Don (RN) Pt12 'Realisation pt2' pg35 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi ArwaπŸ˜ƒ
Nice PartπŸ‘
Edited by sainiayshi14 - 13 years ago
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Hi Arwa

Update was gud.πŸ‘πŸ‘
Raj is actually behaving in a very arrogant manner.Poor Naina she is grave trouble nowπŸ˜•πŸ˜•
She is missing her parents but Raj doesn't care.😑 I dont think this is love .its just madness .How can u force some1 to love u?? Raj has many things to learn now.He just can't possess everything ..
Naina is having a hard time and she knows it well that Raj is a very cruel man who always have his own way.
Poor Girl!! I hope she kicks him left right and centre.😑😑
Edited by suhana.dixit - 13 years ago
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Nice update Arwa😊

Poor Naina its like a web for her in which she is forced to remain in the captivation of Raj and Raj is also behaving very rude and arrogant with her and is also worried for her parents if she did something against Raj he might can harm her parents also😭

Raj did feel bad for her tears but did not show this emotion instead rudely and abruptly left her alone to cry😭😭

Here Don is being very mean towards her he should not have force her like this hope this madness will die soonπŸ˜’

Continue soon😊
Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!! - thanks alot
Naina is very angry and started demanding answers as soon as she got up and threw away her breakfast trolley in frustration!!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - yes as she remembered what happened with her last night
Naina ko kaun rok sakta hai and she barged inside the hall demanding answers from Rajveer!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - of course as she has full right
Naina sure looks ravishing in that gown and seeing it in the light of the day Rajveer had a hard time controlling his urges!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - he always does
I loved the way Rajveer said about his feelings and state of mind to Naina!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - i'm glad u did
Naina was soo angry when Rajveer touched her cheek and actually threatened him!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - of course she wud as she finds him revolting at present
It was soo hot when Rajveer trapped her against the wall!!!!!☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - hehehe even in force their romantic scene looks gud
Poor Naina!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Rajveer is behaving in a very arrogant manner with her and threatened her of what he can do to her!!!!! - yeh she is worried now
Rajveer is very confident that she would come closer to him herself!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - that he sure is
Naina is trapped in a big web where there is no escape and forced to remain as Rajveer's captive!!!!! - yes she has no choice at all
She is missing her parents and is worried about them!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - she wud be as she is missing and wat must they think
Ab Rajveer bhi kya karta when she was not coming to him easily he had to get her by hook or by crook as at the end he always gets what he wants!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes thats true indeed
Rajveer caught her when she tried to call her house and his sarcastic tone and strong voice scared her!!!!!! - his very personality is scary thats why
Naina's pain doesn't seem to affect him at all and he had her locked up in her room!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 - he is stone hearted
Rajveer had bought a full range of dresses for her!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊How sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - now he will take care of his possession very well
Naina was really afraid when she saw Rajveer shoot a guy and her body shuddered with fear!!!!! - anybody wud be afraid
Naina is having a hard time and she knows that Rajveer is a very cruel man who always has his way!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 - yep she is definitely afraid now
Accha huya that Rajveer has come to make her eat warna Naina would have made herself sick with not eating!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - of course only he can make her do things he wants
Rajveer thought that Naina has understood his good will but Naina is only eating out of fear after what she has seen!!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” - yeh she is afraid of him very much
He can't let Naina go now as no one would believe that he let Naina go clean!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - yeh he is thinking of her dignity after taking it away
But then no one really knows that Naina is with him so it wouldn't matter I guess!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - thats also true but he has to give his excuses in order to keep her under his control
Rajveer does feel bad for her and her tears hit his heart and he just couldn't tolerate it!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yeh he can't tolerate emotional pain
Naina talked to her mom and reassured her that she was fine!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - she had to make sure they didnt worry
She couldn't say much as Rajveer was in front of her!!!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” - yeh poor him
But wouldn't it have been better for her if she had not called them and instead let them try to find her??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• - perhaps that cud have been a better option indeed
Naina is crying and Rajveer feels her pain but he did not show it and left her alone to cry!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 - as i said he can't tolerate emotional pain
Rajveer has to learn that he cannot force her to love him and he has to show her his love for that!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 - till date he has had everything by force
I hope Rajveer and Naina come closer soon!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - let's see how long it takes

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -purnima-

gud to have Don back after long time 😳😳...
UD lovely as always πŸ‘πŸ‘ - thanks very much Puri

feeling sorry for poor girl ...Don is being really mean to her 😭 he shudn't have done it . but being biased towards Don 😳😳... he did what he wanted πŸ˜†πŸ˜† she was not coming to him easily so Don being DON he used his brains πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† he is not the one who gives up so easily...if he wants something..he will get it by hook or crook πŸ˜†πŸ˜† at the end he gets what he wants πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†... - hehehe yeh he is very cruel but in a very sweet way and of course he gets everything by force

wonder if they gonaa come closer πŸ˜•πŸ˜• i really have doubts πŸ˜• - hmmm lets see how long it takes for that

continue soon πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜Š





Originally posted by: coolsaleha

Finally u updated...awesome part...continue soon sooner



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Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

yeahh finallyy u updtd ..waitd so so loong anywayz ... - yeh i finally got the time

Gr8 prt .. - thanks a lot

i feel bad fo naina ...but Don iz Don he will get wat he want ... - yeh its sad for her but he won't leave her now at all, not that easily

but wat will naina do now ... - lets see what happens

updt sooon dear eagerlyyy waiting ...thnxx fo/pm - ur welcome







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Originally posted by: sainiayshi14

Hi ArwaπŸ˜ƒ

Nice PartπŸ‘




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Originally posted by: suhana.dixit


Hi Arwa

Update was gud.πŸ‘πŸ‘ - thanks a lot Suhana

Raj is actually behaving in a very arrogant manner.Poor Naina she is grave trouble nowπŸ˜•πŸ˜• - yeh she is badly stuck

She is missing her parents but Raj doesn't care.😑 I dont think this is love .its just madness .How can u force some1 to love u?? Raj has many things to learn now.He just can't possess everything .. - yes he needs to learn many things indeed

Naina is having a hard time and she knows it well that Raj is a very cruel man who always have his own way. - yeh she is very scared now

Poor Girl!! I hope she kicks him left right and centre.😑😑 - hehe ab itna bhi bura nahi hain wo





Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

Nice update Arwa😊 - thanks a lot for loving it


Poor Naina its like a web for her in which she is forced to remain in the captivation of Raj and Raj is also behaving very rude and arrogant with her and is also worried for her parents if she did something against Raj he might can harm her parents also😭 - yeh she is very scared of him now indeed as he is unpredictable

Raj did feel bad for her tears but did not show this emotion instead rudely and abruptly left her alone to cry😭😭 - he can't tolerate emotional pain

Here Don is being very mean towards her he should not have force her like this hope this madness will die soonπŸ˜’ - hmmm well he has everything force so lets see how long this continues between them

Continue soon😊







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Originally posted by: priti11

wow just loved it..

cont.soon...



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Posted: 13 years ago

Finally i am here with the comment of Don in which i know i am super late.

Oh poor Naina, i really feel pity on her whenever she is hurt because of Raj. 😭

But i am sure he doesn't want to hurt her intentionally but it's that he only wants to have her either hook or by crook. πŸ˜•

But in this way he is hurting Naina a lot and he must remember one thing that love can never be forced to anyone. πŸ˜”

Naina was tried to face him showing her attitude n resistance but I know she has to surrender herself very soon but not that easily. πŸ₯±

V all know that Naina can never love someone else apart from Rajveer and v r sure she herself will fall for him which she has already started but in this way by torching a poor soul what he wants to get? πŸ˜’

She is damn scared and tried to contact at her house but she doesn't know that she has entered in a lion's den jahan andar aana to asaan hai par vahan se bahar jaana bahut mushkil. πŸ€”

Raj is showing his true nature unintentionally and that's y she is more terrified knowing that what can be the after effects if she doesn't accept his proposal.😈

Even Raj didn't know that she was watching him from the window and now she is scared. He let her talk to her family people with his phone but just to inform them that she is safe.πŸ₯Ί

Raj is too feeling guilty whenever he behaves that much rude with her but he can't do anything as he knows very well that no one can say no to him and he can't tolerate it.😳

Naina was not going with him on date but now his behavior can't make her say no to him.

Try to update next part fast
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Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Finally i am here with the comment of Don in which i know i am super late. - yes u really r

Oh poor Naina, i really feel pity on her whenever she is hurt because of Raj. 😭 - yeh she is stuck badly

But i am sure he doesn't want to hurt her intentionally but it's that he only wants to have her either hook or by crook. πŸ˜• - yes he doesn't know the paths of love yet

But in this way he is hurting Naina a lot and he must remember one thing that love can never be forced to anyone. πŸ˜” - true yet he doesn't understand right now

Naina was tried to face him showing her attitude n resistance but I know she has to surrender herself very soon but not that easily. πŸ₯± - its tough and she doesn't know how long she can continue

V all know that Naina can never love someone else apart from Rajveer and v r sure she herself will fall for him which she has already started but in this way by torching a poor soul what he wants to get? πŸ˜’ - he has always got what he wants so he believes in this it works too

She is damn scared and tried to contact at her house but she doesn't know that she has entered in a lion's den jahan andar aana to asaan hai par vahan se bahar jaana bahut mushkil. πŸ€” - yes now she knows she is stuck badly

Raj is showing his true nature unintentionally and that's y she is more terrified knowing that what can be the after effects if she doesn't accept his proposal.😈 - oh yes the devil is coming out

Even Raj didn't know that she was watching him from the window and now she is scared. He let her talk to her family people with his phone but just to inform them that she is safe.πŸ₯Ί - he doesn't know that yet he does know she is afraid

Raj is too feeling guilty whenever he behaves that much rude with her but he can't do anything as he knows very well that no one can say no to him and he can't tolerate it.😳 - thats his tough personality

Naina was not going with him on date but now his behavior can't make her say no to him. - yes he makes sure people obey him no matter what

Try to update next part fast

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Part 6

Admiration

"You know if you don't hold it properly then it shall slip out of your hands." Rajveer instructed compasionately. "Then how will we have fun?"

Naina gave him a sorry look. "I'm sorry but you know it's my first time so I'm a bit nervous to hold it in my hands. I mean it's so big." Her eyes looked upon him with that wild passion.

Of course Rajveer understood her hesitation. "Don't worry; I'm here to guide you all the way. But first you need to learn to hold it correctly in the full of your palms so it doesn't slip when there's time for action." His hands rested upon her's making sure she didn't let go and did exactly as he wanted her to do. Then he slowly made her rub up and down as if massaging it softly to get that sensuous feeling. It certainly relaxed him and he let out soft groans and sighs.

It gave her pleasure too as she felt her tips becoming solid due to which her chest certainly ached. It ached to burst open to be let free instead of being tied up together tightly.

"Yes, you're doing it perfectly." He hadn't left her hands yet and he took one of her thumbs and made her rub the tip which totally blew his senses away and just gave him immense pleasure. "Just go on." He was loosing his breath and he simply never wanted it to end.

Soon later his hands had left her's as she had caught on very well and managed on her own. He had his other plans as his hand worked on opening the buttons of her blouse and reaching inside to play with her erect tips and to simply smoother her mounds to make her groan and all aroused ready for him to possess her. Of course he knew she loved it more than anything as her body language told him everything. The way she hissed and moved her body to become comfortable in his touch was certainly enough for him to make such decisions. After all he knew he could never go wrong in that game.

As her hands left him he pulled her down and rolled over so she was underneath him. Then like a hungry pig he devoured her rounds in his mouth lathing his tongue around her tip making her groans louder.

Yes it was very rough but she loved it. It was something she had never experienced before and she knew she would want it to go on forever. Then his mouth soon rested on her's pushing up and down as the kiss become deeper inside each other's mouths.

"There is news that Rakesh has been bailed." Abhimanyu stood overlooking Rajveer on the bed.

At first Rajveer was going to be angry with him for daring to step into his room right in between such an intimate moment with his partner, but then he swiftly looked around himself and saw that there was no one but him on the bed and Abhimanyu stood there. He lay bare with only a sheet covering him waist down, yet only he knew how much it all was real for him. His fantasies were really going to kill him and he had to fulfil them in reality no matter what happened.

"Are you alright?" Abhimanyu looked concerned.

Rajveer gave him a sharp look. "What is wrong with me?" He sat up pushing away the sheet and grabbing onto his robe. "Or raha sawaal Rakesh ka nikal ne ka, to wo to mujhe pehle se hee pata tha ke aisa hee hoga." He wrapped the belt around his waist. "The game only becomes fun when the prey is let out loose to catch rather than having him caged." Then he walked away towards the bathroom to relax off his stressed out body and he knew only his fantasy Naina could do it.

It really had been very suffocating being trapped like that in the room for more than four days now. Naina had become like a robot who only applied actions after receiving orders. When she was told to get dressed nicely she did it and when she was told to eat properly she did it. Yet nothing was done with her will. She knew that even if she tried to disobey the king then her end was certainly going to turn out disastrous. She wasn't sure whether Rajveer was truly going to kill her too but she certainly was afraid of him doing something worse.

Her exit from the room was still prohibited so the walls and the furniture had become her best pals. After that last appearance, Rajveer hadn't come back in these days to meet her but she did get random messages now and then from him via the maid. Most of them were just to enquire on her health and if she wanted anything. Of course she had nothing to say back to him so just read them and left them on the table, collecting them like tickets.

Rajveer sat outside in the lawn rather comfortably waiting for his morning tea and reading the day's newspaper. His involvement didn't allow him to look up yet that touch on his hand made him twitch and he looked up rather too surprised to find Naina standing there serving him tea. He dropped the paper down and automatically took the cup from her.

Her smile really killed him and he couldn't do anything but just drink the tea and stare at her innocence smiling back at him with a lot of affection.

"I hope your tea is fine Sir." The maid asked with courtesy.

He snapped out and saw that he just sat there holding the tea cup in his hand as the maid stared back at him with worry. That meant that Naina once again wasn't really there. He became authoritive and ordered the maid to leave as everything was fine. There was no way he was going to reflect his weaknesses.

However as he looked up again he found his smiling beautiful Naina walking away with the tray, giving him that sweet sugary look almost giving him diabetes. Of course her very hot presence was enough to kill him than any chronic diseases or even a bullet.

Yun tera muskuraana

Aur aake chale jaana

Yun tera muskuraana

Aur aake chale jaana

Kismat ka hain khul jaana

He grabbed her midway before she escaped and simply held her close to admire her.

Tera deedar hua, pehla sa pyar hua, pehli hi baar hua, is dil ko

Na to inkaar huwa, na hi iqraar hua, jaane kya yaar hua, is dil ko

He played with her enticing soft lips as he wanted to taste the sweetness of that sugary smile.

Yun tera muskuraana

Aur aake chale jaana

Kismat ka hain khul jaana

Tera deedar hua, pehla sa pyar hua, pehli hi baar hua, is dil ko

Na to inkaar huwa, na hi iqraar hua, jaane kya yaar hua, is dil ko

She soon disappeared and he went back to his work which of course was very difficult but he still managed. When he wasn't involved in any meetings or looking at any files he was busy drooling off into his Naina world where there was only him and her totally bare, playing with their pleasure toys.

Further two days passed and things were still the same but his state of mind had become worse. Many times he had thought of visiting Naina himself but he knew it was going to be difficult for him to hold back his urges in front of the real one so it was best to avoid contact until he calmed down.

The afternoon was full of heavy rain and he just sat in his room looking out upon his terrace as the droplets fell loudly onto the tiled floor. Rain had never pleased him yet he didn't know why he actually just loved watching it pour down as if it held a significant meaning behind it.

The white nylon curtains blew around with the wind as the rain became harder. He stood up to stand by the door and actually feel the drops on his face just like a child on their first encounter with nature. His eyes remained closed as they fell lightly on his face giving him that freshness he had never felt before.

As his eyes opened he saw a sensuous figure dancing and playing away into the rain. Her full wet bare body was visible through the thin fabric of just an elongated T-shirt. He simply stared with lustrous eyes at her wet curves stuck to the fabric and his guard was dropped once again.

His feet automatically took him towards her and he crestened her body into his body shell melting her entirely.

Tujhse mila to jaagi duaien, aur nazar se sajda kiya

Jannat zameen pe aayi utarke, khushiyon ne jese chun sa liya

He kissed away the water drops from each and every bare part he found which wasn't hidden behind the T- shirt.

Her manzil dilnashin hain...tu hi tu har kahi hain

Hooo teri yeh adayein to hain saari qaatelaana

But she soon pushed him back and ran giggling as if she wanted him to play chase. Now of course that game was very exciting for him so he followed behind and soon his hand grabbed a handful of her T- Shirt which pulled it off her entirely and then she remained all bare just for him and only him.

His eyes feasted her wet sexy body which was made just for his entertainment.

Tera deedar hua, pehla sa pyar hua, pehli hi baar hua, is dil ko

Na to inkaar huwa, na hi iqraar hua, jaane kya yaar hua, is dil ko

It was rather unfortunate as to how he never got to fulfil any of his fantasies in reality. If he wanted he could have had his pleasures and had given peace to his sexually frustrated body but he believed there was more pleasure in willingness rather than force. If any one was going to possess his bed along with him, it was only going to be Naina or it was going to remain empty all his life.

Keeping her trapped in the room was torture itself so he decided to open her cage only to step into the bigger compound. Of course he had no intensions of letting her out of the main gates.

She was pleased to be released thinking that perhaps he had developed a heart and had decided to free her but was very much disappointed to find out she was still stuck there. So what was the meaning of letting her out of the room when it was the same outside?

However she was pleased that atleast she was allowed to roam around in the fresh air. It did strike her though as to where he was and what he was doing. Not like she was eager to meet him. Infact was really glad to be out of his clutches yet she was still afraid as his eye was constantly on her no matter what so where he would pop out from was a mystery.

After had gone around in the palatial grounds she soon realized how she had lost her way back. It was so huge and the walls looked the same so where was she to go? Where had she come from?

Some sort of faint clinking noises were heard nearby so she moved in that direction hoping someone would be there to guide her back to her room. The only place she felt secure and away from His eye. Eventhough she knew He kept a record of her each and every movement even with her being behind locked doors, but still she knew He was looking over her there.

The noises became louder as she moved nearer and there was a gate made from the green hedge which she had to admit looked really beautiful. She passed through it and found herself in a courtyard and the noises she heard were of metal clinking against each other. She looked carefully and saw that two people were busy in a sword fencing match and as she looked very closely she saw that one of them was none other than Rajveer.

As before she found it hard to look away and got enthralled by his strong lean frame moving about as he fenced with expertise. Success and victory was written all over his face which showed that he could never lose.

And just then she heard a loud shriek and saw that the other man was pierced through by Rajveer as he won. It was very cruel of him but then again she knew he was a wicked man so what else was expected from him.

Rajveer stood over the despicable man who lay taking his last few breaths. He had known very well how the hotel owner which he had let go free was going to come and stab him in the back one day or the other. He also knew how to take care of matters of such and to show people their place he always gave them an equal attempt to win over him. Yet no one till date had been able to make him lose.

He didn't know how he knew, but he got a sudden feeling that someone stood there watching over him. It was someone very close to his heart so he turned his gaze sideways and was satisfied that his heart didn't convey a false message. It had been days since he had seen her in person and she sure was a serene sight. He felt as if his imagination had converted into reality and she stood there just for him. "It's rather pleasing to see that you're up and about." He walked up towards her still holding onto his sword.

She was still lost in his powerful presence that she hadn't realized how close he had come to her and literally had captured her into his spell.

Tere bina main tanha tha har pal, honthon per har dum thi tishnagi

Maqsad nahi tha, sapney nahi they, thi zindagi me awaargi

"If you really enjoyed what you saw then how about I give you a private tutorial?" He softly spoke near her ears slightly grazing his cheek with her's. Then he saw how she still looked lost to such extent that she didn't protest so he held her face in his hands and gave her a light kiss on one cheek and then repeated it on the other.

Tu mera rehnuma hain...manzil hain raasta hain

Hooo mere liye tu to jese rab ka hain khazaana

She still hadn't backed off and her big bold eyes stuck out making him fall in love with them.

Tera deedar hua, pehla sa pyar hua, pehli hi baar hua, is dil ko

Na to inkaar huwa, na hi iqraar hua, jaane kya yaar hua, is dil ko

However as she felt him closing in towards her lips she broke out of the spell and pushed him back with agitation. "I told you before, don't you dare touch me." She wiped her arms as if rubbing off his essence.

As always he didn't really react that strongly and kept his calm. Generally he didn't need to because he knew he would get what he wanted one way or the other so there really wasn't any need to argue or fight for it. He moved back from her and picked up his sword. "There are rare chances when I'm refused something and very few people disobey me. Now in your case if you really want to stay here on your terms rather than mine then you've got to win your way towards it."

She furrowed her brows unsure onto what he meant. "What do you mean win my way towards it?"

He smiled, "Let's just start from this game then shall we. If I win then I'll finish where you stopped me," she gave him a sharp look clearly displeased, "which was kissing you. And if I lose then I guess you'll be free." He examined the tip of his foil. "You do know how to fence or should I first teach you?"

His arrogance irked her the most so automatically her hand went towards him and pushed the foil out of his hand and into her's. "Don't worry about me, I'm a fast learner."

"That's the spirit." He gestured one of his guards to bring him the other sword. "My dear I shall get my kiss one way or the other."

Just the feeling of holding the weapon in her hands urged her to just stab him and run free yet she knew very well not to act so foolish. Even if she did there was an army of guards surrounding the whole compound so there was no real escape. Somehow all her fear had disappeared perhaps the strong weapon gave her the strength.

The game began with Rajveer constantly guiding or more like warning her as he knew she was inexperienced and just out of her boastful ego she wanted to pretend she knew how it was done. "Let me remind you about your horse riding experience or shall I say inexperience." He raised his eyebrows towards her. "I don't want to see you get hurt."

She looked in control yet rather too impulsive. "I can take care of myself." As expected she was too hasty to make the first move and she nearly lost balance as he moved out of the way yet he was quick enough to catch her before she had a bad fall onto the ground.

"I told you Naina, I don't want to see you get hurt." He looked genuine.

"You've hurt me enough for me not to feel the pain." She pushed him back and got back into action. It was true she had no clue how to win the game yet she was going to try till her last breath if that was what was going to take for her freedom.

He saw she was determined and he was always up for a challenge and here he was going to have fun since no matter what was going to happen he was going to have the upper hand. Unless of course she surprised him in some sort.

Therefore the sword fencing began with him going easy and light on her even when she tried too hard to beat him. He noticed how quickly she picked up onto the pace and somehow imitated his each and every move. It was true; she really was a fast learner. Perhaps he could use that to his advantage.

Naina knew she had a big challenge in front of her yet she didn't want to appear weak. With skill she had noted his each and every move and imitated similarly yet she knew it wouldn't last long and he would out beat her. Whatever it was she had to try to show him that he couldn't control her all the time. Her self confidence was back on and she continued to defend herself as if she was a pro at the sport.

"You truly are a fast learner." He barely escaped her attack as he hadn't expected that move. "Yet it was good while it lasted." And with expertise he attacked her sword which threw it out of her hands and into his. "As you see, I always win." His sharp wicked gaze made her slightly shudder.

It wasn't like she had lost her confidence but the idea of him fulfilling what he wanted made the hairs on the back of her neck erect. She developed goosebumps all over her body and she felt a sudden chill. What was it about his presence which totally blew her senses off?

Rajveer was an expert in reading people's body language and right then he knew very well how much nervous Naina had become. She was totally under his control and if he wanted he could get what he wanted right then and then. He advanced towards her slowly which automatically pushed her backwards.

Soon she hit against the stone wall and realized that she was stuck. There was no way out and he was getting close. She noticed that same dangerous passion within his eyes as she had seen from the day he had kidnapped her. Yet it was enthralling enough for her not to look away as if she wanted him to come close to her. No she couldn't think like that, she just couldn't.

The distance between them closed up and his soft breath blew the hairs lying on the side of her face. He simply absorbed her innocent beauty within his eyes as his hand reached up to move the lonely strand of hair still left behind on her face.

His touch made her twitch yet she didn't resist against it as if she desperately wanted contact with his skin. There was an immediate affect onto her areola which became tight making it slightly painful for her erect tips stuck behind the fabric of her dress.

Rajveer noticed it through the thin fabric and he instantly became aroused. He pressed his body against hers and his hard shaft rubbed against her thighs as he softly pushed up and down to release his tensed body due to the stimulation.

She sure felt it inbetween her legs which made her knees weak and she closed her eyes to control the very uncontrollable sensation. It was clearly an invitation and she was almost drunk onto the temptation of bursting her chest bare so he could absorb them in his mouth and fulfil her sexual frustration.

The way she stood there was exactly how he had visualized her in his fantasies yet he noticed her body language gave different signs. Yes she was also not going to resist yet along with it she was very very nervous. He couldn't possible take advantage of her in a vulnerable state. He did advance really close until their lips were just an inch away.

Even with her eyes shut she could feel his presence really close and her virgin lips desperately cried out for his encounter. Then again she knew she never would want a murderer and a vicious animal like him to ever touch her, but her body slowly gave up on her and wanted to break all boundaries.

"I shall get my kiss when I want it." After saying that, he backed off totally taking her by surprise.

Of course she felt stupid standing in front of him as she totally revealed her excitement which totally gave him the upper hand again. Now he knew how much she was also attracted towards him. It was going to be difficult to fight him further.

Her innocence was the first thing which had attracted Rajveer towards her and right then she looked just like a little girl lost in her own maze. He knew she also wanted him to kiss her as much as he wanted to yet he was going to make it pleasurable and worth while for her and not just a quick encounter. When he was going to do it he was going to take it slow and long till she totally broke apart due to excessive pleasure. "For now I think some things should be left for it to linger on for long." Then he gestured towards one of his guards. "Make sure she reaches back to her room safely after she has had her pleasure of roaming around." Then he walked off.

At that moment she totally hated him yet she hated herself more for have reacted in that way. How could she have been aroused by his touch? The very man who had been nothing but cruel in every single way. It clearly showed how he did nothing but a favour by sparing her which angered her further as he still was in control. He so arrogantly displayed how everything happened according to his rules so therefore he was also going to kiss her when he wanted to. In her head she yelled out, "LIKE HELL HE WAS!"

Edited by awaazilicious - 13 years ago
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Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!!
The beginning was very romantic and passionate!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
It was just sizzling hot!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
Rajveer was playing with Naina in his fantasy and Naina was pleasing him in just the way he wants!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
Abhimanyu jab dekho galat waqt pe aa jaata hai but thankfully Rajveer wasn't actually doing anything with Naina!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Rakesh has been bailed and that's bad but Rajveer is confident of taking him down!!!!
Poor Naina is not allowed to go out from her room and now she does what she is told as she is afraid of Rajveer!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
Oh God!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲Rajveer ko uski maid mein bhi Naina dikh rahi hai!!!!
Rajveer's fantasties and dreams will surely kill him!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Don gaya kaam se!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Rajveer is really too much and he is always busy with Naina in his dreamland where he is playing with her body!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
The song is very nice and apt for Rajveer's condition now!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
I loved the term "his Naina world"!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊
It is really nice of Rajveer that he avoiding Naina just because he does not want to lose control in front of the real Naina!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
I hope sooner or later the real Naina does turn into his fantasy Naina and fulfills all his fantasies!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
The rain scene was very hot and romantic!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
It was very cute to see them playing in the rain even though it was just his illusion!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😍 😍 😍 😍
Rajveer is indeed very sweet to wait for Naina to be willing rather than forcing himself on her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
I loved it that only Naina was going to possess his bed along with him or else it was going to remain empty all his life!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Thank you sooo much Arwa for making Rajveer like this!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—
Any other writer would probably have shown him sleeping with others in the meantime instead of the fantasy Naina that Rajveer is having pleasure with!!!!🀒 🀒 🀒 🀒 🀒
Yeh Rajveer ne accha kiya that he let Naina come out of her room so that she can enjoy outside for a while!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
Naina was disappointed that she was not freed but still she was pleased to roam around in the fresh air!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Yeh Naina bhi ajeeb hai and while she does not want to meet Rajveer, she is still wondering where he is and what he is doing!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
Rajveer surely looks hot while fencing and Naina is mesmerized by his appearance!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😍 😍 😍 😍
As expected Rajveer always wins and it is good that he killed the hotel owner!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Rajveer's heart tells him when Naina is near and that is soo romantic!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️
Naina is lost to such an extent that he kissed her on the cheeks and still she did not protest!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😍 😍 😍 😍
But she came back to her senses just as he was about to kiss her on the lips and thus he did not get his kiss!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Rajveer challenged her to a fencing match and Naina never backs down from a challenge and so accepted it even though she does not know how to fence!!!!!
It was good to see Naina's self confidence back with the weapon in her hand as this is the Naina we all know!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
But sad that she wants to kill Rajveer with it but thankfully better sense prevailed on her!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
It was great to see Rajveer once again as a mentor teaching Naina something new!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
He reminded me of Captain Rajveer but he is not as selfless as him or else he would have lost to Naina!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊
Rajveer reminded her of her horse riding experience and he doesn't want to see her get hurt and caught her before she had a bad fall!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
But Naina is already too hurt and she is going to fight till her last breath for her freedom!!!!!
The sword fighting scene totally reminded me of Jodha Akbar!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Naina is a really fast learner and picked up the moves quickly!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Where exactly does Rajveer want to use her fast learning capabilities to his advantage??πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
She does manage to surprise Rajveer a few times with him barely escaping her attacks!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
As expected, Rajveer won and advanced towards her to claim his prize!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
Naina should have known that she can never win this game as she did not know how to fence and had only just started picking up the moves!!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”
Naina became very nervous as Rajveer trapped her against the stone wall and Rajveer knew he had her under his control!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
She appreciated him getting close to her and her body language gave all the positive signs to Rajveer!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊
Rajveer was also aroused and it was good to see him get some release!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Naina just can't resist him and is literally waiting for his encounter!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
But Rajveer does not kiss her as he couldn't take advantage of her vulnerable state!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊He is indeed very nice!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
Even then he has to show his superiority and arrogantly said he would get his kiss when he wants it!!!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Naina is one confused girl and now she is angry that he did not kiss her and and showed his control over her!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑
Why doesn't she decide what she wants??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•
Poor Naina is disgusted with herself when she realized how close she can come to surrendering herself to Rajveer!!!!!

Edited by Shaina_b - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi Arwa

Nice part..πŸ˜ƒ
Raj is in love with Naina but isn't it just lust.he craves for her coz she is not available.🀒
Raj is not my favourite in this fiction of yours but atleast he did the gentle thing when he backed off from Naina when she was feeling quite vulnerable.
Poor thing!! she was disgusted with herself when she realized how close she had come to surrender.
Edited by suhana.dixit - 13 years ago

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