Don (RN) Pt12 'Realisation pt2' pg35 - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update.

loved it.

beautifully written.

good job.

raj is insanely in love with naina.

thanks for the PM.

plz cont soon.

esha
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh gawwwddd!!!!
that was sizzling haawwt Update☺️☺️☺️

awesome!!!

Cont.soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awwesum prt ...
Rajveer needs to have control of his thoughts ...lol...looks like naina is falling fo him ...updt sooon plezzz...dont make us wait plezzz...eagerlyyy waiting ...thnxx fo d pm dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Welcome back to Don 😆😆...long time no see 😆😆...

lovely UD as always 👏⭐️

I'm not sure whethe Don gona kill naina in end but one thing is for sure...Don's fantasies & dreams will kill Don himself 😳😛...poor DON gaya kaam se 😆😆...all the best to him 👍🏼 😆😆...
hope sooner or later real naina turns into his fantasy naina 😳 😛...& hope in the process Don shud not loose his patience & force himself on poor girl
naina is being as strong as she can be...😊😊 ...
good to see Don here once again as a mentor teaching her something new 😆😆😆 old habits die hard 😆😆
it doesn't matter he is a captain or Don he will end up teaching her something 😆 but not selfless as captain else he wud have lost 😉😆

poor girl lost the sword fight 😛 better luck next time 😛😛 ...& wait for when Don decides to claim his prize 😆😆😆...

continue soon 😛& do something for poor don & his naina 😆😆 else he will surely loose it 😆😆😆



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Posted: 13 years ago
Mindblowing...agli update plzzz jaldi karo
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update 👏 👏 👏
Start was hot & passionate where Raj was playing with Naina in his illusion and Naina was pleasing him just in d way he wants. 😳 😳 😳
Song was great. 👍🏼
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Raj ne sahi socha ki kam se kam us ko Naina ko itna to chance dena hi chahiye ki thodi der k liye vo bahar jaaye thoda enjoy karo aur fresh ho jaaye us ka mood. 😊 😊 😊
Naina was highly disappointed that she couldn't go out of that jail for her but she was a bit relax that at least Raj showed some mercy to her.
Raj is really too much, he and his dreamland. 😛 😛 😛 He is always busy with Naina in his dreams taking pleasures of her. 😳 😳 😳
The sword fighting reminded me of Jodha Akbar.
Same just like they fought when Akbar went to her house to bought her back at his place.
Naina knew how cruel Raj is and she once again saw that when he killed that man but Naina was lost in his strong n muscular body and this attracted her to the core.

She was mesmerized by his appearance and couldn't think anything beyond it. 😉 😉 😉 When Raj was about to do something she came back to senses.😛 😛 😛
Wow bet just like Jodha Akbar and as v knew just like Hrithik won Raj would win but Naina was really smart and fast learner.
She picked up the steps well and could read Raj's eyes. 😉 😉 😉
Naina couldn't won the bet but in d way she was appreciating his act when he was about to kiss her. 😳 😳 😳 Her body language gave all the positive signs to Raj.😉 😉 😉
Even Naina was unaware that how she couldn't resist his charm.😉 😉 😉 I liked his thought that he will not force Naina and she will come to him herself. 😃 😃 😃
Update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful part Arwa😊😊

First part was confusing earlier phir mentos khaane ke baad dimaag ki batti jali ki yahan kis cheez ki baat ho rahi hai well kab tak sapno me hi rahega Raj aur wo bhi aise sapne😆😆😉

Abhimanyu bhi lagta hai galat waqt per aa gaya ye to accha hua wo hi tha nahi koi aur pit ta zaroor😆😆😆

Raj ko jaldi kuch karo uski day dreaming aur hallucinations to badhte hi ja rahe hain aj ek servant mein bhi usko Naina dikh rahi hai kahin problem na ho jaaye😳😆😆

Jab Naina ko pata hai wo Raj se jeet nahi paegi to bekar ka competition hi kyon kar rahi aur ultimately wo haar to gayi hi aur embaras bhi hui uske saamne waise behave karke lekin admire zaroor karne lagi hai ab🥱😆😉

Continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!! - thanks a lot for loving it so much
The beginning was very romantic and passionate!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - it sure was
It was just sizzling hot!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - i'm glad u found it so
Rajveer was playing with Naina in his fantasy and Naina was pleasing him in just the way he wants!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - of course as in his fantasy he rules
Abhimanyu jab dekho galat waqt pe aa jaata hai but thankfully Rajveer wasn't actually doing anything with Naina!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - hehehe yes he has very bad timing yet if Raj wud have been with real Naian then he wud have killed Abhi
Rakesh has been bailed and that's bad but Rajveer is confident of taking him down!!!! - that he always is
Poor Naina is not allowed to go out from her room and now she does what she is told as she is afraid of Rajveer!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 - yeh she is stuck
Oh God!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲Rajveer ko uski maid mein bhi Naina dikh rahi hai!!!! - bilkul paagal jo hogaya hain
Rajveer's fantasties and dreams will surely kill him!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Don gaya kaam se!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - haan definitely gaya
Rajveer is really too much and he is always busy with Naina in his dreamland where he is playing with her body!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - what can he do he can't help the bursting lust in his body
The song is very nice and apt for Rajveer's condition now!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yeh when i heard it it was so beautiful that it reminded me of them
I loved the term "his Naina world"!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 - aaaw yes, where nothing else exists
It is really nice of Rajveer that he is avoiding Naina just because he does not want to lose control in front of the real Naina!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes u can say he is a gentleman in those terms hehehe
I hope sooner or later the real Naina does turn into his fantasy Naina and fulfills all his fantasies!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - hmmm lets see if that really does happen
The rain scene was very hot and romantic!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - they have very few of them so wanted to make most of ti
It was very cute to see them playing in the rain even though it was just his illusion!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yeh they r always cute
Rajveer is indeed very sweet to wait for Naina to be willing rather than forcing himself on her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - as i said yes it is lust at the moment yet he isn't that hungry of a an animal to lose his dignity
I loved it that only Naina was going to possess his bed along with him or else it was going to remain empty all his life!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - yeh its only her right
Thank you sooo much Arwa for making Rajveer like this!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 - luv him this way
Any other writer would probably have shown him sleeping with others in the meantime instead of the fantasy Naina that Rajveer is having pleasure with!!!!🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢 - aaaw thanks for believing in me
Yeh Rajveer ne accha kiya that he let Naina come out of her room so that she can enjoy outside for a while!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 - yes he developed a heart in the end
Naina was disappointed that she was not freed but still she was pleased to roam around in the fresh air!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - it was like being able to roam around free in jail
Yeh Naina bhi ajeeb hai and while she does not want to meet Rajveer, she is still wondering where he is and what he is doing!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕 😛 😛 😛 😛 - she can't deny the attraction she has towards him
Rajveer surely looks hot while fencing and Naina is mesmerized by his appearance!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - oh he sure looks very hot indeed
As expected Rajveer always wins and it is good that he killed the hotel owner!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 - the word 'lose' doesn't exist in hsi dictionary
Rajveer's heart tells him when Naina is near and that is soo romantic!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ - yeh dil se dil ka connection
Naina is lost to such an extent that he kissed her on the cheeks and still she did not protest!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - as i said she can't deny her attraction towards him
But she came back to her senses just as he was about to kiss her on the lips and thus he did not get his kiss!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😆 😆 😆 😆 - oh yes she isn't that mush enchanted yet
Rajveer challenged her to a fencing match and Naina never backs down from a challenge and so accepted it even though she does not know how to fence!!!!! - its abt her ego
It was good to see Naina's self confidence back with the weapon in her hand as this is the Naina we all know!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 - Yes the one standing up for herself
But sad that she wants to kill Rajveer with it but thankfully better sense prevailed on her!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 - de3sperate times call for desperate measures
It was great to see Rajveer once again as a mentor teaching Naina something new!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 - he shall always remain her mentor one way or the other
He reminded me of Captain Rajveer but he is not as selfless as him or else he would have lost to Naina!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yeh this one doesn't have it in him to lose
Rajveer reminded her of her horse riding experience and he doesn't want to see her get hurt and caught her before she had a bad fall!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes he certainly doesn't want that
But Naina is already too hurt and she is going to fight till her last breath for her freedom!!!!! - that she is
The sword fighting scene totally reminded me of Jodha Akbar!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - our best sword fight scene ever hehehe
Naina is a really fast learner and picked up the moves quickly!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 - she has the eye for it
Where exactly does Rajveer want to use her fast learning capabilities to his advantage??😛 😛 😛 😛 - that my dear u shall know very soon
She does manage to surprise Rajveer a few times with him barely escaping her attacks!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 - one thing he loves abt her that she is full of surprises
As expected, Rajveer won and advanced towards her to claim his prize!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😉 😉 😉 😉 - he always gets what he wants
Naina should have known that she can never win this game as she did not know how to fence and had only just started picking up the moves!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 - she is thinking too much in anger and not with a clear mind
Naina became very nervous as Rajveer trapped her against the stone wall and Rajveer knew he had her under his control!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes her body gave him all the right signs
She appreciated him getting close to her and her body language gave all the positive signs to Rajveer!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 - oh yes
Rajveer was also aroused and it was good to see him get some release!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - he needs it so much
Naina just can't resist him and is literally waiting for his encounter!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - no matter how much she tries she just cant resist
But Rajveer does not kiss her as he couldn't take advantage of her vulnerable state!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊He is indeed very nice!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - of course a gentleman hehehe
Even then he has to show his superiority and arrogantly said he would get his kiss when he wants it!!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - he isn't the don just like that, he is the king
Naina is one confused girl and now she is angry that he did not kiss her and and showed his control over her!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 - big confused girl
Why doesn't she decide what she wants??😕 😕 😕 😕 - coz she doesn't know herself
Poor Naina is disgusted with herself when she realized how close she can come to surrendering herself to Rajveer!!!!! - yes she can't believe she is losing herself to him

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit


Hi Arwa

Nice part..😃 - thanks a lot Suhana

Raj is in love with Naina but isn't it just lust.he craves for her coz she is not available.🤢 - yes currently it is only lust

Raj is not my favourite in this fiction of yours but atleast he did the gentle thing when he backed off from Naina when she was feeling quite vulnerable. - hehehe yeh he is very dark in this so its hard to like him all the time

Poor thing!! she was disgusted with herself when she realized how close she had come to surrender. - she sure was





Originally posted by: -Priti11-

awesooome upd.
loved it...
tfd pm...



Thanks alot for loving the part
and ur welcome abt the pm



Originally posted by: backy

awesome update.


loved it.

beautifully written.

good job. - thanks very much esha

raj is insanely in love with naina. - yes he is obsessed with her currently yet love doesn't really exist

thanks for the PM. - ur welcome

plz cont soon.

esha





Originally posted by: Deepanwita

awesome ff

superb
loved it
cont. soon



Thanks a lot for loving the fic

hope to c u regularly




Originally posted by: sainiayshi14

Oh gawwwddd!!!!

that was sizzling haawwt Update☺️☺️☺️

awesome!!!

Cont.soon



thanks a lot ayushi for loving it so much



Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

awwesum prt ... - thanks very much

Rajveer needs to have control of his thoughts ...lol... - hehehe yeh he is going crazy

looks like naina is falling fo him ... - yeh she can't resist for long

updt sooon plezzz...dont make us wait plezzz...eagerlyyy waiting ...thnxx fo d pm dear - ur welcome





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Mindblowing...agli update plzzz jaldi karo



Thanks a lot for loving it so much
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -purnima-

Welcome back to Don 😆😆...long time no see 😆😆... - hehehe yeh

lovely UD as always 👏⭐️ - thanks a lot

I'm not sure whethe Don gona kill naina in end but one thing is for sure...Don's fantasies & dreams will kill Don himself 😳😛...poor DON gaya kaam se 😆😆...all the best to him 👍🏼 😆😆... - interesting thought u have here

hope sooner or later real naina turns into his fantasy naina 😳 😛...& hope in the process Don shud not loose his patience & force himself on poor girl - yeh lets see

naina is being as strong as she can be...😊😊 ... - she always is

good to see Don here once again as a mentor teaching her something new 😆😆😆 old habits die hard 😆😆 - yep they do now no matter what character he is in

it doesn't matter he is a captain or Don he will end up teaching her something 😆 but not selfless as captain else he wud have lost 😉😆 - hahaha now there is the difference

poor girl lost the sword fight 😛 better luck next time 😛😛 ...& wait for when Don decides to claim his prize 😆😆😆... - hmmm that wud be worth the wait

continue soon 😛& do something for poor don & his naina 😆😆 else he will surely loose it 😆😆😆
- hehehe don';t worry soon he shall get his release


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