Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!! - thanks very much
The starting was brilliant and the Mumbai mafia was well described!!!!!π π π π - I'm glad u really liked it
I loved the way you introduced Rajveer as a sharp and cruel Don!!!!!!π π π π π π π π π - yeh he is very dangerous
Uske saamne baithe aadmi ki toh haalat kharab thi!!!!!π π π π π π π π π π - hehehe yes of course he is powerful
I just loved it when Raj shot that guy and said in style that he hates people who speak in a loud voice and especially those who speak when they are told not to!!!!!π π π π π π π π - yeh it just reflects how much in control he is all the time
It was totally a dialogue and style to which the audience would cheer and wolf whistle!!!!!π π π π π - yes most definitely it was
Raj did the right thing by killing that bas***d as he deserved to be punished for what he did!!!!! π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ - yes he did as he was a monster
Jo kaam zameer ko marde woh usse kabhi maaf nahi kar sakta!!!!!π³ π³ π³ π³ - haan oske sakht khilaaf hain wo
Raj's power is just amazing and he rules over his illegal businesses as a king rules over his empire!!!!!π π π π π π π π π π π - yes he rules like a king alright
It is great to see that inspite of being a Don he is still principled and has not lost his ethics in this bad mafia world!!!!!π π π π π ππΌ ππΌ ππΌ ππΌ - haan wo bure kaam karta hain lekin ek daire me rehkar
He is good enough to take care of the girl's family!!!!!! π π π π - yes he never believes in injustice
Raj has a killer attitude and he is too hot as Don!!!!!π π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ - hehehe yes very hottt
Raj and Naina's first meeting was too good!!!!!!π π π π - hmmm yeh it was different
Naina was late for an appointment and tried to get on the lift Raj had gotten into!!!!!!π π π π π π π π - yes she had to rush around
But his guards prevented it and she was irritated to the core with them!!!!!π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ - well naturally as it was a public place and not someone's property
When their eyes met for the first time, they were enchanted and just couldn't look away!!!!!!π π π π π π π π - the very affect they always have when in presence of each other
Raj is mesmerized by her beauty and her amazing bold eyes aur woh toh gaya kaam se at first sight!!!!!π π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ - haan yeh to hona hee tha
Raj could have let her into the lift and helped her but being the arrogant guy he is, how can he make things easy for her??π π π π - well he really doesn't have that much of a soft heart
He just ordered his guards to close the doors and Naina was sooo angry!!!!!!π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ - yes very angry
She swore to teach him a good lesson if she saw him again!!!!!π³ π³ π³ π³ - yes she was bound to be so angry
Poor Naina finally reached for the meeting but there also Raj's bodyguards stopped her!!!!!π π π π π - ab kya kare kismat me hee wo likha hain
When she entered, Raj said about her being late but hearing her voice he turned around to see her!!!!!π π π π π π π π - he is arrogant yet he forgets everything by looking at her
Naina realized he was the same man who she had vowed to teach a lesson but she had to leave personal opinions out now as he was her client!!!!π€ π€ π€ π€ - yes it was very unfortunate for her
Raj is rude to her for being late and wasting his time and then just staring at him!!!!π³ π³ π³ π³ - rudeness comes with the package my dear
Naina started narrating the proposal but Raj is lost in her sweet voice and busy observing her instead!!!!!π π π π π π π π - as i said he forgot everything in her presence
First he interrupted her to ask her name and felt it was a sweet name just like her and so true for her as her eyes were beautiful!!!!π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ - yes he was mesmerised
Naina is uncomfortable by his staring and just wants to finish the presentation!!!!!!π π π π - yeh the poor girl is very uncomfortable
Instead of listening to the presentation, Raj is mesmerized by her and lost into her magic!!!!!!π π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π π π π - yeh as it's more interesting
Naina is really practical and inspite of everything gave her presentation very well and wrapped it up!!!!! π π π π - yes since she is very efficient in her work
What a perfect question to be asked after the presentation, "What are you doing tonight?"!!!!!π π π π π π π π π π π π - hehehehe a very surprising question indeed
It was the best dialogue of this part!!!!!π π π π π π π π π - thank you
Naina was surprised with this question as it was totally out of the blue!!!!!π² π² π² π² - yeh totally unexpected
She cleverly snubbed him as no way was she going to answer this question!!!!!π π π π π π π π π - yeh as why wud she give her details to a stranger
The way Raj came close to her made her lose her senses and she stared into his deep eyes!!!!!π π π π π π π π π - well yes his aura is powerful
Raj wanted to see his reflection in her eyes and I am sure he appears more special in them!!!!!!π π π π π π π πHaaaiii!!!!π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ - haan bohat hee special hain kyu ke aage chalke oski aakhon me hee basne waala hain
He knew she couldn't resist him and his look had totally entrapped her!!!!!π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ - yes unfortunately she was trapped
Naina finally broke the spell and burst out on him as she was really angry at what he did with her!!!!π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ - haan any self respecting girl wud react that way
Naina usse kya kya sunake chali gayi magar Raj ne kuch nahi kaha!!!!!π π π π π π π π π π π π - well moka hee kaha mila ose
First time in his life he has met someone who is not afraid of him and dared to speak to him like that!!!!!π π π π π - yes and he was left in awe
Raj is only thinking about her and I am sure he won't take her rejection lying down!!!!!π π π π ππΌ ππΌ ππΌ ππΌ - most definitely he wont
Naina he will not leave you so easily!!!!!!π π π π π π π π π - of course oska peecha thori chorega ab