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soni4eva

@soni4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

congrats 4 da new ss

luv it awsum

eagerly w8in 4 da nxt update 😍

plzz cont soon fanx 4 da pm x

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meenu

@-Nia04-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

rose when r u updating next parts??

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

amazing SS...just read all parts and wow...I loved it...absolutely. Waiting eagerly for the next part honey

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Zubi

@misssmily

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Fantastic ! Loved it ! Nice concept 😊 !

Am sorry Rosie haven't been able to comment earlier 😔
Was a bit bsy... but read all parts and really enjoyed it ! 😳

As usual here is my analyse 😊 : Maan is tired of his routine, he feels lonely and wants something new, he is kinda jealous from Armaan who has a lovly family, hence appears geet ! Maan is trying to seduce her, but what you didn't mention is his intention, i mean is it just physical attraction or somthing stronger, you have let us known that he never went to the extent to buy flowers for a girl and here he is doing it BUT you didn't give any indication abt his state of mind... i mean for now, as a reader, i feel that maan is interested in geet indeed BUT he is not serious about her ( for now at least ). If it is what you wanted then u succeeded if not, you should show the change in maan. Because the fact is u portryaed him as a BIG HUGE womanizer, so you will have to work a lot on his charcrter to show the change ( this will be the real challenge in this story 😉 )... after the change a reader should b satisfied, like he should say : Ok now he will never leave geet even if confronted to 10 sexy b**** 😆

Hope you get what i said ^^

Me waiting for the next !
With all my love and support !

Zubi 😊

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TanuDDian

@TanuDDian

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

till part 3
for sure Mandy means trouble for Geet...
hope Maan is not gonna use and throw Geet...
cont soon dear...

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

loved the update...

maan is so confident that she will come and also he knew that mandy wud defnitely make sure to go...

eagerly waiting to c wat geet is planning to do

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

U-P-D-A-T-I-N-G

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Edited by Gurti_Rocks - 13 years ago

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Saru

@smallville

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Yayaya ur back with another !!!!
I have been going on IF just to see if u wrote another ff and I must say it's amazing !!!
I love maan's character strong and powerful and a sweet but strong geet!
Love geet playing hard to get ;)
I'm sure she'll come around !!
Continue sooon ...ur updates make my day better :D

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589498

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Edited by Gurti_Rocks - 13 years ago

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