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Posted: 13 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Water.

I am concerned for Geet too...

Is this Maan right for her...i mean the way he is...I m not sure..

I m I am all for Maneet...but for some reason...I am just not able to digest what he was for all these years...n now since he thinks she is fu***** Hot babe...he can change over night...

U understand what i m trying to say right?



Hmmm! i get that!
He was Casanova before, May be he feels for geet more than the one night stand. I made it clear and still on to show the changes he pursued gee gradually. Once in a life time everyone will have their true love, and its not too late for maan. he was tired of being chased by Women(s). He feels Geet is special coz she is enigmatic women. as they say, one moment is enough to fall in love, and Love can change anyone over a night. and none was spared by the hit of love arrow.
Edited by Gurti_Rocks - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
That was fab!

I don't usually comment...and I just recently discovered you...read all your work...and I totally loved it!
I have to applaud your consistency!👏 You update with such amazing frequency...that the joy of reading your work is manifold😛

I have to point out...you have improved tremendously from your earlier work. Your writing skills, grammar, punctuation, everything has gone upscale from your initial SSs. So bravo for that!👏

Keep up the good work...and let nothing get in your way!😃

Love
Your very very eager reader
Mirna⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
Nice Update
Mandy is selfish person and she jealous alot from geet.
Geet is sweetheart but Maan for me is quite confusing here they way he show concern for geet and charactisation of him as womanizer are different side of coins.Hope its clear as story proceed .
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: marvee-khan

Roseee!!! speed bharao pleaseee, this Maan is going far too slow na😉 and why is her sister so mean; please don't make her a negative character. I'm really all up about sisterly love because I love mine so much😛


Nonetheless awesome as always and waiting for more,
Love
-Marvee



Hey Marvee!!! Thanks babes!
Yup will do that, i wanted to show maan is not so pushy and really a gentlemen to give some time for geet to realize what she meant to him. He don't want to scare her with his advancements. From next chap you will get to see little side of geet too. And about mandy! I will take that coz i never had one for my own. 😉

Love
Rose
Edited by Gurti_Rocks - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
Loved it.. Poor geet and her insecurities.. Damn her sister.. Y can't she just b happy for her Geet? Hmmm can't wait to reason x
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: mirnalini

That was fab!


I don't usually comment...and I just recently discovered you...read all your work...and I totally loved it!
I have to applaud your consistency!👏 You update with such amazing frequency...that the joy of reading your work is manifold😛

I have to point out...you have improved tremendously from your earlier work. Your writing skills, grammar, punctuation, everything has gone upscale from your initial SSs. So bravo for that!👏

Keep up the good work...and let nothing get in your way!😃

Love
Your very very eager reader
Mirna⭐️



Thank you Mirnali!
But its not surprise to me! I need to work a lot to maintain the standard! Earlier i was inexperienced and using hindi between, it was bit difficult for me as that was not my mother tongue. I want to upgrade all my earlier works to the standard to match up the other works. so once i finish this, i need to work on those too. I never forgot to mention, all credit goes to the awesome writers of IF and the novels i read before. And all my works are inspired by one or the other novels and Movies. My cousin Helps me lot in this. She is truly a generous Writer for the local magazine and helped me lot to build my vocabulary.

Love
ROse
Edited by Gurti_Rocks - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
Awesome story! I love ur work 😳

Looking forward to reading more 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Gurti_Rocks



Thank you Mirnali!
But its not surprise to me! I need to work a lot to maintain the standard! Earlier i was inexperienced and using hindi between, it was bit difficult for me as that was not my mother tongue. I want to upgrade all my earlier works to the standard to match up the other works. so once i finish this, i need to work on those too. I never forgot to mention, all credit goes to the awesome writers of IF and the novels i read before. And all my works are inspired by one or the other novels and Movies. My cousin Helps me lot in this. She is truly a generous Writer for the local magazine and helped me lot to build my vocabulary.

Love
ROse



Well that is exactly what matters the most!
Improvement...

No matter where you started... you've worked yourself to become a very good writer...not something that everybody is willing to do. And judging by the amount of improvement you've shown, I can't even imagine how good you'll get with time!😛...I'm sure you'll give all the good writers around here a run for their money!😆

This truly serves as an inspiration to all of us😊


PS: If you're willing, there's a book called OXFORD : A-Z OF ENGLISH USAGE
I have it, and found it very useful in correcting my usage of a lot of words in english. For example, it says that when ago is followed by a clause, the clause should be introduced by that rather that since, e.g. it was sixty years ago that I left this place.

See if you can locate this book in a nearby library or some place, given that you're willing to read it.


Hope I did not bore you with my unnecessary rant😆...just couldn't stop myself😕...😆
Keep updating!😉
Edited by mirnalini - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
maan is takin it so slow!!
update soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh i loved this update...😊

I can understand that maan is overly protective abt geet, since he knows she is not like the other women whom he has dated or slept with ...and geet is so sweet, ofcourse she fears whether she would be able to handle the attention everyone gives maan hmmm continue soon 😊

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