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Nice ones Hasini...I like the way you are so descriptive about everything. Every small movement, the twitch of an eye, the bend of the train, nothing goes unnoticed. It just makes the whole thing almost tangible.

@ Priti: Should we have Maan framed as a myth? 😆 Because I don't seem to have come across anyone like that...


@ Ucompleteme: (First..we need a nick name for you in the thread). New promises gurl! I will post something or the other every day (unless somethings gets into my way) Don't keep thanking me for it.

Ivre: Sur...its sure is good to see you here again. Well I will just keeping writing details. That's all I got gurl!

Originally posted by: 6thElement

I don't do trick questions gurl!

Just asking for feedback. Even I hate books that require me to read twice.

Originally posted by: Azmatazz

Hey I was just kidding... hope I did not offend you in any which ways... for that was not my intention at all...

To answer your question it definitely is a good thing, but with your story I feel that every conversation of Maan and Geet has a deep itched meaning... something that I want to understand... but need to put in those effors to understand it... I'm not complaining here... I love reading your updates again and again!!! 😳

Probably thats one of the reasons that keeps pushing me back to your stories more frequently... Everytime after having read it I feel I understand their characters better than the last time... Dont ask me how but feel I more connected to your stories then... 😊

By the way I just finished reading Dear Diaries... Loved it... Enjoyed how Geets preconceived notions of guilt and Maans sincerity towards his relationships kept them apart but still joined by the basic human need to belong ... 😊

Lord! No hard feelings at all.

Well I was only asking to get feedback. Because not everyone would want to come back to get another read. But I'm glad it means otherwise to you...

Thanks for reading up Dear diaries...Good to know.

Originally posted by: Escapist

Damn I hate it when I type so much and arrg it all vanishes...why cant it be published automatically ?? huh

btw...

Happy New Year..though its a belated one !

Finally m here, reached chap 4...and there are no emotions involved...god I mean moving stories..stories of normal life and heartbreak but still din strike a cord within me..feels like m just reading plain words and emotions have no place...and tears are a far fetched thing to be true!
but one thing is still the same your amazing style of writing that I absolutely adore !
It's not you whose writing doesn't hold emotions its me...

Lets, see if the further parts have an effect or no...and hopefully will try to finish the 13 parts in a go but I know that its an highly impossible task...
And 2-3 stories that I usually read are also pending ..dunno when they come outta the back and even my own work has taken a back seat!

Cheers,
Fatima

Happy new year to you too.

Seems like you are getting back to your IF backlog 😉

No problem...Hope the story will have a sooner impact on you...Thank you :)

Note to all

1. I will be writing frequent shorter updates going forward.

2. There will no more new FFs for I want to wrap up all that is pending at the moment.

3. My sentiments about sending PMs are quite bitter and so I will only be sending them out every couple of updates.

4. Sometime work keeps me away from responding to comments on the thread, but that does not mean I don't cherish your posts. 🤗

5. I'm also going to limit my availability in IF starting soon. Well, I basically can't justify the amount of time spent here, when there is basically not much interaction/discussions that calls for my active presence. So did you get what I was trying to convey in this last point? Even lesser responses from my end ;) 😛

Perhaps all this will do more damage to my threads and to my motivation. But I rather close shop (my FFs) sooner and focus only on writing. Comments (more concerning encouragement) in IF seem seasonal and appears to be a personal choice when at that.

No offense meant to anyone, and none taken either. 😊

I've only read chapter 11 have decided to read chap 12 - 13 and then go and read from the beginning. Yes, you can call me mad for taking this route.

Chapter 12 what have you done, mentioning mango's, toffee and chocolate lastly Eclairs right now I want all this in my mouth 😭

Gurly, (undercoverhappy) That is so wrong... How can you read chapters in reverse?

Makes me want to go check Chapter 10 to see what its got to draw you first to it? 😆

Thank you :)