Making of Shyam: The Aftermath Updated Part 6 p 14 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Lyraa99

man shyam shown as such a creep... u write in a way ur story looks so realistic.. the battles inside a boy as he goes on the path of destruction... awesome writing!!

Hi Lyraa,

Thank you for your kind comments. Thanks for reading too. Take care.

Regards,

KF

tht was scaryyy😲 very welll written!!!! U can seriously join IPK CVs team

Woaaah!
This is the scariest OS ever!
So creepy and sick, I'm actually terrified of young Shyam!

Brilliant writing! Have you written other pieces?

Originally posted by: zafi

Freaky.👏

Thanks for your comments zafi. Thanks for reading too. Glad you liked the Aftermath.

Regards,

KF

Brillant piece of literature. So well written and reflecting the personality of the creep so beautifully. Well done.

I don't know what to say

Originally posted by: malluangel

shit. this dude is [excuse my french] f**ked up. wow.

Hi malluangel,

Yes he is:-) Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. Appreciate it. Merry Christmas to you!

Best wishes for the holiday season,

KF

it not who we are its what we make out self out to be shayam decide on this part he want control over what was done to him he wanted to feel all powerful and he did the from the first kill power is an addiction and he is now hooked abuse on a fragile mind has made him is to sociopath he could have gone either way amazing update please pm

Hey there KF,

Here's my take on what you wrote...FABULOUS.

I am getting a good feel for your writing style as I read your work, and the more I read it, I think you have a ready made career in Hollywood screenplay writing. If you are interested, that is.

I have also, to be fair to the other writers on this Forum, and other Forums, read the work they have put out for everyone to read.

My conclusion after reading as judging (my profession) all the writers is that your writing style is far superior to what I have seen elsewhere.

My advice to you, as a mystery writer, is to send me two copies of your book, when it is published, so that I can mail them to my contacts in the American publishing world and see what happens.

I have serious advice for you and you can benefit from it. You will be plucked out of the world of writing on these Forums (amazing places as they are) and placed in a world where your work will be seriously considered. You will also be sufficiently monetarily recompensed.

I want your work, your writing and your talent to be recognized.

I love the last Part about the Shyam character...you seem to know how to mold a character, how to have him undergo life-altering changes, you understand his moods and have basically invented something phenomenal.

We look for talent like this and I am interested in getting you in touch with the right crowd.

You write about the story too, but your redefining of the main antagonist's character is quite amazing.

Please continue to write and devleop his character...you're doing a fabulous job, you're a natural author and I see a bright future for you.

I'll be writing to you privately with some more advice about launching your mystery writing career into a Hollywood script-writing career. It is not that big of a leap, trust me.

It will be worth your while.

Not only are you the best writer on this Forum, but my hats off to your readers who have recognized your talent and are encouraging you with their comments.

You are a writing star waiting to shine.

Actually, make that 3 copies of your mystery novel, just remembered one more person who might be interested in you. I will gladly have my company pay for the shipping costs.

Looking forward to more of your awesome writing...you're one of a kind and I'm so glad I came across your writing.

Cheers,

Josh.

P.S. You have my email address, as well as my assistant's.

Originally posted by: littlemoi

Speechless!!

Hi littlemoi,

Thank you. Hope you liked reading the Aftermath. Hope you had a wonderful Merry Christmas with your family. Happy Holidays to you!


Best Wishes,

KF