Mera Dil Aapke Paas hain: Part 18(pg 29) - Page 3

i just read ur fanfic!! it's amazing!! continue sooooooon:!!!

take care
Laiba

Hey guys I am sorry I will not be able to continue today as I have other work as well. I will try to continue later but not sure. If I dont continue today I will definetly continue tomorrow.
Sorry
😊

Its okay continue when you can 😊

Part 4
Kripa calls up Mahak. Mahak is Kripas best friend since childhood.
Mahak: Hello
Kripa: MAHUUUUU
Mahak: Kripuuu!! what a pleasent surprice. aaj kasie yaad aagayee merii? Kahan se bol rahe hain? Aur sabse pehle to tu kaise hain?
Kripa: bas bas itne sare sawal. Mein bil kul theek bol rahen hun aur America se bol rahe hun aur ek bahut hi importent baat batane ke liye phone kiya

Kripa tell everything to Mahak. Mahak is really excited and decides that she will com pick them up and that they all will stay in her house.

one week goes by and it is time for Kripa and her family to leave U.S.
She says bye to her friends and boards the flight.

They reach India. They all come out and kripa spots Mahak. She scremas MAHAK!!!
Mahak: KRIPAAAA
They all hug.
(I wont get in details about how they met and all?
Mahak takes Kripa, bhai, and bhabhi to her house. They all go to sleep since Kripa will be starting her college from tomorrow.
Next morning
kripa wakes up at 7:15 gets ready and goes down to eat breakfast
Kr: good morning bhabhi
Ki: good morning Kripa. Acha tum nashta kar lo phir mahak college ke liye nikal he rahe hain to tum bhi usse ke saath chale jana.
K: JI
Mahak comes down. They both eat breakfast and leave
IN THE CAR
M: Hey Kripa mujhe na kisi ko pick up karne jaana hain to mein aisa karten hun ki tumhe drop kar deete hun. Tum apne saare formalities puri kar lo tab tak mein aajonge.
K: theek hain lekin jaaldi ana

Mahak drops Kripa off and leaves

Mahak then goes to a house. Opens the door with keys and straight goes to one of the bedroom.
There is somebody sleeping on the bed
M: UTHOOOOOOO!! COLLEGE NAHIN JANA KYA> HUM BAHUT LATE HO RAHEN HAIN!!UTHOOOOOO


SO guys i know this part was boring but in next part ANgad and Kripa will finally meet!! 😊

I think mahek has a bf.(i hope its not angad) lol. Great part! Cont. soon!!!

Hey Shivani 😃
great part 😃
cant wait for the next part 😃
plz 😃
continue soon!! 😃


~~~Mahak~~~

a very good part!!! cont. soon, i can't wait a-k to meet n see what happens!!!!!

hey nice fanfiction
i think mahak is waking up angad and they both are best friends
continue soooooooooooooooooooooon
luv
sweety

Hey Guys I am soo sooo sorry I couldnt continue as I was really busy!!
But here is the next part
Part 5

We see Angad getting up. He goes takes a shower and comes down.

Angad: Mahak tum aise yahan pe roj aate ho, I mean to say ki tumhe kitna tang karta hun na. Tum kal se seedha college chale jaya karo. Mein apne aap college kisi bhi tarah se pahunch jaonga.

M: Yeh kaise baat kar rahe ho Angad. Khud to tum mujhe apne behen mante ho aur phir itne formality. Mera bas chale to mein tumhe yahan akele rehne he na du lekin yeh sab tumhare zid se. Lekin aaj mujhe samaj mein aa raha hain ke tum ne yahan rehne ki zid kyun ki. Tum mujhe apna samaj te hi nahi. mein tumhare kuch nahin lagti.

A: Nahin Mahak aisa mat kaho. Is duniya mein ab sirf tumhara he to sahara hain. Acha chalo ab yeh sab chodo aur COLLEGE NAHIN JANA HAIN KYA!!

Mahak's cell phone rings.
M: Hello
Kripa: Hello Mahak. mein Kripa bol rahin hun
M: STUPID mujhe maloom hain
K: Oh sorry. Acha tu kab aa rahe hain mene saare forms fill kardeye. Ab bas tera wait kar rahe hun. Aur han mere ko lagta hain tere ko koi Mr. Chawla dhund rahen hain
M: Tumhe kaise pata
K: are wo koi ladka guzar raha that aur kisi ko keh raha that ki Mr. Chawala tumhe dhund rahen hain
M: acha theek hain mein abhi aate hun
K: Ok bye
M: Bye

M: Chalo bhai Angad warna meri dost mujhe mar dalege
A: kOi nai (new) dost bani hain kya
M: Nahin mere best friend aai hain bade dino ke baad. Aur apna college bhi yahin khatam karegi. Chalo tumhe milaon.

They reach college and mahak spots Kripa.
M: KRIPA

Angad had forgotten his cell phone in the car so he turned back and went to get it

M: Hey Kripa
K: Hi

Rahul- Mahak and Angad;s friend

Rahul comes up
R: Are yaar mahak mein tumhe kabse dhoon raha hun. Kahan thi tum
M: Are mein usse pick karne gaye thee. Acha isse milo yeh hain Kripa mere best friend aaj hi isne college join kiya hain
R: Hi Kripa
K: Hi
M: acha Kripa tum yahin ruko mein aate hun Mr. Chawla se milke.
K: Ok

Mahak and Rahul leaves Kripa and goes. As Kripa watches them go Angad comes up from behind and thought that Kripa was Mahak. (Kripa has her back towards Angad)
A: sorry Mahak woh cell phone gadi mein hi chuut gaya tha
Kripa turns around and is dead shocked.


So how was this part? I have the next part written down but will post it tom.

gr8 part! why was she shocked? cont soon!
muqu