Mera Dil Aapke Paas hain: Part 18(pg 29) - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: muqualp

srry abt that! that always happens!

Its ok. Thanks for the comment.😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Mini786

great part shivani
loved it
alot!!
plz
continue soon



~~~Mahak~~~



Thanks Mahak!😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was so nice! i mean, in all the fanfics i have read, it's very seldom that a-k meet again n they r actually happy to see each other!!! arey, angry angad ne kin gundo se panga le liya ke ab hospital mein hai??? 😆 , newayzd do cont. soon!!! i wanna read more!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: nabz8888

that was so nice! i mean, in all the fanfics i have read, it's very seldom that a-k meet again n they r actually happy to see each other!!! arey, angry angad ne kin gundo se panga le liya ke ab hospital mein hai??? 😆 , newayzd do cont. soon!!! i wanna read more!!!

Thank you
ANgad ne kissi bhi gunde se panga nahin liya. LOL

😛😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
amazing cont soon i think angad is in jail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: unum ali

continue soon its great

Thank You
I will continue soon once I get time😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
Thank you guys for the comments. They are really encouraging!

Part 7
I- Inspector Ravi
N-Naina
K-Kripa

I- jee woh baat yeh hain ki Mr. Angad Khanna ka accident ho gaya hain aur abhi unki halat bahut he serius hain. Aap foron Juhu hospital aajayee.
Nanina droped the phone
Kripa came running: AUNTIE KYA HUA? KISKA PHONE THA?
N:JUHU hospital jaldi se chalo. ANGAD KA ACCIDENT HO GAYA HAIN!!
K: kya (tears forming her eyes)

They both left for the hospital and when they got there they got to know that Angad slipped in coma. Naina and Kripa couldnt't see Angad like this becuase they both truly loved him. But all they can do right now is wait and wait.

Days passed by and then 1 month and Angad still was in coma.

One day when Kripa reached the hospital she heard one of the doctors say that patient in room #413 passed away. kripa was so shocked to hear this as Angad was in room #413.
Kripa started to cry bitterly. She did not have the strngth to face Naina as she thought that she was responsible for Angad's death. Usne Naina ke liye ek khat (letter) likha jisme usne maafi mange aur kaha ki yeh sab meri galti hain. Ho sake to mujeh maaf kardejeye. Aur phir Kripa hamesha ke liye uss jage se chaleen gaye.
*****************END OF FLASHBACK************************
Kripa ko yeh nahin pata tha ki Angad ka room badal gaya tha. Aur uske jaga koi aur room #413 mein aagaya tha.
Naina ko jab khat mila to usse bahut he herani hui kyonki Angad to abhi bhi coma mein hi tha to phir kripa kiss ki baat kar rahe thi? Phir nania ko pata chala ke shayad kripa ko laga to room #413 mein tha woh Angad hain. Naina ne Kripa ko bahut dhoond nein ki koshish ki lekin akhir mein haar man le.
Kuch mahino baad jab Angad ko hosh aya to sabse pehle usne Kripa ke liye pucha. Naina ne sab kuch use bataya. Angad ke liye to jaise sara asmaan phat gaya tha. WOh kirpa se bahut pyaar karta tha. Angad ne apni puri koshish ki Kripa ko dhoond ne ki lekin woh bhi nakaam raha.
Days passed by and Angad moved to another place with his mom. He lived his life like a invisible person. He did not liked to do anything until Mahak met him. Mahak teached him how to live again but for Angad Mahak was only a sweet sister. 😛

I know that this part was boring. I will try to make it interesting next time. 😊

Edited by purishivani - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
aww sweet and sad continue plzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
boring??? it was sooooooooo good!!!! yaar, i rly enjoyed reading it!!!plz do cont. soon!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
gr8 part! i luved it!cont soon!

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