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Saams

@Saams

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#771

The last act by Maan was indeed cherry on cake.It was totally unexpected.

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#772

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE

Fabulous

It was a Hott update...☺️.. Very Passionate.

Finally Geet is opening to Maan.

Wow Maan filled her maan with sindoor... amazing

Now waiting for daddy- daughter meeting

Luved it..

Continue Soon.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#773

Hi dear, saw u updated! wow wat an update! Hawt, sensual n passionate! Maan filling her mang wid sindoor! Very emotional as well. Precap is superb! Well written. Update soon n do try 2 pm!

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GurruKiDeewani-

@GurruKiDeewani-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#774

awesome update

end is beautiful Maan filled her parting

continue soon

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#775

I loved the entire flashback scenario followed by the ultimate truth ; I'm glad Geet's father is alive ... he would also play a vital role in taking Geet out of this unreal guilt ... apart from Maan ...

About *ahem ahem* ...😳 ... 😛 ☺️ 😆

I guess that says it all ⭐️

Beautiful touching n emotional updates ! 👏

Thanks for pm ...

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#776

lovely update. maan filling geets maang was beautiful

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#777

awesome update..
Loved it
eagerly waiting for daddy's meet
updt soon😊

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Sara Khanna

@$ara_$hachi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#778

marvee, first thing first ... as per knowelge, i have read, comment & "like" your both FFs till date
*well done Sara*

now, comes the part ... it is damn "beautiful" ... you know what exactly i say in my PMs about your work, about your creativity & about EVERYTHING
it was indeed "not finding the suitable word" ... but one thing i am missing from last few updates is my dadyy's little WANGLE ... oh, i love it when Maan feel so proud of her ... but you made it in all those few last parts by Maan continuously praising himself as a father

do cont soon & if possible do PM me

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zaqxsw

@zaqxsw

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#779

Fabulous...
It was a hot update...
Thankfully Jannat wasnt at home... *wink wink*
But every update of urs makes me fall in love with ur writing...
Please update soon...
Ur university should give u two hours of writing time evryday... :D :D
Waiting for the next update...
Sakshi

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#780

Excellent update...omg!!! maan filled her maang..😳😛...so sweet...it's simply awesome...the turn up of events have been fantastic ...waiting for the meeting with dad...