Making of Shyam: The Aftermath Updated Part 6 p 14

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

THE MAKING OF SHYAM PART 1

Edited by KaushalyaFan - 13 years ago

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-Urvi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

That was so sickening, but that's what made it so good. Cos it was so Shyam-like. Reading it made me want to throw up. This truly was The Making of Shyam. Great writing! :)

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Zania

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Posted: 13 years ago

OMG!!!!!! It was sooo intense

Very well written .

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devishree

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Posted: 13 years ago

😡pure sadist shyam and i was fearing all throughout ur OS😲

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Mr.TalentScout

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Posted: 13 years ago

Alright.

I'm new here and have spent the past few weeks just browsing around looking for some interesting stuff.

And after reading this, I think I found it.

This is one of the most arresting pieces of writing I have read in weeks on this forum.

I've read some of the other stuff, but this is far superior in composition, layout and quality.

I don't know if you are a professional or not, but you sure write like one.

One word: Brilliant.

And I've read a good many scripts in my day. Its my trade.

And you certainly have the touch so many writers don't.

Are you a screenplay writer, if I may be so bold as to ask?

And what does your name mean?

Your work is superlatively good.

Josh

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serialmaniac

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Posted: 13 years ago

sheeesh...evil snakewa in the making 😲...continue d story plz

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.Saraa.

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Posted: 13 years ago

that was freakingly annoying..but was abt that creep,so loved that..good work

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: naddiya26
loved it

Hi naddiya,

So glad you liked it. It's my first OS and I thought Shyam would be an interesting subject. Anyway thanks for your timely advice. Appreciate it greatly.

Best wishes,

KF

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tina_1234
it freaked me

Hi tina,

I guess in one way that was the point of how I see Shyam's character and how he might have been as a teenager and later as a young adult. There are so many OSs on Arhi I thought it would be fun to explore Shayam and where the evil streak in him comes from and began. Anyway it is fiction and we would probably never see him do any of the stuff I write on the show. Anyway thanks for reading it and taking the time to post your thoughts on my first OS.

Best wishes,

KF

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Urvi-
That was so sickening, but that's what made it so good. Cos it was so Shyam-like. Reading it made me want to throw up. This truly was The Making of Shyam. Great writing! :)

Hi Urvi,

Thanks for your comments. Thank you I am glad you liked what you read. Appreciate you liking my writing. Thanks for taking the time to put down your thoughts on this OS.

Take care,

KF