Making of Shyam: The Aftermath Updated Part 6 p 14 - Page 2

Wow! You got the psycho mentality of Shyam abs perfect!

There is God,and Satan,in every creature.It depends on that individual human being,who will takeover him/her.One can not be evil in one day.Cruel humiliation caused this heartless evil Shyam.😔
Wonderful piece of work.❤️

Originally posted by: zaniax

OMG!!!!!! It was sooo intense

Very well written .

Hi zaniax,

Thank you for your great comments. I'm glad you liked The Making of Shyam. Thanks for reading it and taking the time to comment on it. The subject matter is different than most of the ff we see in OSs. I thought I'd try something new. Glad you liked it.

Take care,

KF

Originally posted by: Orange101

LOVED IT!

Hi Orange,

Thanks for your feedback. I'm glad you liked it.

Take care,

KF

Originally posted by: devishree

😡pure sadist shyam and i was fearing all throughout ur OS😲

Hi devishree,

Yes, that is the kind of Shyam I would like to see on the show. Unfortunately we are not likely to see that. He's not a real real bad guy. If he will be in the future who knows but right now the character portrayed by Abhaas Mehta is nothing like the Shyam I wrote about. Thanks for your comments and taking the time to read. Appreciate it.

Take care,

KF

Originally posted by: Mr.TalentScout

Alright.

I'm new here and have spent the past few weeks just browsing around looking for some interesting stuff.

And after reading this, I think I found it.

This is one of the most arresting pieces of writing I have read in weeks on this forum.

I've read some of the other stuff, but this is far superior in composition, layout and quality.

I don't know if you are a professional or not, but you sure write like one.

One word: Brilliant.

And I've read a good many scripts in my day. Its my trade.

And you certainly have the touch so many writers don't.

Are you a screenplay writer, if I may be so bold as to ask?

And what does your name mean?

Your work is superlatively good.

Josh

Hi Josh,

Thank you so much for your kind comments. I love to write mystery fiction and really enjoy doing so whenever work permits. I have just finished my first mystery novel and it will published (fingers crossed:)) very soon. So I am very excited about that. After that I hope to covert it into a script and hope to keep writing novels and scripts. I love to write whether it be a novel or a script.

My name is taken from a character on another show which is no longer on the air. I chose the character's name because it was filled with so much pathos and gray shades. But now I wish I had picked another name. So instead of using the whole name I just use KF. Which of course is not my real name. Thank you so much for your kind comments. I really appreciate your feedback. Thank you very much.

Best wishes to you,

KF

Originally posted by: serialmaniac

sheeesh...evil snakewa in the making 😲...continue d story plz

Hi serialmaniac,

Thanks for your comments. I'll see maybe I can write a part 2 of this OS. Though right now I in the middle of writing my only ff "Khushi is Kidnapped" I'm working on Part 17 of it which has much of Shyam's murderous and psychopathic nature. Thanks for taking the time to read and put down your thoughts on my first OS.

Take care,

KF

Originally posted by: sarach

that was freakingly annoying..but was abt that creep,so loved that..good work

Hi sarach,

Thanks for your comments. And thanks for reading.

Take care,

KF

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly

Wow! You got the psycho mentality of Shyam abs perfect!

Hi Hot_Indo_Chilly,

Thanks for your kind comments on my writing. Oh yes that Shyam is definitely diabolical in this OS unlike the show, where he is more mild though he's had his villainous moments there too but not as bad as this piece. Thank you for reading it and taking the time to leave your thoughts.

Best wishes,

KF

Originally posted by: ANTARA-2244

There is God,and Satan,in every creature.It depends on that individual human being,who will takeover him/her.One can not be evil in one day.Cruel humiliation caused this heartless evil Shyam.😔
Wonderful piece of work.❤️

Hi ANTARA,

Thank you for your very interesting insights into this OS. I totally agree with you, as I was writing this my first OS and I thought what it be like if Shyam was to commit his first murder and as most killers start out by torturing animals hence Minnie the cat and I thought most killers do face a certain about of bullying whether it be at home from their parents or in school so I thought of making Shyam a constant victim of bullying. It would move him down the path of being a killer and justify the act in his mind.

And of course his first day of law school would have to be a memorable one for him. So on his first day he winds up murdering his law professor.

Of course it's pure fiction and the real Shyam on the show is nowhere near this portrayal. Though I would say that there have been times that the CVs have brought him real close to killing Shashi. But it never materialized and they have kept him in this dark area. Though these days he's just a love sick puppy. Just standing in a corner feeling sorry for himself.

I appreciate you reading it and thank you for your kind comments. And for taking the time to put down your thoughts on this OS.

Best wishes,

KF