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charlie1950 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
its getiin too much crowded and
crowd is never good in a relationship.
whts up with families trying to set their
kids with other kids without telling them
parents need to grow up and understand
that their kids have grown up to and can make
decisions for themselves and its never good to
force decisions on them.
im just missing maaneet mushy moments,can we
pls have them bak and just ignore the crowd😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update
omg destiny playing with them
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 6thElement

@ Mystique: Imagine this...she was in a relationship with a man for two years and also engaged to be married in the last days of their relationship. Wouldn't it be awkward to face her ex-inlaws for the first time after the break up?

@ Jyoti: There sure is some back story, but there isn't a lot either. I'm keeping it simple for now, which being Abhinav and Geet were brought together by their families and were engaged to be married. Abhinav's proposal - Coming entirely due to pressure from both their families. Reasons for the breakup: Quite vague as both seem to have a different understanding of what caused their separation. Geet thinks that Abhinav felt that she was too Indian for him. Abhinav feels she didn't love him wholly.

Abhinav to-date hasn't spoken of their reasons for going separate ways to anyone. He doesn't intend to either. Not even to Geet.

An open confession: The story did a 180 on me. I'm not following my original script as something doesn't seem to fit in with the way the characters have evolved up until this point. I'm at their mercy to lead me - which is bittersweet because they are such a pain in the wrong place for keeping me hooked to them at my work place, filling my head with the most inappropriate of scenes 😆. And for the same reasons, their seduction is so dousing that I'm unable to stay away from indulging in them.
Its such a vicious cycle.
So do I make you folks all feel the same way as they do to me?...that is a whole another story...and I can only pray that my writing doesn't come short of it.

Good Night...its almost morning here...


i am just wondering...y do i always go off abt the story...i mean i always try to look into relations that r not that imp...alas...what can i do...😆

the reason is vague ..as u said...i mean ...i think they themselves dont know the reason...they think that they know the reason...but it seems that they actually havent talked abt it...

i mean...it is abhi naa who broke it up...n plz dont tell me he used the same line...it is not u...it is I...i mean ...that is cliche...😆

so abhi does not intend to speak...but y...y does he feel like he need not explain...just coz he thought she did not love him...so there is no need for explanation...🤔

will we get to know the convo they had when they broke up??

180 turn...gr8...now u will give us more confusion to think abt...😒...

seems like we r at the mercy of the characters who spell their story to u...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Indeed...one of the updates will be the flashback of their conversation. That was the initial plan and hopefully I will stick to it.

😆 No, I'm not going for the cliche. Its more resentment than anything else and at the base of things its a simple lovers quarrel...a torrid escalation.

More confusion...its more like equal playing grounds.

I normally stick to my story draft. This time, I guess we are all falling prey to my fanciful whims.
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ Dream Invincible.

Thanks for letting me know that its getting crowded for you. But really its just three, to my knowledge, that form the triangle and no one else.

I can't begin to tell you the kind of matchmaking that goes on around here. Its almost like a conspiracy to keep that Indian blood running from one generation to another...

Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 19 Ohhh it means she doesn't love him...they are together only b'coss of their family wnats...and he knows that...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 20
It was pooja at geet's house...firstly she was enjoying gossip about maan...and when she saw abhi's mother she knew that abhi is aslo going to come...but why she scared to see him...may she doesnt want any convo. about them...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the siggy...it is perfect to your storyline...but it looks like there is no place for Sam...story revolves only these three...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 21
All we are thingking that she has to face abhi...but you did it again...fooling us...it was aashi...
Waht is this their parents are matchmaking and for aashi they found maan...nooo...
And this is the line...geets heart took a free fall...it means she really really falls for maan...falling in love with him...
Nice twist...
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Part 20

It was pooja at geet's house...



The pooja was not at Geet's house. She went to her mother's friend's place...

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