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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!! - thanks very much
Rajveer is totally obssessed with Naina and if he doesn't get her soon I am sure he would go mad!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› - yes he most certainly will loose his mind
Don gaya kaam se and really love can make a man go nuts and that is what has happened to Rajveer!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yeh love is a strong thing which takes care of everyone no matter what
Rajveer has changed a lot and hasn't gotten anyone killed in days which is very bad for his business!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ - very bad indeed
The hotel owner is very stupid and doesn't know that he is messing with the wrong person!!!!!πŸ€ͺ πŸ€ͺ πŸ€ͺ πŸ€ͺ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - yeh he totally forgot abt Raj's power
Rajveer tried to do things in a civilized manner at first magar laato ke bhoot baato se kaha maante hai??πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - hehehehe egjactly
I loved the way Rajveer was calmly drinking coffee even when the hotel owner was threatening him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - well he is very confident that's why
Rajveer may be distracted but his senses are still alert and he surely knows how to get what he wants!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ - always he gets what he wants
No one goes over him and Rajveer was going to kill that hotel owner but aise waqt pe bhi his fantasy Naina appeared!!!! - hehehe isliye hee to dimaag kharab hogaya hain oska

His fantasy Naina stopped Rajveer from killing that man and he actually listened to her!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ - yes he did
That man ran for his life but Rajveer shouldn't have let him go as that man can be dangerous for him in the future!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” 😈 😈 😈 😈 - yes there are possibilities for that yet raj is not in the right state of mind
Rajveer is soo sweet and so is his reason for wanting that hotel!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - no matter how evil he becomes he shall always remain sweet
Was Rajveer referring to Naina as well when he said that sometimes you need to use force over things you wish to possess??πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - perhaps he was
What Abhi said was right but Rajveer doesn't want advice from him and who is going to argue with Rajveer!!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• - yep it is nothing but dangerous to argue with him
Rajveer just wants to relax but his fantasized Naina is not not leaving him alone!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - well only he had built it up so much in his mind
Rakesh is taking panga with the wrong person and as expected Rajveer is totally prepared for him!!!!! πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - yep he is always a step ahead of his enemies
Rajveer ne usse accha phasaya for the time being and walked away with his diamonds!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - yes he is very smart to get caught that easily
I loved his dialogue that winning Rajveer is not only difficult but impossible!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - oh yeh it reflects power
It reminded me of the famous dialogue from Don ke Don ko pakadna muskil hi nahi namumkin hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - hehehe of course
Naina is another problem for Rajveer as she gives a damn about his money and power!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 - yep she cud care less as she totally hates him
But this is what is attracting him towards her as she is a challenge for him!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - he sure loves challenges
Rajveer had sent Naina gifts everyday but all the flowers go down the drain and she wants to throw the gifts on his face when they meet!!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 - of course since she is very angry with his insolence
So Naina loves the farmhouse and would love to live there!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - well who wouldn't if it id the most beautiful place around
I am sure that can be arranged since soon it would all be hers along with its owner!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 - hmmm surely
Naina also gets mesmerized by Rajveer who was looking damn handsome while horse riding and she was unable to take her eyes off him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍 - yes she was totally held under spell
I love Rajveer on a horse and he surely looks hot riding it!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - he definitely does
Rajveer noticed this and challenged her to ride his horse Rocky aur Naina kahan peeche hatnewaali thi!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - haan ose bhi to khatro se khelna accha lagta hain
She has to prove that she is brave and can handle anything!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - yes she most definitely does need to
Rajveer is thinking about enjoying her like he enjoys with his fantasized Naina and no wonder Naina thought he was a creep!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - hehehhe he just can't help it now that she is in front of him in real
Naina ko horse riding aati nahi hai phir bhi she tried to ride Rajveer's temperamental horse which only Rajveer could handle!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - of course they always do that
Was Rajveer's warning about Rocky referring only to his horse or to himself as well??πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ - well the hidden meaning is referring to him
Seems like Rajveer's horse is as temperamental and giving as much trouble to poor Naina as its master!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - yes it is after all everything related to him is meant to be just like him
Thank God that Rajveer was ready and quickly went to her rescue and saved her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - just like the hero
They had fallen on a haystack and were in each other's arms and the closeness between them made Rajveer go crazy!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - he half was so he became full
Rajveer and Naina were sooo romantic and passionate!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - they always are
The song is very nice and seductive and perfect for Rajveer's fantasy!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yeh one of the best seductive songs to use in that situation
The lines do fit Rajveer and Naina's situation very well!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - yes they do
It all turned out to be another of Rajveer's fantasies!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - hehehe he has gone crazy that he can't tell the difference now
He actually started kissing her in reality like he does in his dreams and Naina was bound to be angry at this!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - of course as it was totally unaccpetable
Waise Rajveer saved her and he deserves a thank you kiss atleast but yahan toh Naina ne usse accha khasa suna diya!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 - ghalat kiya to ghussa to hogi hee na
But this resulted in him kidnapping her as we had seen in the beginning as he was going to have her anyhow!!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” - yes his frustration led to it
Ab pata nahi kya hoga now that Naina will be with him but she will hate him even more!!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• - hmmm, lets see what happens

Edited by awaazilicious - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: -purnima-

Lovely πŸ‘πŸ‘ - thanks alot

long time no see DON πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† was missing u πŸ˜³πŸ˜†πŸ˜†so welcome back πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ - yeh it had been a very long time

bechara πŸ˜†πŸ˜† DON gaya kaam se πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† dats called "when Love takes over" πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...- yeh he has gone bonkers

hotel owner messed with a wrong guyπŸ˜†...no matter how much distracted DON may be ...but still no1 goes over him πŸ˜³πŸ˜† - yep no one does as thats power

Rakesh .be prepared to face don the next time u meet him πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† - yes he needs to be very careful

Rajveer's horse seem to be as tempermental & trouble maker for naina as the master πŸ˜†πŸ˜†... poor naina - yes well he has been trained by him so has to be just like him

aww good Rajveer saved her πŸ˜›πŸ˜› he deserves a Thank you kiss atleast πŸ˜† - yes he sure does

oh teri 😲😲 a kidnap😲... wonder if that gonna help Rajveer πŸ˜› or will take naina more far from him πŸ˜› - hmmm well let's see

though he doesn't need itπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† still all the best DON πŸ‘πŸΌ - he surely needs it with Naina



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Posted: 13 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit


Hi Arwa - hey Suhana

Raj is surely a goner now.Love can make a man act like monkey and Raj is surely acting like one. - hehehe yeh poor guy has lost his mind

This is irking Abhi but he knows the rule that boss is always right.πŸ˜† - yes he is

That hotel owner didn't knew that he is messing with the wrong person.Raj may b distracted but all his senses r quite alert and he surely knows how to make his way. - yes Raj still has himself intact

Naina is another problem where Raj is concerned .she gives adamn abt his money nad power and thats wat is attracting Raj towards her.she is a challenge to him. - yes she hates him more than anything he has begun to like her more than anything

Raj saved Naina while she was riding his horse when he challenged her. - he had to as he is the hero

He can never stop fantasizing herπŸ˜†πŸ˜† Naina was bound to b angry when he started kissing her. - of course as it was outrageous

Why did he kidnapped her??.This will make things more worse for him.
Naina wont give up that easily.. - hmmm well let's see





Originally posted by: sainiayshi14

nice part Arwa
lets see whats Don is going to do
cont.soon
Ayushi



Thanks alot Ayushi.

Yeh it sure wud be exciting and dangerous




Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

hey ...just red ur ff ...its gr88 ..vry intersting ...never seen rajeev in negative shade ...updt sooon dear ...eagerlyyy waiting ...



Hey thanks alot for loving the fic and the update.

yeh its the first time he is shown grey






Thanks very much for loving it so much



Originally posted by: varshita

Heya great part - thanks very much

What should i do of this Raj? Ye to sach me apna poora control khota jaa raha hai ab kam se us Owner ka to dimaag is ne theek kiya par jab Raj was going to be back in action to fir se Raj ki imagination us par haavi ho gayi. - kya kare puri tarhase paagal hogaya hain

Abhi ki chinta obvious hai kyounki jis tarah k bussiness se vo jude hain us me is tarah ki galtiyaan baar baar karne k liye chance nahi hai it can be more risky for Raj n this man can be dangerous for him in future. - yes he is just endangering himself like this

But Raj ko vo hotel chahiye tha aur us ko mil bhi gaya either by hook or by crook. - he always gets what he wants

Naina to bechari bahut pareshaan hai Raj ki vajah se par ek baat to hai jab bhi vo Raj ko dekhti hai kuch to hone lagta hai us k man me ab jaise gayi thi vo itne gusse me Raj ki khabar lene par jab Raj ka itna exquisite farm house aur Raj ko horse riding karte hue dekha to dekhti hi reh gayi. - oh yes she can't resist the charm

Par Raj ka indirect challenge Naina ko bhaari pad gaya aur us ne select bhi kiya Raj ka sab se adiyal horse but thank god Raj was there to save her. - yeh he had to save the day by being the hero


But Raj again lost in his dreamland n the song well described his passion n luv for Naina i must say Naina k liye bhi ansaan nahi hoga us se door rehna. - surely who can resist so much passion

Waah Naina jee aap ne kya tagdi jhaad lagayi hai us ne ab Raj k pass kidnapping k alawa koi option nahi choda. - as he had said sometimes to possess something u need to use force

Jaldi se aage update karna ok





Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

<font size="2">Nice part n now d story is back in present. - thanks for loving it and yeh its back to the present

πŸ˜‰ Raj jo chahta hai vahi karta hai n once again he proved that he is d ultimate king n no one can ever go against his wish.πŸ˜› - yes he has enormous power

He wanted dat hotel n he got dat, but d owner should have known before using d power on Raj dat on whom he is using these silly tactics. πŸ€” - yes most certainly he was stupid enough to think he cud outbeat Rajveer

I am now irritated wid Raj n his visionary pblm just like Abhi, but Raj apne aage kahan maanega kisi ki. πŸ˜• - yeh he only listens to himself

Now Naina was called to meet him n she was impressed wid him once again just in a way as v r.😳 - she can't help it

Oh god Naina Singh is back in action n she wanted 2 prove Raj dat she is brave n she can take care of herself very well.😊 Raj knew dat she would b unable 2 handel his worst horse but before he could say anything she left n scared badly when it started shaking her. - yes naina and her ego

Raj saved her but again went back to his fantasy world which irritated Naina n she left fuming. πŸ˜† - she was bound to as he scared her

Now as a result he will kidnap her.
- yes h will </font>


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

Awesome part😊 - thanks very much

Don is surely gone nuts in love unable to concentrate on anything and getting hallucinations anywhere anytime well his men are surely surprised to see this behaviour of their bossπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† - yes they r really worried

But being in his hallucinations and imaginations he is fully in senses and knows where to and how to make people under his foot poor that owner of the hotel made a mistake of diregarding and raising his voice infront of Rajveer - yes he hasn't completely lost his mind

well abhi is also right that rajveer should not give the liberties to his enemies but who is going to mess up with Don 😊😈😈 - yep no one can argue with him

Rakesh has taken pangaa with the wrong person he surely over estimated himself infront of Rajveer resulting him behind the jail barsπŸ€’πŸ˜†πŸ˜† - hehehe of course

Raj really had gone mad staring and kissing Naina like that well it is sure for any girl if it happens then she bound to get angry but this rage and anger doing nothing to him only to enticing and craving for Naina more and more which is beyond the limits😳😳☺️ - yes her defiance is making him want her more

And this craziness made him to kidnap her but this thing is also is doing no good for him but he is don he will fulfill his need the way he wantedπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Š - oh yes he sure will

continue soon😊



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha


Great part and see how much early i have commented here πŸ˜” - heheh yeh ur earl yet im late

Raj is totally obssessd with Naina n if he didn't get her soon i think he can have mental disorder in d way he is imagining Naina everywhere. πŸ˜› - surely he has lost his mind too much

He has changed a lot n he has changed his Don giri much which is really a bad thing n when Abhi wanted to tell n explaine the need of it he shrugged him off. - yes he isn't prepared to listen to anybody but himself

Why he wanted to buy dat hotel? I must say d owner of dat hotel was a damn stupid man who was trying to act against Raj's wish n wanted to kill him, did he forget who was Rajveer n wat r his powers? 😲 - he wanted to buy it because the owner had made it a brothel. and then the owner was really stupid to forget who Raj was

Raj se punga liya to Raj ne acche se sab ki pungi baja di but dat's it when he wanted to kill dat owner in his usual Don style again his fantasy Naina stopped him doing it. πŸ˜• - yeh he was stopped by her conscience

That man got saved n ran for his life but my opinion says dat he can b dangerous 4 him in future however he signed d paper dat was gud for him.😊 - yes he can be and Raj shud be worried

Again his focus was shifted to Naina n he called her to meet him in his farm house n she was in d worst mood n wanted to fire at him all his gifts. πŸ€” - well it never got over her and she is obviously too angry with him as she hates him

Naina thought it will b an official meeting n sometimes she too gets mesmerized in d way Raj was looking damn handsome when he was horse riding, she was unable to take her eyes off from him.😍 - yeh it was hard for her to control her feelings

Raj noticed dis n challenged her n Naina kahan peeche hategi which is against her nature n she choose d most typical horse which is only tamed by Raj n see d result.πŸ˜’ - well yeh typically she wud

Thank god Raj quickly went 2 her rescue n saved her but d closness b/w dem brought him back to his fantasy world n he was heading to do whatever he does with Naina in his dreams.😳 - he went just like a hero and well the closeness turned him mad

Song is 1 of my fav but Naina broke his day dream n said a lot for him n obviously it resulted in her kidnapping, i mean v r back in current track. - yeh she was outraged which resulted him to the kidnapping

update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 5

Captivation

Back to present

As she woke up she found herself in an unknown territory which disturbed her to high levels. Due to the tiredness her sight was still bit blur yet she was able to make out that she lay in a lavish bedroom but it wasn't her's.

Then various flashes flew in front of her eyes where she saw what happened last night and how she was kidnapped from her bedroom. Then her encounter with Rajveer in his limo and her trying to escape but she passed out. Perhaps she was still stuck with him.

Right then some shuffling was heard in the room which made her get up with a jerk. She saw how a maid rolled in a trolley with tea and breakfast. "Sir has said for you to have breakfast."

For obvious reasons Naina was utterly displeased. "What the hell am I doing here and why have I been captive?" The maid left without any answer and Naina threw away the trolley in frustration. Then she pushed aside the bedspread and got off the bed to get her answers from the very man himself.

Rajveer sat very relaxed in casuals drinking his tea and reading an important document and was totally aloof of the surroundings around him. That meant no one was allowed to disturb him no matter what.

However that wasn't going to stop Naina as she barged inside the hall totally ignoring the insolent guards. She confronted Rajveer who was still immensed inside his document. "Who the hell do you think you are kidnapping me like this?" He still didn't look up towards her. "Aap ki dunya me sab aapka hokum maante honge Mr. Rajveer Singh Shekhawat, per me on mese nahi hu." He still hadn't looked up which just raised her temper further. "Your power isn't going to work on me so I demand you return me back to my house at once."

It was only then that Rajveer put his file down and looked up at her. She looked even more ravishing in the light of the day in that gown. Last night he hadn't had a chance of a full glimpse but right then he enjoyed it to the most. The thin material showed off too much which turned his insides out and he tried very hard to control his urges. Then with a smile he got up. "Did you have breakfast?"

It was ignored by her. "Answer my question. Why have you abducted me like this?"

He sighed and put his hands in the pockets of his slacks. "Jabse maine tumhe dekha hain, apne saare hosh gawa betha hu." His intense gaze rested on her which slightly twitched her. "I've been seeing you everywhere and it has driven me nuts. This was the only way I could remain sane if you were always there in front of me." She looked astonished, "Meree yeh mushkil ko sirf tumhee puri karsakti ho Naina. I need you."

Naina was taken aback by his audacity to admit his crime as if she had made him do it. "You really think you can just choose anything and you'll get it no matter what?" he looked less affected. "This is my life and there's no way you can buy me, you understand."

At first he remained on his spot but then he moved in closer towards her until there was just a distance of an inch. His manly hand touched her delicate cheek and then he slowly rubbed her lips with the tip of his thumb until she shrugged his hand off roughly.

"Don't you dare touch me!" there was this defiant fire within her eyes. "You might be used to people and women falling on your feet but don't think you can bed me at your own will." She moved back a bit away from him. "I'll never bow down to your wishes so next time, don't even think about coming close to me."

Obviously Rajveer didn't like that and annoyance was written all over his face. He moved forward towards her and she moved back with each step clearly afraid of his intentions. It continued until she got stuck against the wall, which meant she was trapped by him once again.

His heavy aggressive grip held her tight as she hissed in pain. Yet he ignored it and glared at her with his sharp eagle eyes. "Ab tak me tumse sharafat se peish aarahu hu to iska fiada kabhi mat uthaana." He increased the intensity of the grip making her wince. "If I want I can tear this gown of your's right now and ruin you to bits and there wont be any way you'll be able to stop me. That way your arrogance will shatter down into pieces." That sure scared her as his hand had gripped the thin fabric of her gown and she struggled to save her dignity. "Yet I wont do that." He released the grip but didn't increase the distance between them. "I don't need to do that because whenever Rajveer wants something he simply takes it and he doesn't need anyone's permission." He warned her with his dangerous dark gaze. "Nobody can stop me which is why Rajveer always makes sure he has what he wants." He grabbed hold of her again yet less aggressively. "You'll come closer to me yourself."

Naina was in tears and felt too timid. "Please let me go, mujhe jaane do please." She begged hoping he would understand her state.

But it went to deaf ears as he moved back. "I'm sending your breakfast once again. Make sure you eat it." He turned away but then turned back remembering something. "And yes, don't even think about running away from here. Once someone enters Rajveer's fortress then they can never return back alive." He left the room making sure she had understood that.

All she was left with was tears. She was distraught and totally trapped with no help what so ever. She felt too lonely and completely weak. She dropped onto the floor crying as loud as she could yet no one was there to hear her mourns. She couldn't believe she was trapped in a big web where there was no escape whatsoever. Why was he doing that to her? Then she worried about her parents and how they would have been worried by now, have had found her missing like that.

It was true that her parents were worried when they found her room empty early in the morning. Yet they believed she must have gone to work early so had dismissed the matter.

The very worry brought Naina to a phone. She sneaked up to it quietly having had her eyes around her to make sure she was all alone. Then she dialed her house number and waited but found herself lucky since her mother picked it up in two rings. It overwhelmed her and she tried to tell her mother what happened to her but all of a sudden the line disconnected.

A shock awaited her when she saw Rajveer standing there in front of her. Her whole body developed goosebumps and she trembled as if she had just encountered a wild beast. So far his behavior had done nothing but scare her.

With a normal stride he came towards her. "I'm disappointed Naina, that you've been a bad girl." He used no aggression but his strong voice was enough to scare anybody. "You haven't obeyed any of my rules." He took the phone out of her hand and then his aggressive grip grabbed her wrist. "If you wanted to call then you should have told me." She struggled and cried. "istarha mere peet piche kiya wo acha nahi kiya." His sarcastic tone took over. "Now I'll have to teach you discipline and you will obey me. You will bow down to me." He raised his voice slightly to show his strictness.

The grip's tightness had made her hand numb and it was difficult for her to control the pain and she could see he was less affected.

"I'll have you no matter what." That dangerous look was back which sent shivers down her spine.

All the time she was worried as what he would do. Will he force himself on her as he had stated before? Yet, was rather surprised, when he backed off and just ordered two of his men, to escort her back to her room.

"You'll remain locked in your room until I decide to take you out." He commanded making sure it was understood that time loud and clear. Her protests were ignored as he left the room leaving her with his men.

Five minutes later, she found herself back inside the lavish bedroom with the door bolted from outside. She was trapped and captivated by an insane man who believed he owned the world. How was she to fight against someone who wasn't ready to listen to anything but himself? At that moment she only had two choices; either to cry as much as she could or to kill herself.

The maid came in several times either bringing her food or a full range of dresses to change into. She informed Naina how Rajveer had bought all of it just for her and she had a wide range of choice. Yet she didn't respond and remained numb on her bed.

She hadn't realized how long it had been since she lay on the bed in that distressed state but it had been long for sure. The evening sky was visible through the huge windows on one side of the room and the warm breeze touched her skin making her dry eyes itch. They had become sore and puffy from the crying and also she had become weak since she hadn't touched anything that had been brought for her to eat the whole day.

The urge to close the windows helped her get off the bed and slowly she reached the window side. Yet she froze as she looked at a horrifying sight outside.

Rajveer was busy in business outside where his men held someone in their grasp and brutally beat him. His back was turned away from the action and then after two minutes or so when he heard his men had stopped, he turned around and shot the guy in the head.

It left Naina stunned and right then she became more afraid than before. The man was really dangerous. She hadn't even known half of what was going on there and it just gave her the creeps and her body shuddered all over. What was she to do then? How was she going to escape her fate?

Her steps moved back from the window and back to the bed where she sat crouched up. She wanted to close herself up to hide from the danger which lay ahead. What was Rajveer going to do with her? She knew very well he wasn't going to release her that easily so what was she going to do? Will he kill her too just like that man outside? She had no idea who the dead guy was yet she felt connected due to the relation of fear from Rajveer the beast.

That evening when the maid came inside with dinner, Naina remained non responsive on her bed. But the moment she saw Rajveer enter, she moved back against the headboard to save herself.

"I've noticed how you haven't listened to me once again so I came to make sure you obeyed in my very presence." He instructed the maid to leave. "Eat this dinner right now Naina or I'll force it down you." He cared about her health yet his sensitive side had died long ago.

Generally she would have argued but after seeing some facts she knew it was best to listen. She moved out meekly towards the trolley and ate slowly not putting her gaze up towards him once.

He watched her eat innocently just like a child and he gave half a smile. It was good she understood his good will. Well atleast that's what he thought she did. He sat down opposite her and waited till she ate properly. "Do you want anything else?" yet before she could have said anything he interrupted her. "Azaadi ke ilawa kuch bhi maang sakti ho mujhse, kyu ke ab agar tum yahase gayee bhi to sirf ek badnaami ka dhaag le ke jaaogi." She stopped to eat and looked p at him. "Nobody will believe that I kidnapped you and then just let you go all clean." She concentrated on his gaze. "Everyone will think that you stayed here with me for the whole night and you came back clean. Very unlikely." He crossed his leg over the other and relaxed back onto the sofa chair. "You have no choice Naina but to stay here with me."

After the last morsel she put in her mouth she wiped her hands. "Can I please make a phone call to my parents?" her eyes watered with tears. "They'll be really worried."

It was at that moment that he actually paid attention to her teary eyes and something hit him in his heart. Was it the sensitivity he had buried deep inside? Whatever it was he couldn't tolerate it so he took his cell phone out which obviously had an untraceable sim and gave it to her.

Her trembling hands grabbed it and she dialed the number nervously. She had so much to say but she knew that she wasn't going to be able to say anything with the devil sitting right in front of her.

When she talked to her mother, both were happy. Her mother enquired where had she been the whole day and why hadn't she returned back home yet. Of course Naina wanted to tell her the truth but she couldn't so she covered up. "Maa, I've been sent on a trip from my company so don't worry." She sniffed. "I'll be back in a few days...I was sent all of a sudden so didn't have time to inform...yes maa..." she paused as she saw Rajveer still staring at her as if she was a small child calling home from school. She knew she couldn't reveal anything as he was too unpredictable. What if he harmed her parents? "Maa don't worry about me. I'll call you again...ok I have to go right now...haan..." then she cut the call almost too quickly because she knew she would end up crying and her mother would have suspected something was amiss.

After that Naina buried her head between her knees and burst out crying like there was no end.

Rajveer had the urge to go and comfort her. Take her in his arms and love her to relax her but he knew he couldn't do it right then. Not when she was too vulnerable so he stood up and left her alone with her misery. The pain was surely felt by him yet his ego was stronger for him to let his sensitive side surface.

Edited by awaazilicious - 13 years ago
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Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!
Naina is very angry and started demanding answers as soon as she got up and threw away her breakfast trolley in frustration!!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑
Naina ko kaun rok sakta hai and she barged inside the hall demanding answers from Rajveer!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊
Naina sure looks ravishing in that gown and seeing it in the light of the day Rajveer had a hard time controlling his urges!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
I loved the way Rajveer said about his feelings and state of mind to Naina!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Naina was soo angry when Rajveer touched her cheek and actually threatened him!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑
It was soo hot when Rajveer trapped her against the wall!!!!!☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
Poor Naina!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Rajveer is behaving in a very arrogant manner with her and threatened her of what he can do to her!!!!!
Rajveer is very confident that she would come closer to him herself!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
Naina is trapped in a big web where there is no escape and forced to remain as Rajveer's captive!!!!!
She is missing her parents and is worried about them!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
Ab Rajveer bhi kya karta when she was not coming to him easily he had to get her by hook or by crook as at the end he always gets what he wants!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊
Rajveer caught her when she tried to call her house and his sarcastic tone and strong voice scared her!!!!!!
Naina's pain doesn't seem to affect him at all and he had her locked up in her room!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
Rajveer had bought a full range of dresses for her!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊How sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Naina was really afraid when she saw Rajveer shoot a guy and her body shuddered with fear!!!!!
Naina is having a hard time and she knows that Rajveer is a very cruel man who always has his way!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
Accha huya that Rajveer has come to make her eat warna Naina would have made herself sick with not eating!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
Rajveer thought that Naina has understood his good will but Naina is only eating out of fear after what she has seen!!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”
He can't let Naina go now as no one would believe that he let Naina go clean!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
But then no one really knows that Naina is with him so it wouldn't matter I guess!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Rajveer does feel bad for her and her tears hit his heart and he just couldn't tolerate it!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Naina talked to her mom and reassured her that she was fine!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
She couldn't say much as Rajveer was in front of her!!!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”
But wouldn't it have been better for her if she had not called them and instead let them try to find her??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•
Naina is crying and Rajveer feels her pain but he did not show it and left her alone to cry!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
Rajveer has to learn that he cannot force her to love him and he has to show her his love for that!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳
I hope Rajveer and Naina come closer soon!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Edited by Shaina_b - 13 years ago
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gud to have Don back after long time 😳😳...
UD lovely as always πŸ‘πŸ‘

feeling sorry for poor girl ...Don is being really mean to her 😭 he shudn't have done it . but being biased towards Don 😳😳... he did what he wanted πŸ˜†πŸ˜† she was not coming to him easily so Don being DON he used his brains πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† he is not the one who gives up so easily...if he wants something..he will get it by hook or crook πŸ˜†πŸ˜† at the end he gets what he wants πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...

wonder if they gonaa come closer πŸ˜•πŸ˜• i really have doubts πŸ˜•

continue soon πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜Š

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Finally u updated...awesome part...continue soon sooner
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Posted: 13 years ago
yeahh finallyy u updtd ..waitd so so loong anywayz ...

Gr8 prt ..i feel bad fo naina ...but Don iz Don he will get wat he want ...but wat will naina do now ...updt sooon dear eagerlyyy waiting ...thnxx fo/pm

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