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Posted: 19 years ago
#81
wow its awesome made me laugh the whole time reading it 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#82

Promo:

K: I hate u…I hate u all….I don't want to live here anymore….

Kripa cry's and leaves from the house. Angad falls in his knees and starts crying.

Angad starts looking for kripa and there is no sign of her.

Both of them are heartbroken

Narrator: will angad be able to find kripa….will kripa ever come back home?
Edited by Star* - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#83
that part was as usual, fantastic!!! esp. the way kripa is nice w/ naina but pretends to be bad when angad's around!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#84
whoah. continue soon. can't wait. promo's sad. continue plz.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#85
Awesome part, I wonder why Kripa leaves the house in the promo. Cont. soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#86
here is a long part😉


Angad comes down and sits down with everyone to have breakfast. Kripa comes and sits next to nina. They were all eating when nina speaks
N: to kripa) beta do u want to go shopping with me…im going there and I thought ur cloths were stolen so u might need to buy new ones
K: sure mom….I need to ask angad first
A: shocked and surprised)
K: vo actually I don't go anywhere with out asking angad that's why
A: surprised)
K: angad can I go with mom
A: sure…u don't need to take my permission
K: smiles to him) can I barrow some money….
A: sure (takes his Walt out) how much do u want
K: smiles big to him) im not sure…can I have the credit card
A: sure (hands her his credit card)
K: smiles and speaks again) oh…I forgot…I cant use it…I mean its ur credit card and they wont let me buy anything
N: its ok beta…now u guys are married…angad u didn't add her name to urs
A: mom I forgot
N: its ok…go and call right now
A: yes mom (finishes his breakfast and leaves up to his room)

Kripa goes to their room few mints later
K: smiles to him) thanks
A: for what?
K: for ur card
A: its ok….don't lose it there is lots of money inside
K: I will make sure I don't….how much is there
A: I don't know a lot…how much do u need
K: ek rupee
A: confused) huh?
K: smiles to him) I will leave one rupee inside this card so incase u need to buy a drink for ur self
A: what? And the rest money
K: since im daughter-in-law of this big house….I need to buy lots of stuff and spend lots of money(smiles to him) right
A: but kripa my money
K: did u call the place and add my name
A: yea?
K: than now its my money….not urs
A: shocked) hey that's not fair
K: everything is fair in love and war
A: give my card back
K: shouts) mom angad want to
A: holds her mouth with his hand) shhhh…ur such a black mailer
K: smiles to him) ok bye now (leaves)

Kripa and nina goes to the mall and shop lots of cloths and lots of new things. After 5 hours later angad was in the office working when someone inters
A: looks up and surprised) kripa
K: goes inside and sits in the chair in front of him) can I see ur Walt
A: what are u doing here (hands her his Walt)
K: takes it and takes a card out then hands him his card back) thanks
A: what are u doing?
K: I need more money that's why
A: shocked and his mouth drops open) what?
K: yea I need to buy some more things
A: what happen to all those money
K: I spent them
A: shocked) what? Do u know how much there was
K: kind of
A: there was 4 lake inside
K: yea so
A: that's lots of money
K: I don't care
A: but kripa
K: what?
A: shakes his head) do u want anything to drink
K: no thanks
A: ok
K: I will take coke
A: u just said no thanks
K: I change my mined
A: sigh) ok

Next day everyone was eating breakfast and kripa comes down. Angad was eating when he sees kripa. He couldn't believe his eyes what he was seeing. Kripa wore beautiful purple sari with matching jewelry. She looked simply beautiful. Angad was so happy to see her like that. Kripa came down then set next to angad.
N: wow beta u look really good
K: thanks mom
Angad was still staring at her. Kripa notice and kicks his leg.
A: ouch
N: what happen beta
A: nothing mom…

Everyone finishes breakfast and kripa leaves to angads grandpas room. She nocks at the door.
K: may I come in
The old man looks at kripa. The old man was around age of 70.
Old man=O (played by Amrish puri)
O: of course beti come in
Kripa walk inside the room and sits next to the old man who was siting in his chair next to the window
O: how are u beti
K: im good …what are u doing here…lets go out
O: laughs) me and out…no thank you…I cant
K: why not?
O: im to old
K: said who
O: laughs)
K: C'mon baba….if u go out side u will see people older then u walking and running…
O: laughs again)

Kripa and the old man talks for few mints and kripa tells him some jokes will the old man laughs. The old man gets really happy and thanks god to get such a good daughter-in-law. Kripa takes the old man out with her. They start walking on the park and the old man gets tired.
K: oh baba ur tired
O: laughs) in this age of course I will get tired fast
K: u know the thing that makes u tired is this stick u carry with u
O: this helps me walk
K: u don't need to use that…u could walk really good….C'mon I will show u

Kripa holds from his hand and makes him stand. They walk a little bit and kripa wouldn't let the old man use his stick for suport.

Few days passes by. The whole family starts to like kripa a lot. Angad was at work all the time and he didn't know what was going on. Kripa everyday now would go for joge with the old man. Everyone was really happy to see the old man walk again good and he started laughing again. When the old mans wife passed away a 2 years back he started not talk to the family much always in his room. Since kripa came he started laughing and eating with the whole family beakfast, lunch and dinner. Kripa became best friends with angads sister Krishma.

A month later its carwachut(spelling)
Every wome in the house was fasting for their husbands. Angad didn't know if kripa was fasting for him or not. It was at night around 8 and people were walking around the house getting things ready. Kripa changed in to red dress that nina give her. Angad came inside the room and saw kripa ready.
A: ur looking beautiful
K: thanks
A: umm kripa…
K: what do u want
A: ummm….
K: are u just keep going to say ummm or something else
A: are u fasting for me
K: laughs) me and fast for u…in ur dreams
A: u mean ur not
K: of course not….why would I fast for u
A: every wifes does for their husbands
K: and I told u like more than hundered times that im not ur wife
A: but kripa
K: whatever

Kripa leaves from the room down. Angad goes behind her and kripa stops by sweets. She takes on in her hand and smiles to angad, trying to make him think she didn't fast for him. As angad sees her holding sweet in her hand he gets disappointed and turns around and leves. When kripa sees him leave she turns around and throws the sweets in the garbeg then walk to nina. Kripa didn't know that angad was watching her. Angad saw her throw the sweet away and smiled to him self.

The moon came out and everyone got ready to do the poja. Kripa stood in front of angad holing the round thing in front of him.(don't know whats it called). Angad smiled at her will kripa did the poja. Now it was time for kripa to touch angad feet.
K: im not going to touch ur feet
A: u have to
K: what if I don't
A: mom is looking…touch my feet
K: looks at him angry) ok fine I will just pretend but I will touch the ground not ur stupid feets

Kripa bends down and pretend to touch the floor. Someone calls angads name and he looks away. Kripa sees angad is not looking she slowly touches his feet with out him notice then touchs her forhead. She gets up and smiles at angad.
K: ok all done
A: I havent feed u yet
K: im full
A: what did u eat
K: lots of things
A: oh really
K: yea
A: but as far as I remember I was watching u all the time and I never saw u eat anything
K: no I did eat
A: C'mon kripa u don't need to lie to me
K: im not lieing
A: ur face is saying u are
K: looks at him angry)
A: smiles and takes the water) here drink it
K: looks away)
Angad puts his finger on her cheen and moves her face facing him then slowly makes her drink the water. After drinking the water kripa looks down and angad smiles.
A: thanks
K: looks at him) for what?
A: for fasting for me
K: walks away from there)
Angad smiles to him self and was really happy.


Edited by Star* - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#87
awwww those 3 parts were really cute and swt!!...brillant job!!..plzzzz continue!!..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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4 months later

Nina and kripa were like saas and bahu they were more like best friends. They enjoyed a lot and nina was really happy becz kripa knew how to coke, clean and lots of other things, but angad didn't know how kripa was….he always thought his family might not like kripa….every time he sees his mom he thinks maybe now his mom will compline about kripa but she never did. Kripa like always hit angad and not let him come close to her but angad wouldn't give up.

Inside kripa loved angad a lot more than anything but outside she acted as if she hated him. She didn't want him to be part of her life…maybe becz she knew that she doesn't have good future once this one year finishes and she will go back to her own world that is full of hate and killing. A rishta come for angads small sister that is 20 years old…2 years younger than angad. Everyone was really happy and enjoying. There was a party and everyone went there including angad and kripa. They always acted as if they love each other in front of people.

At the party:

Everyone was enjoying dancing, laughing and talking. Kripa was standing next to angad when she sees someone. She excuse her self and leave toward the person. Kripa tapes the person and the person turns around.
K: happy) Raj
R: both hug) how are u kripa
K: apart and really happy) im great…how are u? and how is everything there
R: it's the same…but we miss u a lot
K: me to
R: so how is angad…u told in the phone that ur living with him..etc.
K: yea he is good to.

They were talking when angad sees them. At first he was surprised to see Raj but then he feels jealous becz he always heard him talking with kripa and he thought maybe kripa loves him. He sometime got angry when kripa said I love u to him but not to him. He went up to them
A: hi Raj
R: shakes his hand) hi angad how are u?
A: im great (under his breath) untile u came
R: did u say something
A: oh no I didn't…so how have u been

They kept on talking. Kripa heard what angad said and she was giggling becz she knew he was jealous of Raj. every time when kripa spoke with raj and when she sees angad she says I love u to raj even thought raj already hung up the phone.

2 days later.

It's the day of krishmas engagement. Everyone was really happy. They bring krishma down and she gets engaged.

Angad smiles and starts singing and dancing.

dulhania dulhania
dulhania dulhania
dulhania dulhania
dulhania

teri baanegi ye dulhania dulhania
dulhania dulhania
teri baanegi ye dulhania dulhania
dulhania dulhania

sharmaye sharmaye dulhania dulhania
dulhania dulhania
raat ye aayi hain naachenghe hum
teri sagayi hain naachenghe hum
naachneghe sang mein dulhania dulhania
dulhania dulhania
dulhania dulhania dulhania dulhania
teri baaneghi yeh dulhania dulhania
dulhania dulhania

sharmaye sharmaye dulhania dulhania
dulhania dulhania

tujhse hain ashiquii
tujhse hain har kushi
ishq mein ko gaye
mein teri hogayee

(Raj and kripa were dancing and enjoying.
Raj sings with kripa)

bole yeh pehro ki pejanya pejanya
sharmaye sharmaye dulhania dulhania
raat ye aayi hain naachenghe hum
teri sagayi hain naachenghe hum
naachneghe sang mein dulhania dulhania
dulhania dulhania

dulhania dulhania dulhania dulhania
teri banughi mein dulhania dulhania
dulhania dulhania
sharmaye sharmaye dulhania dulhania
dulhania dulhania

kyun tere chehre pe thum gayi ye nazar
hosh kyun oor gaye yeh hua kia assar
sajaanjee hogayee sajaanya sajaanya
sajaanya sajaanya
sajaan ki hogayee sanjaanya sajaanya
saajaanya sajaanya

sharmaye sharmaye dulhania dulhania
dulhania dulhania
raat ye aayi hain naachenghe hum
teri sagayi hain naachenghe hum
naachneghe sang mein dulhania dulhania
dulhania dulhania

Everyone was dancing and busy with their happiness. Raj grabs from kripas hand and both run from there out side to the garden. Angad sees them and gets jealous then fallows them.

Raj was telling kripa something and kripa got really happy and huge him. Angad came the same time and saw them hugging by the tree. He thought maybe they really did love each other. He started burning in jealousy and went back inside.

Everyone was still dancing

dulhania dulhania dulhania dulhania
teri baanegi ye dulhania dulhania
dulhania dulhania
sharmaye sharmaye dulhania dulhania
dulhania dulhania
dulhania dulhania
dulhania dulhania
dulhania dulhania
dulhania ..


Angad went to his room and sat down on the bed angry. Kripa wanted something so she went to the room and was smiling. She saw angad sitting on the bed angry so she went up to her

K: whats wrong angad?
A: looks up at her angry and stands up facing her) do u love me?
K: what?
A: moves toward her and she keeps moving back word) do u love me?
K: no
A: don't lie…u love me
K: I said no…
A: shouts) yes u do
K: moves back and hit's the door will angad puts his hands around her leaning at the door) angad?
A: tell me u love me
K: I don't…(pushes him and angad falls few steps back)

Kripa opens the door and was about to get out but angad holds form her arm and pulls her back in and push's her to the bed. Kripa falls on the bed and gets angry at his behavior. Angad locks the door and turns around facing her
K: why did u lock the door?…open the door
A: no
Kripa tries to get up but angad pushes her back on the bed and lays down on her holding her hands tight
K: angad leave me
A: remember I asked u who will u spent he rest of ur life with and u said the only person u will spent the rest of ur life with is the person who u love and slept with

K: looks at him and gets scared) angad leave me (tries to free her hand but couldn't)
A: holds her hands tight) I really love u
K: I don't…leave me angad
A: tell me u love u
K: I don't
A: tell me u love me
K: I said I don't
A: gets angry and speaks in angry tone) tell me u love me
K: gets nerves) I don't
A: ur my wife and I really love u… u have been living with me for passed 6 months but I never touched u…today ur going to be only my
K: gets teary her hand starts bleeding becz her bangle broke) angad plez leave me
A: starts kissing her neck will kripa cry's and try's to free her self)
K: screams) angaddddddddd

Kripa screams more and more but angad wouldn't leave her. He was gone crazy…he keep getting flash of kripa and Raj together hugging, then gets more angry and kisses her more.

Everyone down was dancing and the music was really loud. No one heard kripa and since her room was far too.



Kripa pushed angad and was about to run when angad grabs edge of her sari and pulls her back. Kripa falls on her knees crying and begging him not to rape her. Angad grabs form her hand and stands her up. He pushes her to the bed again. Kripa starts feeling dizzy. She tries to get up but angad wouldn't let her. Her sleeve was ripe and she got some broses in her arm and back. She was crying a lot. Kripa wanted to fight back but she falls back down on the bed and passes out.

Down stair at the party:

A man took his medicine out and was about to open it when he sees the name on the medicine says kripa. He thinks and remembers that when kripa was about to eat her medicine she bumped into the man and both of their medicine fall. the man picked up his medicine and kripa picked up hers. They left back to their own way. Kripa eat the medicine. The man goes up to the servant and tells him to give kripas medicine to kripa and the servant agrees but he couldn't find kripa so he waits till the party is over than he would give her medicine.

The party gets over and everyone leaves. Everyone goes to sleep and so does the servants.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#89
whoah. what's going on w/ the medicine? omg! continue soon. can't wait. great job like always.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#90
oh gosh!! superb parts!!! do cont. soon n keep up the good work!!

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