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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ucompleteme

Why do I get the feeling Maan left after seeing that picture of her in the yearbook? Is he writing her off as too naive or too innocent or just because of the rebound? Something is definitely holding him back.
I feel bad for Geet at this point. Another level of uncertainity added to the mix for her and this rejection will probably be worse than the previous one😭. Although I am sure all rejection hurts the same.
Please continue soon. Thanks for the update.



But he kissed her all the same, even after he saw her picture. Didn't he?
Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shalini_s

perfect answer... loved the update... and Maan tying his hand at humor... not ur field boss..



He is nervous poor chap. Let him be...😆

Glad you liked the answer !
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Posted: 13 years ago


Thank you :)


Originally posted by: seshatree

its really magical...like something is really gonna happen...



Oh! nice...I like the way make it sound like a thriller...Thanks ;)


Originally posted by: hermoso

loved it and indeed an awesome update .



Thank you gurl!


Originally posted by: SiniHanda

Sigh... need to find my man to lean onto. Beautiful 👏



Yeah! you better run off to find him... Thank you ;)


Originally posted by: Azmatazz

Loving the updates Hasini... This one was a Hot Chocolate one but with a little more cocoa... 😉 😳




He he...I guess. So what would you have to say of Chapter 17? I think that covers for the marshmellows...😆 Lord! what am I talking here?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ucompleteme


Favorite line in this update.

These unadulterated moments of laughter and spontaneity make up so much of true relationships. Of all the things they did together, tree decorating, eating together, watching the movie, this one was my favorite moment.
LOVED THE UPDATE.



Ah! thanks...

Yeah...I think so too...How many times we have had someone imitate us and it takes a second or two before we realize its us they are imitating?
😆 I confess it has happened to me at least a few times.
Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvScooby

There was so much warmth in this update, maybe christmas magic afterall. It was very serene.

I liked that there was mention of woman on rebound b/c I'm sure that thought crosses in your mind if you were to encounter such a person. Whatever the fate maybe, I'm just being hopeful...afterall, all disney tales should end with "Happily Ever After."



Christmas magic...and much more I would say. This is all they have...these moments...

😆 Disney stories sure does makes a believer out of most of us...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Antares

Great update!

What are they really heading towards... is it just attraction or there is more to it than just physical pull. Maan doesn't want to be a getaway from loneliness for Geet... hope they both are not taking it as something casual.

She must have got them before her trip to Seattle and now they held a memory of her past, in their dying hues that crumbled under his touch.


Is this line suggestive of how the memories of her past with Abhinav are going to be wiped out with Maan's presence in her life... there is a positive vibe to it, I feel.

Can't wait to know what turn their companionship takes... Do continue soon.



Ah! you picked up on that...I'm only glad that you also mentioned it her. Comes close to being appreciated in many ways...😉
Thank you...

Well keep feeling that positive vibes...Its a feel good story after all...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Rebound vs love
As the story is progressing alot of times
Geet and maan is thinking abt.rebound
And love has not come out crystal clear
In their mind.
For reasons unforeseen they r attracted
To each other
For reasons unknown they somehow feel
Comfortable with each other
For reasons they can't fathom they can read
Each others feelings
For No reason their give solace to each other

There is no perfect time,reason ,place to fall
In love with someone.u just fall in love.

It's just sometime the past history that makes
U think if ur in love or is it rebound

Loved both the updates.slowly but steadily
They r coming to point where they will see it
Clearly if it's love or rebound

Abhinav is somehow imp.for the story perhaps
He is the catalyst to their love formula which
Maaneet r trying to understand.

Lov ya
Edited by dreaminvincible - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dreaminvincible

Rebound vs love

As the story is progressing alot of times
Geet and maan is thinking abt.rebound
And love has not come out crystal clear
In their mind.
For reasons unforeseen they r attracted
To each other
For reasons unknown they somehow feel
Comfortable with each other
For reasons they can't fathom they can read
Each others feelings
For No reason their give solace to each other

There is no perfect time,reason ,place to fall
In love with someone.u just fall in love.

It's just sometime the past history that makes
U think if ur in love or is it rebound

Loved both the updates.slowly but steadily
They r coming to point where they will see it
Clearly if it's love or rebound

Abhinav is somehow imp.for the story perhaps
He is the catalyst to their love formula which
Maaneet r trying to understand.

Lov ya



You have it down in a poetry gurl!...You have said it all. Thanks so much :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome..really very interesting hasini..very well written...please do update soon..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 6thElement



You have it down in a poetry gurl!...You have said it all. Thanks so much :)

Ur welcome sweetheart

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