OS: It was that moment

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deepa

@deeps_92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

very nice os...

la's emotion were protrayed very well...

in the show also i want her to meet someone like your os...

she deserves better...

thanks for such a beautiful os

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larina

@larimel22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

That was beautiful. ⭐️

Sometimes we tend to forget that characters apart from the main ones can have raging emotions that tear their hearts open.

The realisation that ASR and Chamkili are made for each other even in their hate, has made Lavanya consider herself worthless in a way. From the high-n-mighty La to the sanskari-bahu that she was moulded into, even her attitude has changed. The way she reacted to every action of ASR's with regard to Khushi was wonderfully portrayed! 👏

Oh, and YAYYY for the hunk who's gonna be hers now 😳

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

that so sweet please give la a happy ending thanks for the pm

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columbia

@columbia

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

I never read that many FFs here on IF anymore..but I do once in a while read OS..becos they are supposed to be one shot and I know its completed..

This is fantastically written...you should deffo post it on all is well forum..there are quite a few IPK stories there and completed ones..

👏⭐️

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Sanjana

@akhilash

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Thanks for portraying La's POV. Read it and re-read it. Very well penned, loved it. Look forward to more

thanks & have gr8 w/end

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YPNHK_kiFANno.1

@YPNHK_kiFANno.1

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

beautiful writing! Great OS! If only this happens now! 😃

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mimi

@moon_mine

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

loved it!!!!

it ws too good!!!!

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icebraker

@icebraker

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

lyraa,

u know that i am ur fan.the OS is beautiful.U have protriaed all lavanya's moments v nicely and given us a wonderful ending of this heart broken soul.👏

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654772

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

awww im so glad u gave her a happy ending! u are truly inspirational! when ever i recieve a pm from u i bring out mu tissues cos i know i'll need em!

love you!