical and inspite of everything gave her presentation very well and wrapped it up!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

What a perfect question to be asked after the presentation, "What are you doing tonight?"!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

It was the best dialogue of this part!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Naina was surprised with this question as it was totally out of the blue!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

She cleverly snubbed him as no way was she going to answer this question!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

The way Raj came close to her made her lose her senses and she stared into his deep eyes!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

Raj wanted to see his reflection in her eyes and I am sure he appears more special in them!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊Haaaiii!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He knew she couldn't resist him and his look had totally entrapped her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina finally broke the spell and burst out on him as she was really angry at what he did with her!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Naina usse kya kya sunake chali gayi magar Raj ne kuch nahi kaha!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 😎 😎 😎 😎

First time in his life he has met someone who is not afraid of him and dared to speak to him like that!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is only thinking about her and I am sure he won't take her rejection lying down!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Naina he will not leave you so easily!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†


Edited by Shaina_b - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Hi Arwa...πŸ€—How are you?πŸ˜ƒ

Wow the update is wonderful loved it.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Rajveer and his attitude wooof...!!!😳😳😳

Oh Don is gone at first sight..πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³

And his dialogue WHAT ARE YOU DOING TONIGHT..πŸ˜³πŸ˜† and Naina was just...???😲🀣


Naina and Rajveer's first meeting is verry interesting...πŸ˜³πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰

fabulous update
con't soon
Ayushi.⭐️
Edited by sainiayshi14 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
lovely UD πŸ‘πŸ‘

aww DON 😳😳... good to see inspite of being DON he is still prinicipled πŸ˜†πŸ˜†... not lost his ethics in this bad mafia world πŸ˜†πŸ˜†... Rajveer will be Rajveer 😳😳😳 no matter what profession he goes for πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

hero heroine met πŸ˜›πŸ‘πŸ‘ ...good equal oppononents πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ... πŸ˜†... fire works b/w two expected every now & then πŸ˜†πŸ˜†... & guess our Don gaya kaam se at the first sight πŸ˜›πŸ˜†...seeing how much attenition he paid on lovely lady & how much on presentation πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

& what a perfect question to be asked after the presentation 🀣 "what u are doing tonite" πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

guess Don mite want to sing for her Tere Naina wich main doob jaawa 😍 ...

Atough catch for DON so all the best for him πŸ‘πŸΌ ...wud wait for DON's reaction to naina's rejection...surely he is not the one to take it lying down πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†.

contiue soon 😊😊



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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Hi Arwa

Update was just amazing..πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Rajveer is potraying the role of don here who has certain principles in life and he follows them religiously.
His first meeting with Naina was pretty interesting.Here she was talking abt business while Raj was just staring at her.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
He asks Naina for dinner but she refuses him.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
I hope he gets to know now that not every girl falls for money and charm.Naina is certainly different and that had wat intrigued his interest.😊
Pls continue soon
Bye
Edited by suhana.dixit - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
hey arwa!!!

nice part!!!

loved it!!

beautifully written!!!

plz cont soon ...ASAP!!!!!!

love

esha



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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
gr8 updt...πŸ‘

luved d characterization of Rajveer...it was marvelousπŸ˜³πŸ‘

and RN intro scene was amazing as well...πŸ‘

awesome updt...
πŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47

nice update. 😊 😊 😊 ..

hmm so Rajeev is the DON...likes his new character..whats good about him inspite of being DON he is still prinicipled, good to see he is disciplined in his acts 😊😊n know what is morally right n not...quite impressive...hmm so people afraid of him...n hona bhi chahoyai...

The first encounter of RN was too good...the lift scence was really nice, she was so irritated aik to waisai hi she was late n ye aur late ho rhi hain is wja sai...so finally she reached n gets a shock on seeing him πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...phr bhi she was doing her work but rajeev was just mesmerized by her beaauty n keep on staring herπŸ˜†πŸ˜† & what a question he asked after the presentation what u are doing tonight πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...n naina refused him to answer, oh he'll not leave u so easily...

waiting for next update...cont soon

take care


Edited by Innocent_eyes - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
wonderful part😊 😊 πŸ˜‰

description of rajveer the way he ruled over his illegal business was just perfect as a king rules iver his empire and the fear which the other man has while standing infront of him was showing that how he controls everybody whether he is friend , colleague or an enemyπŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

and the rn meeting was simply superb in their first meeting they fought a little and when the business work is going on then rajveer was truly mesmerised after observing naina and just keenly looking at her with lots of interest in her and even forgot about his meeting with her 😊 😊 πŸ˜‰

but out of a blue rajveer's question towards naina was just shocking for her as he was asking her schedule of the day's night 😲 πŸ˜• 😳 well looking forward for the next meeting of rn😊 😊 😊

pls continue soon😊
shreya😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

awee superb cute update, loved it a lot πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Wow how that start is brilliant and the way u portrayed Raj just like a perfect, sharp, cruel Don, it's outstanding that's what i love in ur writing. 😍 😍
The thing i liked the most in this update is Rajveer's principles in crime too, the crimes which r against his zameer are really worth to hate it to the core.πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
I'm happy that he killed that b*****d, vo is k hi kabil tha.😑 😑
The attitude in Raj is really killer hieee he is too hot in this Don avtaar. 😳 😍
Wow the meeting of Raj and Naina was too gud, she was irritated to the core with him and his guards as well. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
He was rlly rude to her he could have help her but the arogant RSS how can b anything that much easy for him? πŸ˜• πŸ˜•
Poor gal reached finally for meeting anyhow but again Raj and his bg's?😑 😑
The best scene and the dial was 'what r u doing tonight?' 😍 😍
Raj was lost in his charm and Naina was amazed that how can sum1 ask her such quest in official meeting? 😲 😲
And the way Raj came close to her making her loose all her sense, wow kya ada thi bande ki mai to gayi just like Naina.😳 😳
She was trying her best to control her anger but finally it bursted out but Raj was silent, he didn't say nething to her was just cool!!! 😎 😎
When he asked her name and she told Naina he was lost in her eye's magic, Don to gaya kaam se.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ First time in his life he met sum1 who didn't fear him and behaved in this way to my hot Don, great. πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
Pls pls pls update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heya Arwa great update πŸ‘
wow that was super hot attitude of Rajveer, as a perfect Don 😍 Don is se accha ho bhi nahi sakta tha, jis tarah aur jis crime k liye os ne us aadmi ko mara hai that was really justified. Par ab RN k interaction k liye kya kahoon, amazing and brilliant. πŸ‘πŸΌ Naina ka Raj se yu milna aur Raj ka us ki nigahon me kho jaana was awesome. 😳 Naina ne jis tarah se saare problems ko face karte hue Raj k saamne normally apna presentation diya it shows ki kitne practical hain vo. πŸ˜› Par Raj ne jaise poocha hai us se night date k liye that was just too gud and Naina ne bhi socha nahi tha ki all of a sudden aisa hoga. 😲 Par Raj bhi kya sochta hoga ki kitne ajeeb ladki mile hai is baar jo kisi se nahi darti hai aur kya response diya us ne Raj ko, great. πŸ‘ update karna jaldi.
Edited by desaiprachi07 - 13 years ago

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