Phool Aur Kaante (A.K) - Page 5

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Angad reaches a place and he inters. Inside people where boxing and fighting (it was a training place) angad goes up to a man and asks him
A: I want to know where kripa is
M: I don't know
A: yes u do tell me
M: listen I told u I don't know
A: holds form his collar) tell me
M: I don't know I swear. Ask him he know
A: who
M: points at a person) he know ask him
A: leaves the man and walk up to the person who was boxing in with another guy) excuse me
The person looks at him then back to his boxing
A: I want to know where kripa is
P: I don't know her
A: yes u do…tell me
P: go away

The person was wearing a mask and his voice was like a teenager.
A: listen just tell me where she is
P: stops boxing and faces him) what if I don't
A: looks at him in the eye) oh yes u will
P: smiles to him) how about we make a deal
A: what is it
P: we will have a match and if u win I will tell u were kripa is..
A: and if u win
P: than u will never go near her
A: I will never
P: its ur choice u either have a match or u could leave
A: deal. Lets fight
P: smiles to him) now that's batter

They both stand in the center and starts fighting. Angad rises his hand to punch him but the person catches his fist and punches hard in the stomach. The person turns his arm behind him and smiles to him
P: u suck at fighting…how are u going to protect her if u want to have her
A: gets angry and turns around, punches hard at his right cheek.

The person falls few steps back and touches side of his mouth that was bleeding. U could only see the persons eyes and mouth the rest of the persons face was covered with black mask. The person smiles and fights again. They keep punching each other. Angad was getting tired becz every time he hit the person, the person would block and hit him back. He knew the other guy was equal to him or maybe a little stronger. The person after punching angad on the right cheek takes few steps back. He holds his head will feeling dizzy. Angad saw the person getting dizzy and trying its best to stay still. Angad smiled evilly and took advantage of that. He punched one hard on the persons right cheek and the person fall on the ground. The person couldn't get up anymore and didn't want to either.

A: do u give up
P: cowards give up not me…
A: ur down and u cant fight anymore…just tell me were she is
P: I don't think so…
A: sits down next to the person and holds from his collar) just tell me were she is…
P: laughs)
A: gets angry and shouts) tell me damn it…
The person moves its hand and takes off his mask and smiles at angad. As angad sees it he gets shocked.
A: k..kripa
K: smiles to him) what?
A: hugs her) im really sorry…im really sorry
K: pushes him) don't touch me…
A: smiles to her) where were u all this days….
K: why do u care
A: becz I love u…
K: cut the crap
A: I love u
K: will then hear this carefully. I hate u get it
A: I know u love me to
K: what the **** get lost….get away from me (pushes him again and gets up…she takes off her gloves and walks to a small room that was inside the club. Angad fallowed her. Kripa went and stood in front of the mirror looking at her cheek witch was blue. Angad stood behind her sad.
K: looking at him from mirror) nice punch…u fight good
A: same to u…
K: but u couldn't stand me that's way u cheated
A: I didn't know it was u..I swear I didn't mean to hurt u
K: shut up already…stop feeling sorry….listen (turns around and faces him) never ever feel sorry for someone who u hate
A: but I love u
K: whatever…just don't feel sorry becz if u do u will never be able to do something u want (turns back and washes her face)
A: wane go home
K: no
A: why not
K: I have work to do
A: like what
K: im looking for someone
A: who
K: stop questioning me…lets go
A: happy) I could come with u
K: sure C'mon

Kripa walk will angad by her. Kripa like always was chewing gum with her hands in her pockets and angad watching her smiling
K: would u stop looking at me
A: no
K: looks at him angry)
A: ok sorry
K: shakes her head and walks faster)
A: hey kripa wait up…by the way where are we going
Kripa inters a building and inters in a room.
K: sit here angad
A: where are we
K: u will know in a mint just sit
A: ok..(sits down on the chair will kripa leaning by the wall one foot across another. A lady inter and kripa smiles
K: hi
L: hi kripa how are u
K: what can happen to me..hey listen can u apply some medicine in his face…I kind of umm u know…
L: u beat him
K: ummm..kind of
L: looks at angad and smiles walk up to him) hi my name is Dr. aliya
A: stands up and shakes her hand) hi im angad

Aliya applies some medicine on angads face which was half bleeding and blue some parts
Al: so kripa how is working going
K: still alive and fit how do u think
Al: so angad how do u know kripa
K: im guiding this duffer
Al: oh I see…(to angad) ok all done
A: thanks
Al: no problem…

K: lets go
Al: hey kripa don't u want me to apply some on u
K: no thanks
A: kripa ur hurt to
K: im ok lets go…hey doctor how much is it
Al: u know I cant take any money from u
K: just tell me yar…

Al: im sorry but I cant take any money from u and u know that…
K: hugs her) take care of ur self bye (shakes her hand leaves fast from the room)
Aliya looks at her hand that kripa shake and put money on her hand.
Al: shakes her head and then looks at angad who was just standing smiling)
A: thanks
Al: its nothing…I would do anything for kripa…
A: how is she related to u
Al: she treats me like a little sister….
A: oh ok
Al: oh I forgot to tell kripa something…can u tell her to come over my house for dinner…
A: sure
Al: and u come to
A: thanks I will…bye
Al: bye

Moderator's Note: Edited to completely remove inappropriate language.

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Angad runs down after kripa and sees kripa inter a room. Angad fallows her and inters the room too. Kripa walks up to a man who was sitting on the bed and reading news paper. As the man sees kripa his face color changes
K: hi..how are u
M: swallowing hard) someone help me
K: shhhhh…don't shout..aww poor baby..look how much he is hurt
M: stay away from me….leave me alone plez
K: that's what in doing (walks around the machines and looks at it) wow hey what does this button do
M: scared) plez don't…
K: should I press it
M: crying and begging) no plez..plez don't do this
K: looking at the machine and angry) tell me where is ur boss
M: I don't know
K: where is rakish
M: plez
K: shouts) tell me
M: I will I will…but plez don't do anything to me….
K: just tell me
M: tells her where he is) plez I told u now leave me
K: thanks for the information (presses the button)
M: screams) noooo
K: looks at him smiling

The man starts breathing heard and harder. He keeps moving around his body trying his best to breath. Aliya inters the room and runs toward him. She looks at kripa who is staring and watching the man die and she backs up. The mans starts shouting toward aliya for help but aliya just stands there watching him to not doing anything. Angad was watching them all the time and didn't say anything. He was shocked watching kripa killing him and enjoying it but still didn't move a muscle to help. The man stops moving and dies. Kripa walks out of the room slamming the door and angad looks at aliya then runs after kripa.

A: kripa kripa….(catches up with her) kripa why did u kill him
K: if u didn't want me to then u should have helped him so I could have killed u to (walks and then sits at the big rock at the beach
Angad sits next to her silent
K: the man was one of rakish's mans…last night he tried to kill me but I hit him and he got stabbed in the stomach. The same time police came and took him to hospital. Today when I was coming down I saw him from the widow and just finished him off before he came back to kill me and give information to rakish about me
A: who is rakish
K: he is Zaibs brother….he sales drugs and his man found out that I was giving information to police so they tried to kill me and unfortunately they died them self…
A: u don't feel bad for killing
K: that's what I been doing for passed a 4 years

Kripa just sits there in silence and angad doesn't ask her anything incase she doesn't get angry. He was happy becz kripa at least talked to him right and told him what she was doing.
A: kripa
K: hmmm…
A: how come u told me this today and never before talked to me like this
K: looks at him angry) cut the crap and lets go
A: do u like me to…
K: that's it I will never tell u anything anymore becz u always take it wrong
A: no I didn't mean that..
K: shut up and lets go
A: by the way aliya said she wanted u to go over her house for dinner tonight
K: ok
A: she asked me to come along
K: why?
A: smiles to her)
K: lets go

They reach aliya's house and they where talking when kripas phone ringed. She went to the balcony to talk to raj will angad and aliya was inside
A: aliya
Al: yes
A: how did u meet kripa
Al: oh kripa…will we meet her at her work
A: plez tell me the truth
Al: why do u think im lying
A: aliya…I love kripa
Al: shocked and happy) really…did u tell her that
A: nodes her head) yes
Al: did she hurt u?
A: u should have seen how she was beating me up
Al: sorry but she hates it when someone likes her..she doesn't want anyone in her life
A: why?
Al: becz she knows if she have anyone in her life it will become her weakness
A: and u?
Al: she tries a lot to stay away from me…but she cant
A: why?
Al: she always protects me
A: from whom?
Al: anyone
A: what do u mean?

AL: 4 years back will I was coming from work…I saw kripa sleeping by edge of the tree and her hand bleeding. I went up to her and put a bandage on her hand. She thanked me and when I was leaving some guys started teasing me. They where trying to rape me when kripa hits them and she..she killed them right in front of me (getting teary) I was really scared I got in my car and was driving when I got in accident….my car was upside down and I was stock inside and couldn't open my seatbelt to get out….the oil of my car was running toward a cigarette that was laying on the street.

Kripa run toward my car and got inside trying to free me she cut my seatbelt and tried to pull me out…when she was doing it the oil got to the fire and the fire started at my car…some people pulled form her leg and took her out of the car but she got back in and pulled from my arms and got me out…my car exploded. The ambulance came and took me to the hospital. When I woke up I couldn't find her…few days later I was walking down the street when I saw kripa again fighting…that time she was fighting with raj…I saw her beat raj..I ran to raj and helped him up but kripa didn't let me apply anything to him…she told me that he should get healed by him self becz someday he will be hurt and no one will be there to help him so he should learn….that why she never lets me help her but she always brings raj to hospital every time she got in a fight with him (laughs) the only reason now she brings raj to my hospital is becz she wants him to get batter so she could beat him again

A: smiles but feels sad) I don't like the way she kills people
Al: at first I didn't either but later I found out that she only kills people who kills innocent people…that man that u saw she killed today in the hospital…we don't know how many people he killed
A: still its not right she shouldn't…

Al: u only seen her kill but u don't know how many people she saved…how many peoples life she built back…u should be lucky that u love her…she is hard outside but inside she is still teenager girl who is always screaming for her happy life back but no one could hear her…she is not use to love…she always seen hate the only people she talks good is me and raj…but she will be good with u to if u know her and understand her…. Plez don't mind if she is mean to u
A: of course not
Al: she might umm….she might hit u a lot or scream at u but trust me she is not like that…
A: I know…I understand her…I promise I will take care of her
Al: smiles at him and kripa comes out of balcony angry like always) what's wrong kripa what happen?

K: raj says the people are after me and they are searching to kill me…
A: what are u going to do
K: fight back.duh
Al: u cant handle all of them
K: so
A: so u will get killed
K: I don't care
A: u should
K: why…whats the reason
A: becz if something happens to u what will I do
K: what do u mean what will I do…u will like always sleep peaceful duhh…
A: I wont let anything happen to u
K: yea right…ok aliya I have to go
Al: stay here

K: no I cant…I need to get out of this town for few days and if I stay here they will come here finding me…and u know I cant risk ur life for my self…
A: I will go with u
K: no u aren't
A: why not…ur still working with me
K: no im not…I already told raja that I wont be working for u anymore so he assigned u a new person
A: shocked) what?
K: u heard me
A: but I want to be with u
K: go to hell man shut up…stop acting like u care for me when u don't
A: how do u know I don't
K: becz I know
A: no u don't….
K: ufff…just shut up man
A: give me a good reason
K: becz ur hearting my head
A: oh ur head hurts want me to massage it
K: ufff…(leaves from there and angad runs after her after saying quick bye to aliya)
A: kripa wait
K: get lost
A: holds from her arm and looks at her angry) did u really quit
K: pulls her hand) yes
A: fine…I don't care I will go with u no matter what
K: why are u wasting ur time with me
A: im not wasting my time with u…its called love
K: whatever…

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