New SS: Starlight Express CLOSED Indefinitely - Page 98

i just got a little confused here.

Again, a brilliant addition. Jyoti, I'm indulging you right back. But we need to make a move soon. Takers for the outcome of this scene?


"Oye...What's your name?" He asked and she tilted her head back to take in his towering form. Her index finger gently pushed on her glasses that hung low on the bridge of her nose, while she thought about all the times she'd wished to be of such height. To reach the jar of cookies that her mom kept high on the shelves without a chair and without having to precariously jump on the cushion that sunk low even under her frail body.

"Naina..." She heard herself sound brusque, with an edge of contempt, "And you can't come inside...Mom says, I can't let any strangers inside our house"

"Accha, this is our Chacha's house, " He said mockingly and with a shake of the head that made her itch to want to stick out her tongue at him, "and you are only renting this portion. I used to stay here before you came along...Is your Mom home?"

She watched him look around the house, as if he was sizing up on the room's particulars to loot them in the night.

"What are you searching for? There is nothing in the house to steal..."

He hunkered to his heels, his brows furrowed and she saw that the tiny hairs on his face, stuck out on all directions. Gross, she thought and a slight grimace laced her features.

"You don't bathe?..." The words sprung to her lips just as suddenly and she felt her reserve break as she gazed into his eyes - this giant man, who didn't know that he had liquid brown eyes, eyes like the teddy bear she'd once hugged at nights and slept. "Mom says reporters think that its cool to look the way you do...but really..." She found herself nodding wildly, "its not cool at all..."

"Naina..." Her mom came in, her face stuck half-way through rapidly building horror and an amusement that seemed uncharacteristic of her nowadays.

This part was contributed by a reader who doesn't want to be named.

So here it goes...Great points to add. And I'm absolutely loving the bits of story that you girls are building. Please keep it coming.

Ms.Anonymous writes to me...

Usually when two people meet for the first time, sparks would fly and that magical feeling would take over; feeling like you have seen them somewhere or you have known each other for the longest time; you belong together, but that was not the case with these two.

The first eye lock between the two should be strong and adamant where she never takes her eyes off him, making him feel very uncomfortable. And then the lights suddenly go off.

Yami calls out to Naina to come to her side, while Naina is walking over she stumbles on some books laying on the floor. Kunal reaches out get hold of those books before Naina picks them up in the dark, but Yami gets to them first and collects them. She walks away with Naina questioning her on who was he and why was she talking to strangers. Naina explains that he is a reporter, of whom Chacha spoke to her about, but he smells really bad.

Kunal is having some disturbing thoughts when he is thinking of those split seconds he met Yami.

I can't think more! But you want them to get married under unusual circumstances and which are not common.

Option 1. He is responsible for her husband's death (possible suicide along with the actress who killed her self was having an affair with Yami's husband?) and when Kunal finds out he marries Yami to repent his mistakes.

And he feels responsible for Naina's future and marries Yami.

@ Anonymous...

Your scene comes before mine. So I'm going to re-order that later when I summarize and put up the "Story so far..." post.

I'm calling this Will-O-the-Wisp.

Can you see Kunal and Naina in this song? With Yami watching them occasionally from behind the wall or when passing through the road and when she feels the urge to tear her eyes away from them, he raises his gaze to her...

www.youtube.com/watch?v=iQ9EsLzE_q4

PS Somone please post the song, if they can...

I tried to post
Its such a beautiful song
But could not
The story progression is super good

Thanks Hima.

You need to get the space out before the HTML tags.

Ok...I have posted too many times. I'm going out for dinner and hopefully I will find something to write when I come back...

Girls, Common...