Pyaar keh rang!.a fanfic(sujal n kashish) - Page 65

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Posted: 19 years ago
OHHHH WOW farah darling.... 😊
too good yaar.... 👏 read last 2 parts just now.... 😉
completely rocking.... 👏 n ye part mei CG kya emotinal ho gaya... 😭
ummmmm dear ur story is 2 good..... 👏
plz post the epilogue soon.... 😛
eagerly waiting... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
farah dear me so happy that you continued yaar.... 😃 & tujhe patah hain tumne ek dum dhassu part likha hain... 👏 kashish ko cg ne beti bana liya........ 😆 sujal kashish were shoooooo sweet together......... 😳 good that vasu ko thappad pada...par dukh ki baat yeh hain ki usse ek hi thappad pada..do chaar aur padthe tho mazaa aajaatha kaash lalit usse do chaar aur maartha........... 😉
good that piyush aur archie bhi saath mein hain... 😊 😛 😃 me eagerly waiting for the epilogue....please post soon... 😃
aur haan farah yaaro ek ahem ahem part likhna i mean a romantic part between sujal & kashish... 😉
aur ek baat kyunke tumne story continue ki hain uske liye a bigggggggg hug from me 🤗
u ROCK....... 👍🏼
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Farah jiiiiiii intizar nahi horaha ab
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Posted: 19 years ago
farah jii
tooooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooooood
loved it totallyyyyyyyy 👏
the bestest story yaar
sujal and kashish were so sweet in the end..............likin kashish ko sujal ko thapar nahin marna chahiye tha 😭 kitna dard howa hoga bachay koo
archie and piyush.................sweet couple
😳
and rishi ko bhi koi day deni thi na
bechara akela reh gaya
😉
lol

ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
farah please continue soon aur haan meri farmaish yaad rakhna....... 😉 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
Farah jiiiiiiiii plz jaldi likho na
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Posted: 19 years ago
Sorry for the late comment gogo 😆 😆 bauhat bauhat bauhat achay yaaar ..!! 👏zabardast..!! lekin agla part jaldi likho na ..aur aisa likhna k mein perh sakooooon 😆 toooo goood👏
Continueee Soooooooooooon..!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
ok guys herez pyaar keh rang..eespecial sorry to surya....i kept you waiting.....and eeespecial thanx to everyone who read the story...this on is for all of you

recap:...alls well that ends well...sujal kashish ki shaadi ho jati hai....piyush and archie end up together...now lets look at the newly wed...sujal and kashish...

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kashish:.....pichle kuch dino mein zindagi kitni badal gayi......muje to laga tah mein sab kuch kho bheti hon....par aj......mein bahut khush hon.....sujal mere saath hai...aur...
sujal:..Kashiiish...
kashish:..hmmm....(she stopped writing)
sujal:..kya kar rahi ho...(he just came into the room)
kashish:...dairy likh rahi....
sujal came and sat next to her...closed her dairy...and started looking at her
kashish:...kya baat hai??
sujal:..yehi to soch raha hon...(he continued dreamingly)...keh tum mein aisi kya baat hai jo mein tumhari taraf kheecha ata hon....
kashish:...(halke se diary sujal keh sar peh marti hai..)..pagal....(she got up)
sujal:..kahan ja rahi ho
kashish:....haath choro
sujal:..aray?
kashish:.....sujal..haath choro....
sujal:..kya huwa?
kashish:...yeh tum mujse puch rahe ho...
sujal:..nahi....puch to is deewar se raha hon..par agar tum batana chahti ho to bata do....(he smiles mischievously)
kashish:.>SUJAAL...ur impossible...
sujal:....make me possible...(woh apna face agaye karta hai...so she kisses him)
kashish:..(pushes him on the bed.....and khare ho kar bolti hai)....ap shayad bhul gaye hain...keh yeh HUMARA honeymoon tha.......muje yahan chor keh kahan chale gaye the??
sujal:...ooooo....(still lying on the bed..)....to ghusa is baat ka hai.....(and smiles)
kashish:.....jee haan....ab tum yahan bheto...mein ja rahi hon
sujal:..kashish kashish...ruko na....(he comes and grabs her from her waist and keeps his head on her shoulder.....)......i am sorry
kashish doesnt reply
sujal:....kaha na baba...i am sorry...(he comes infront of her and holds her face...)......ab agar tum yunhi naraz rahi to....to mein....
kashish:..to tum kya?....(she looks at him.....and smiles)
sujal:...to mein......(he comes towards her as she steps back)
kashish smiles
sujal:...tumhe....
kashish:..muje??
sujal corners her and blocks her way by putting up his arms around her.....and slowly gets close to kiss her neck...when kashish pushes him back...
kashish:.....itni asani se nahi....(she shows him her thumb...and runs off)
sujal:...mein bhi peecha chorne wala nahi..........(he ruffles his hair and then catches upto her)...

they were on their honeymoon.....sujal keh farmhouse par..hehehe...

......kashish ran outside....(it was night time)....sujal caught her from her waist and swang her....dono neeche gans peh gir jate hain.....on top of each other.....both were almost out of breath.....but stared at each other....

sujal:...(ahista se kashish keh chehre par se baal hatha hai....)...bhaag k kaha jane ka irada tha?
kashish shies:.....tum nahi sudhroge....
sujal:...kabhie nahi....
kashish:...mere sare kapre gande ho gaye
sujal:.....kisne kaha tha bhaago
kashish:....tum tang kar rahe the
sujal:..mein to pyaar kar raha tha
kashish:...besharam
sujal:....mera naam sujal hai
kashish:..suuujaaal....stop it...ab utho
sujal:..nahi
kashish:....aise hi rehienge kya raat bhar
sujal:..mein to zindagi bhar bus tumeh aise hi dekhte rehna chahta hon
kashish:....sirf dekhte rahoge...
sujal.:..hmmmmm.....ap kahein too...
kashish:..shut up...(she pushes him off...)
sujal:..kya huwa...
kashish:..kuch nahi....(she is walking away when sujal holds her hand)
sujal:..kashiish...tumhare liye ek surprize hai
kashish:...surprize...??...woh kya
sujal:..ankhein bad karo...
kashish:...tum phir shuru ho gaye
sujal:...aray baba...ankhein band karo na....
kashish:...ok...(she closes her eyes...aur sujal uski ankhon peh patti band deta hai...)
kashish:..sujal...yeh kya
sujal::..shhh......haath pakro....aur chalo
kashish:..sujal..kahan..ja rahe hain....(she was holding sujal's hand)
sujal:....(after a while)..hmmm...(he took the patti off)..ab ankhein khulo

.........
kashish was standing on sujal's hired ki hui boat..near their farmhouse lake....lol...boat peh table set hui wi thi....candle light dinner.....
kashish:..(was overwhelmed)...sujal
sujal:..(kept his finger on her lips).....sirf ...tumhare liye...
kashish:..to shaam se isiliye gayab the
sujal winks at her.....:..abhi maaf nahi karogi
kashish:(smiles)..i love you....(she hugged him)...
sujal:....i love you tooo....(he hugged her back......music time)

......thoda sa pyaar huwa hai....thoda hai baqiiii
la la la lal lala alala lalala alalalllaaal
thoda sa pyaar huwa hai
thoda hai baqiiii
(sujal swings kashish in his arms....and the dance starts)

sujal:....pyaar hum ne kiya hai
pyaar tumne kiya hai
aj dil jhum raha haiii
dil ko dildar mila hai

kashish:....mera hum saya hai tuuuu
hoooooooooooooooooo
dhoop mein sayaa hai tuu
tuje hain khushiyan baqiii
thoda sa pyaar huwa hai....
thoda hai baqii
hmmm hmmm pyaar huwa haiii....hmmm hmmm baqiiii

so...as the song ends.....so does the story.....sujal aur kashish ki zindagi mein abhi bahut pyaar baqi hai....jo hamesha chalta rahega.......jab tak unki sasein chal rahi hain.................tab tak yeh saath bana rahe ga.....

so here was the end.....thank you guys for taking out time to read this...luv you alll
tc
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Posted: 19 years ago
really nice ending
very good
👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
😊😛😃 farah ur just tooo gooddddddddddddd yaar....... plz mujhe sambhalo kahiin main ghir na jaun tune kya likha hain yaaro...😃 yaaro seriouly the story was toooo damn ROCKING , ZABARDAST , AWESOME ,BINDAAS , DHAASU , FANTASTIC , EXCELLENT , PAR EXCELLENCE , BRILLIANT , TOOOO COOL , SUPERB , MAST 👏 ab isse zyada words mujhe nahi aathe to describe your story............. 👏
farah me fulltoo fida over your writing... 😃
ab me can't say continue for pkr but then keep up the good work....... 👍🏼
love u....... 🤗 🤗
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago

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