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Posted: 19 years ago
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fabbbbbbb jobbbb
it was fabbbbbbb 😊
cont sooooon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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tat waz AMAZING..cont soon!!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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as usual, amazing job!!! do cont. soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I love the way Angad fights for his love!! Cont. soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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They reach home and kripa opens her closet
A: looks inside) wow are this all urs
K: don't touch them
A: what does this do (picks up something and points toward kripa)
K: looks at him then back to her gun that she was filling bullets in it) its for killing…in few seconds its going to fire and kill me
A: drops it fast from her hand)ohhhh…sorry(picks up a picture)who are this people and why are some people has X mark in them
K: thoes are the people who are dead now
A: oh ok…(gets it) what? U mean this are the people who u…u
K: loads her gun) yes they are the people who I killed and some are still alive
A: why do u kill them..arent u afraid of cops
K: im not coward to be afraid like u
A: im not afraid of them
K: whatever…..

Kripa packs up all her stuff on camping kind of bag and leaves her house angad fallowing her. Kripa stops and yells at angad
K: stop fallowing me
A: im not fallowing u
K: then go ur own way
A: I am
K: ufff…(starts walking again)

As they where walking they passed a place where lots of people were getting married the same time. Some mans where there and they saw kripa and recognized her. The man taped the other man next to him. They all looked at kripa and kripa smiled at them. All of sudden kripa started running back dragging angad with her will the mans after them with swords. They reached the same place where were the wedding.
A: lets hide here
K: ok

Kripa goes in girls room and angad in mans room. The girls surrounds kripa and starts dressing her fast. Same thing happened with angad. All the brides and grooms comes out of the room and get with their partner.

There where lots of people getting married and they didn't know that one of the bride and groom was missing. The bride and groom that angad and kripa cam in their place they run away not wanting to get married. Kripa kept looking at the door and the mans were out side searching for them. Kripa didn't pay much attention and keep putting her gong at up glancing at the door and angad was smiling becz they where getting married. The pundit told them to take the pairas and they got up and did. They sat down back and pandit give angad the sindoor box to apply it on kripa. Kripa was looking toward the door when angad put sindoor on her forehead. Kripa turned and looked at angad shocked. She just realized that she was getting married. She looked at angad shocked will small tears came in corner of her eyes. She was about to get up when angad put mangelsut around her neck. Kripa started breathing hard will hiding her face under her gongad and crying in silent. All of them got married in the same time. People started cheering for them and they where really happy except kripa who was crying in silent. Angad notice and put his arm around her shoulders. Kripa wiped her tears and pushed him will leaving from there. No one notice becz they where really busy. Kripa got dressed quickly on her regulator cloths and walked out form there. Angad run after her smiling and hugged her from behind

K: pushes him) stop it
A: u should be happy…we got married today
K: shut up I don't believe in his marriage
A: will u have to..becz that's the reality
K: get lost…understand this…our way is different…
A: nope…now we are married so ur my jaan and im urs
K: go to hell
A: if I go to hell then u will be alone
K: shut up…I wish I had my gun and just shot u
A: u want to get widow so fast
K: shut up….
A: hey lets go there( points toward a hotel)
K: why?
A: look behind u..

Kripa looks behind her and sees the mans searching for them.
A: C'mon (grabs her hand and runs toward the hotel…they reach the hotel) u wait here I will get a room
K: ok hurry…
A: yea…
Angad gets the keys and goes with kripa
A: lets go
They reach toward the room and angad opens the room and both inter
K: which one is ur room
A: what?….we have the same room
K: what? No way
A: we are married so there is a way
K: to hell with u….im getting out of here
A: they are still outside….
K: ufff…..
Angad sees flowers and gets all the pateles and throws it on top of the bed
K: what the hell are u doing
A: will tonight is our suhagrat
K: what the hell
A: gets his shirt off and walks toward kripa and picks her up in his arm)
K: leave me
A: smiles and throws her on the bed and lays on top of her)
K: what the **** get off me
A: plez at least don't be mad on our suhagrat
K: looks away and in calm voice that sounded sad) leave me angad….
A: no (kisses her neck)
K: tear starts rolling from corner of her eyes…same tone again) plez angad leave me….
A: ignores her and kisses her neck again)

Kripa starts crying becz she couldn't free her hand that angad was holding tight. Angad looks at her and sees her crying in silent he gets up and sits on the edge of the bed will kripa turns her back toward him and buries her face on the pillow crying. Angads heart starts aching seeing her cry.
A: plez kripa don't cry
K: continues to cry more)
Angad turns kripa toward him facing him and creases her hair will she hold her face with her hands.
A: kripa I promise I will keep u really happy…trust me….I really love u….
As kripa hears angad say I love u she falls a sleep with out noticing

In the morning kripa wakes up. She sits up and sees her shoes off and blanket on top of her, her hair open not in pony like always. She looks around and finds angad sleeping on the floor next to the bed. She smiles to her self knowing that when she fall a sleep angad took her shoes off and her hair loss so she could sleep right. As she smiles she thinks of something and her smile disappears. Kripa wears her shoes and grabs her bag. She slowly gets out of the room not wanting for angad to notice.

2 hours later angad wakes up. He stretches then jerks up when he sees that kripa was not on the bed.
A: ****..she ran away
He gets up quickly and grabs his bag then runs from the room not washing her face or etc. he reaches the reception desk and asks him if he saw where kripa went
R: sir she left 2 hours ago
A: what?..**** (runs from there out side)

Moderator's Note:
Edited to remove inappropriate language.



Edited by shahidlover24 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
continue soon .....oh god i hope angad finds kripa!!! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
i love your fan-fic! it is totally different, continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#58
😆 😆 😳
fabbbbbbbb jobbbbbb cont sooooooon 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59
tht was rocking yaar!!...hope angad finds his darling kripa..haha..plzz continue soon..
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
OMG that was so so so so awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I cant believe their married, seriously that was just 2 good! Cont. soon!

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