ArHi FF: Sweet Escape UPD 2/17/12 P31

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Blue Rose

@uniquebluerose

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Gosh...

Read the last two updates together and hey this was so superb...

Arnav doubts on Aaksh Mehta and now his reaction on seeing his brother itself was so nice

The contrast of Karan and ARanv the way the office was run and was full of fun compared with how it was not the case with ARnav office everything was nice...

How did Khushi become 3K...yaar!!!!

So she has also changed her name eh!!!!

Hmmm it was ncie update eager for more

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MsCeylon

@MsCeylon

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Oh yes they meet

I'm super excited about the meeting :)

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.Sandal.

@.Sandal.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

loved it

continue soon plz

it was fab update

thankx for pm

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manjusha_92

@manjusha_92

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

fab update...please update the next one soon...eagerly waiting

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489321

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Finally you updated! Loved it! The jealous Arnav is so much fun to read about :D
But I can't believe you stopped there! Grrr..
Update soon Aish! (hope you don't mind me calling you that) :D

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monkeydog18

@monkeydog18

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Ohh I loved this soo much. Pretty dress btw. Karan better not be a kabab mein haddi. And yay they met!! Thanks for pm

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Writer42

@Writer42

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Hello,

That was great. I loved reading it very much. You write so well. I loved the last line. "..like a predator approaching the frightened prey." Awesome. Can't wait for the showdown between the 2 brothers/cousins. Or should I ask will there be one? But I don't want you to give anything away, maybe I shouldn't ask, I shall wait patiently for the next part:)

Take Care,

KF:)

PS: Thanks for the PM really appreciate it.

Edited by KaushalyaFan - 13 years ago

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soni_md

@soni_md

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Damn awesome as always, babe ... update soon, and I love how you guys leave him the way he is, annoyed, with slight tinges of softness, which make all the more sweet and perfect for us 😃