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Originally posted by: supriya91

I don't know where I reserved so ignore those posts and just read this one!

Alright love, here we go'

When I read the first line of the prologue I was like yayy AR stuck together somewhere, this will be super romantic and then I read the next line and Armaan called her "Countess Dracula" and the hope of a lot of romance ended. LOL

That aside, I think you did an amazing job with the prologue because in those three paragraphs you caught my attention. I was so intrigued by Armaan's question which actually forced me to ask a question, like what?

This was of course answered in the Chapter 1. A chapter which I had to read in parts because when you described Riddhima's look it took me a moment, many moments actually, to get myself to see Shilpa Anand looking like that. But I must say that you were bang on in getting my attention and more importantly my curiosity. I LOVE how you started backwards, honestly in each and every line of this chapter I was trying to read between the lines to see if you gave a hint and the more I read the more questions I had. But then, OMFG Riddhima oh actually Ri and her friends! Zarqa I was actually like W*F?!?! Like when she was Vicky in that alleyway, talk about an edge of the seat suspense. Though for some strange I couldn't help but like Rohan a little, maybe it's just because Riddhima was so mean to him or something, but I definitely liked this character right of the bat. It's a bit weird I know.

Now coming to Anjali, I love how she is so central to the plot even though she doesn't have a lot of "screen space" if you will. I LOVED it when she said "Because I'm your sister" AHHH <3 that! But on the same front I love how she's so loving and how much she genuinely cares for Riddhima, you've written her very beautifully. I'm SUPER excited to read about Anjali and Riddhima, seriously so intriguing. Even in the later chapters there is more of them and I like how you continue to build the suspense and trust me girl it's working.

ARMAAN!!!! My most favorite thing (right now) in this FF is Rahul and Armaan, their friendship is just TOO cute. Armaan sort of reminds me, a little bit at least, of the Rahul of Kuch Kuch Hota Hai. But that aside. I absolutely adore the hard on the outside but soft on the side vibe that he has. When they were joking about the girls name I actually laughed! That was cute. But really you had me when Armaan skipped the date for dinner at Rahul's house. Awww <3

"No matter what Armaan's reputation was in school, Rahul knew the real him. They had best friends since the age of 4, and knew each other inside out. They shared everything with each other and never let anything or anyone get in between them. Even though Armaan had the playboy image, he cared for his friends, especially his close ones like Rahul. He would do anything for him and Sirma mom, just like they did for Armaan."

I just HAD to quote that because I really did love it!

Now Armaan Riddhima as partners, OMFG THEY HAVE A HISTORY! I am SO curious and super excited to know what it is, the way he was staring at her in disbelief when she walked into class, my honest thought was "in dono kuch bada panga hua tha" LOL NO LIES this is exactly what I thought.

Then when Armaan said, ""I will tell Sir I want to switch partners. So this way I don't need to suffer with you.""

Honestly I was like I don't care what she did to you, that was so hurtful I was so taken aback by that and then he continued that when they were outside the class and OMG I just CANNOT wait to know what happened!

Armaan working so hard on his essay so adorable, and then the flashback and another character whom I could love, IAN, how cute is he!!! I loved the catty Riddhima, it was awesome! And her pronunciation was just too funny! OMG LOVED THAT!

HAWW she didn't do her part! OMG that was bad but the Zarqa the part that actually killed me, and I mean honestly I gasped was when Riddhima in ager said "still rejected by your parents" NOOO!

Then the end of Chapter 5, the library and a slightly high Riddhima, LOL awesome!!! Though I have "hunch" that the prologue may have something to do with Chapter 5 but I'll keep that hunch to myself ;P

All in all, I LOVE this FF and I am HOOKED! I hope this was long enough, when I think of more I'll add it!! I have read an FF where with each update there are more questions than answers with each chapter and I seriously ADORE that about this story, I'm actually excited to find out about Riddhima and Armaan's past.

NOW UPDATE SOON!

Love ya Loads,

SPREE <3

Originally posted by: zARqaa_X

res for Rida! Final res! 🤣

*Edited for Rida*

YAYYY So i get my ass on work and im finally editing YAYYY!!!!!! im so happy,t ears are streaking down my eyes :'( im editing before this thread and FF Finished YAYYY🤣 HAPPY SHAAPPY! :$😎

PEOPLE Z is a blackmailer, she makes you edit all zabardasteee🤣 BAHHH! DEvil Incarnate! OMGGG YAYYY Im first🤣 and first isnt the worst, first is the best😎 ILYYY ZEEUUUHHH! Youre a rockstarrr! I am so blessed to have you Kameeni in my life! you really mean life to me :( :$$ Yeahh im mad after another mad girl🤔🤣 Madness spreee :$ Im actually so happy that im giving you a comment, that i dont know what to type🤣 im blabbering😛 SHEEESHHH i just love that i know you, and youre my bestest pal :$ Get a SKYPE/CELLPHONE/YM MESSENGER though kameeni🤬

Honestly, you remember when we actually grew close, and i told you you should write, you were like id suck and i told you you wont👎🏼 I always knew when youd write, itd be just brilliant as ever :$ YOU ARE A ROCKSTAR WRITER! You prove it in everyway! :$ Even when you wrote LWFAW So beautifully, you need not to continue that nymore though, :PP and when id seen you develop as a writer :$ HONESTLY KAMEENEEE you were so perfect and polished since the start. I mean, when i started writing, i so badly sucked and when i first time ever read something from you, the excitement, joy, patience to see your work and when i actually saw it, it was like WOW you blew me OFF :| Youre AMAZINGGG DUDE! Honestly, and you gotta accept this fact! The way your mind works and thinks its, just so so so out of this world! Your FF is LOVE :$

OMGGG i remember when you first time told me about this concept. I was like :O :O blown away types. you so know my typicality with genres, and FF selection. I love such genres, but in my dreams, even not, would i have ever thought bout such an amazing concept you came up wid! YEAHHH MANN! This FF and the concept seriously is rOCKING! I dont think anyone on IF does have such an unique concept, and the way you projected it, presented,and the best part the way you wrote it was FLAWLESS! Im so happy you started it finally! the slow ass of yours, and wen you told me youll post it after you write it completely, i was like HAYE ALLAH im going to be now deprived of such an awesome FF for years to come🤣 I remember trying to convince you so badly hard to post the FF, and you were like no im completing it and i was like gayee FF meri🤣🤣🤣

When you told me the whole concept, it was utterly intriguing from the very start, and different ofcourse, oh man i envy your brain😍🤣 Its just one of the best concepts ive known everhhh :$ Mostly FF section is filled wd slow romance developments, and everything is just revolving around it, and how i nomore love such works🤣 Youre genre, was such a bang on for me to read, and i was so badly anticipating for an update to follow honestly! YAYYY and you finally decided to post the FF!😍 akal aagayeee🤣🤣

YAYYY! i was so damn excited for the FF, but my idiotic exams came up and id to study from before, and you couldnt post the FF :'(( CHORRYY :( But you finally did and i was so GLAD OMGGG! YEAHH! I was like got up after eating my burger, and i saw your message, and the sweet cute sorry of yours, ILY YOU KNOW :| LOADS :| LIKE HELL :|

youre the bestest person friend of this world, and youre all mine☺️ Like Radhu says, sock and shoe🤣

"Roses Have Thorns" Indeed a very very beautiful name it is. IL Radhu for this suggestion. Its a fact, but associated wid your FF its just way too AHMAEEZINGHHH! The title is really beautiful <3333 OMGGG You started the FF YAYY :$$$ aww ILY TOO :$$$$$$ LY so dehrsaara much miss Devil Incarnate🤣🤗 and im so happy for your first FF! Its a great feeling aint it? ;) and youre WAY TOO AMAZING WID IT WOMAN :$ YAYYY!!!!! LMFAO The disclaimer🤣🤣🤣 Okay sorry, im getting serious, LMFAOO BUT the disclaimer made me crack up too badly! seriousness doesnt suits you🤔🤣 Honestly, i was like MY DI, Z, ZEUUHHH Wrote this ;O🤣 you will anyway kill the person alive who tries to plagiarize your work, the poor soul, id pitty him way too badly🤣 you might end up fukn the life outaa him🤣 my condolences already😒🤣 poor him, and his family :P LMFAOOO! The disclaimer is actually scary, nobody would dare to :P

I LOVE YOUR WRITING STYLE! YAYYY and the biggest blessing its beautiful not like her you know🤣 It way too beautiful, mature, and descriptive! and theres this different beauty to it, i cant put my finger on, but the way the flickers of humour that you add up are brilliant :$$$$

I told you you are the DIALOUGE QUEEN KAMEENEEE! No one can ever have better dialogues than you, honestly, the best in humor, pain, explanation! Youre like the EPITOME OF DIALOGUES! :$$😍 You gotta teach me the way you write woman, its just way too beautiful. Even though i knew the concept, id read each line utterly carefully, and wit concentration, it just felt im reading or knowing it for the first time. YOU ARE A MAGICIAN WD PROJECTION! Bringing it down with words, in a proper form is never easy, and you just tend to bewitch me always kameeni! :$ The prolouge was so so beautifully written. The way you brought the real essence of the story into a prolouge, just hats off to you for that. Honestly, prologues are always the most important part of any story, and yours was just the best, so much told and so much concealed, and yet it let out so many elegant emotions, it made your FF more intriguing and interesting.

I really dont care whether its ArSh or AR. it remains to be my sexy Shilpa&Grover when i get down to imagining :$😍 FREAKNNN HELL I love the characterisation of your FF :$$$$ OMGGG youve done the best characterization ever! I simply, utterly irrevocably love your RIDDHIMA😍 OMGGG Shes the best🤣 AHHH Z you know, youre so polished at it. The way youve characterized her, its not always easy to portray it justly, but the way you did it, in the prologue, the actions, reactions, the beauty of her emotions, her dialogues, MANNN I LOVEEE RIDDHIMAAA! SHES MY GAL :$ The girl of 21st century LMAO🤣🤣

OMGGG HONESTLY, I really LOVE ARMAAN :$☺️ hes the man, hahah OMGGG they got stuck together, poor them🤣 how they cannot tolerate each other is so utterly funny🤣🤣 Poor Armaan, he had to go to his date, and he got stuck wid Riddhima, common, Armaan you know you want to🤣 OMGG im just imagining how fukn SEXY and BEAUTIFUL SA would look in the avatar youre describing. Her deep enermous big green eyes, her face twisted with pride and attitude, her hair flyin wd the breeze OMFFGGG! Shilpa and Grover, make me Shiver :$ and specially wd da way they are so kick ass in the FF :$$$ im already lovin it :$$$$ AHHH I love how college and uni FFs have this specialty to them, they just are so awehsome :$$$ Yours is just more interesting. Armaan and Riddhima share a past, that is so utterly clear from your prologue, the way youve so beautifully, shown it, and yet its hidden from the readers, you create a mystery here.

"Oh my God! I can't believe I'm stuck in here with you!" Riddhima screamed in anger whilst trying to kick open the door.

OMGGG She was kicking the door🤣🤣 this girl is so interesting.

OMGGG He called her a countes dracula🤣 OMGGG MAEENNN I love Armaan dude! Your dialogues :| :$$$$ IL THEM :$$$

the way you analysed it afterwards. the pain inside his heart, so transparent. You described it just way too beautifully! He is connected to Riddhima, and he cannot see her this way. It was clear it did matter to him. And How Riddhima froze for moments :$ It was utterly BEAUTIFUL :$ Her pain being flowin so beautifully through the moment. Her mind denying the change, and her heart telling her how she did not like being this part was beautiful! You wrote it flawlessly, and beautifully. Each emotion was so utterly clear in the moment. Riddhima missed her oldself, her life, her family and him. There was so many layers of emotions, pain dominating all, and she knew what shed made of herself. She had tried to sheild her pain and vulnerability, and yet in that one moment, the way his question tried to intrude the deep hidden chambers of her heart was more and more beautiful. and again you left people wondering, why is Riddhima like this, what made her like this, why does she not change, what is the reason for this rigid air between her and Armaan.

And in the end, tehhh, italic with him, was the most beautiful and ethereal part :$$$$

Now my electricity is going, will tell you more baad mein muah :*

*edited again*🤣

Editing ka second part🤔 I Hate power cuts🤣🤣 You should be happy shappy, im giving you the second installment aaj ki date mein😛🤣🤣 I want a line to line, word to word reply😛 il give you my two most hated emos for that --->🤣

OHH MAEENN Honestly, i loved everything about the prologue. The beauty of your FF came so wonderfully in your prologue. There was this perfect layer of every emotion, and with that mysteries :$$ There was pain, and in the most beautiful of its forms. KAMEENEEE youve turned so so GOODDD :| Shutup wd your banter i aint good seriously :| Youre a rockstar writer, one of the best in IFs, and as a starter, youre jus the best, youre WOW :||| Now that you have your own FF evil smirks, im remembering my BTLOO Days, when you so ruthlessly threatened and blackmailed me. MUHAHAHAHAHA! My Turn!👎🏼🤣🤣 Im gonna demand now. youre already demanding so much from your poor readers😲🤣🤣 I honestly was like OMGGG Shes updating so fast nowadays, which you said not fast, yet you know seeing your speed, and the tag "I cba" of yours🤣🤣🤣 i was like WOW MAEN :| This girl has grown fast, and than you broke my bubble, telling me youd written few chaps already🤣🤣🤣

I forgot wat tbh meant though, you and your abbreviations :|

OMGGG Make Armaan like GRAY-SETh-ADRIAN ROHAN-ROLFE-:$$$$$$$$ Il die than🤣 okay, i know not at the moment though. But vini is getting this GRAY craze back to me, i gotta read this novel back, so im imagining KSG as GRAY everywhere and in all FFs, i hardly read any its yours only🤣

I love this FF. It is needless to say so. The way you thought of this concept, the way you plotted it. I love how all the layers of emotions give a bright radiance to your work here. I dont like works so easily, you know me better than anyone, but honestly i love analysing and reading all that you write, and im so thankful to you for that🤣🤣 like others i cant tell you to nice update😊 update soon🤣🤣🤣

This FF, is going to be hella interesting, and to see how Armaan brings out, or provokes a change into Riddhima. She has a deep hole in her heart, and it will be beautiful to see how he fills it, and the magical bond of AR. The relation of AR in this FF is really sensitively done, and thats the uniqueness, and intense beauty of this FF. Riddhima is a girl, bad, rotten, but not spoiled. The circumstances are bringing a different reaction out of her. She has concealed herself in shades of darkness, and honestly, what will be the most interesting point to read will be how a man of a different character like Armaan, will see through the barriers, and bring his old Riddhima back. The feeling of belonging and LONGING is again utterly beautifully present in here. Its a rendezvous of all the complicated feelings together, which two human beings go through. And i look forward to the explicit beauty and opening of mysteries like i dont know🤣🤣🤣

This FF is brilliant, and so is the way you write. ITS BEAUTEEEPHALLL :$ and magnificent. And needless to say you got so many brilliant readers, and all are loving this ff so much, because its so unlike the normal FFs. Im looking forward to more of this riot Riddhima, my handsome SEXYYY ARMAAN :$ and their bonding through these interesting excruciating circumstances.

IM SO APPPYYY ABOUT YOR WORK BABYYY! Yeah remember that? baby lover, before Macko and DI came we used to call sweet names, phir your mind lose screws mackooo type🤣🤣

I always adore what you do. <333 Its beautiful and perfect :$$ And it has the perfect Z touch to it, that none else posess. I want the skill you own at flawless dialogues and projection honestly. Your work is LOVE :$

YAYYY PHEWWW I Want a big reply🤣🤣🤣 and i want my treat for the maths A :| NO EXCUSES I WANT IT :| 😛 and get a phone get a phone get a phone ZEEUUHHH! I really miss talking to you so so much :'( miss our old days. Noone is like you :'((( ILYYY DHERSAAARAAA! I hope and pray to Allah ke all your work, and FFs be a big huge success, and you reach threads of threads and threads :$ Which ek have already almost finished YAYYY TO THAT :$$$$$ and your work is always special to me, more than mine. Im so proud of you :$$$$ LY :-*****

and ILY M O R E :P

The FF and prologue rocks. Its already for all a treat for all the readers reading :$
LYYY KAMEEENEEE

MUAAAH :-*

P.S GRAY SETH ROFLE ADRIAN :$🤣😍

Originally posted by: -Aliya-

Chanda mama!! Chanda mama? LOL!umm random but i'm in a hyperactive mood. isliye main itni ajeeb mood main hoon. excuse the oddness in this comment due to the hype. lol Aliya you are so cute!


so i read the prologue very early on when you had just started this ff but me being lazy i sat on my bum all day and never commented. maaf kardijie chanda mama *puppy dog eyes* Hmm dekh lenge, but i want a comment like this for every update from now on😆


concept. different. definitely. but its focusing on realistic type of people. i like it. Haha yes that was my purpose, to make it completely different and realistic.i already can tell from the choice of characterisation in Riddhima that i don't have to worry about mushy romance in the FF ;P Nope no mushyness, well there might be but that won't happen for a very long time, probably not until the last few update :P where did the inspiration for the character Riddhima come from? Aah that. To be honest i always wanted to see Riddhima like this but no one wrote an FF so i thought why don't i write it? lol. But i was reading an FF once and i don;t know how but the whole concept flashed before my eyes, and i quickly wrote it down before i forgot it😆 And the FF i was reading had nothing to with it i think it was just the timing plus i was daydreaming :P btw i likes that you made Anjali the pari like behen in your FF because my beloved Anjali was always looked down upon as evil in DMG 😆Yeah thought to make the good one bad, and the bad one good :P

strange how Riddhima has psychological problems herself and she took the class. OMG Can i tell you how much i love you for saying that? I'm so glad finally someone noticed! That was the whole point of me choosing the subject, right at the end of the FF will explain it all :P But i am so happy you noticed. The subject is like an important part of the FF even though it won't be SHOWN as important in it.Well from the flashback it was obvious she didn't have such problems when she first took the class up but now thats she's returned to Psychology class i feel she might be able to relate her own experiences to some lessons in there.Maybe i never really thought of that, i might add that later onwards :D Cuz i have never understood how people like her think...Zarqa how do you do it? slip right into her shoes and know what girls like Riddhima might feel. To be honest it's because i have seen girls like her around me all the time, girls in my school are like that, and you hear rumours about them having family problems or they hang out with the bad crowd, and even though they scare me i feel sorry for them, because they behave like they don't want to change, they like how they are which confuses me:/ slipping in and out of character's perspectives is true skills ;)LOL i will take that as a compliment ;P Girls like Riddhima fascinate me. Girls have a tendency to get hurt very easily by comments that make them self-conscious and unfortunately modern girls have begun to depend on other peoples opinions (usually mens opinions too) to judge themselves and unfortunately men and even girls now judge people by their looks. although looks say ALOT. Yeah i noticed that, people are so concerned about what others might think of them they don't be themselves, some actually change themselves so they like them (extreme!) but also the others don't need to judge either, if they don't have anything good to say they should keep it to themselves but sadly people nowadays can't help but comment.its not everything. Which is why Riddhima fascinates me and i know i have come across girls like her. She's strong in the fact that she doesn't need other peoples opinions to sum her up, to rate her. She's her own being. Yeah she was like that and still is, other peoples comment don't matter to her at all becuase she know it won't change her. She doesn't feel ashamed of how she dresses. But being completely shameless is different to self-confidence. I think Riddhima has slipped well into shameless/don't give a rats a** when really sometimes some peoples opinions DO matter especially when those people are sharing their opinions about you out of concern e.g. in this case is Anjali. Hm that's true but she is so used to ignoring all comments and opinions and has been getting alot that i think she doesnt think Anjali is any different.


Her strength in not letting nasty looks or comments from people who's opinions aren't even valid is a strength but also her weakness. She has made herself numb and unreactive to other peoples thoughts towards her which has made her completely unabashed by the odd stares and disppointed looks she gets from people. But that numbness and i''d even say stubborness in Riddhima is her weakness because it shows her fear of feelings because feelings usually include pain too...she has blocked out emotions now because she's scared of it i think..she must have got deeply hurt sometime in her past that she has adapted into this being who doesn't give a damn. OMG Aliya, how do you do it? :O You read between the lines so well. Did you like slip in to my brain or something? :P That is completely correct, she is basically numb to every good and bad feeling. But the reason why, is yes she has been hurt, but by what or whom, i can't say :P


Armaan. don't like him.Wow, that's a first 😆Everyone seems to love Armaan. Thats the best thing about you, your honesty, you don't feel afraid of saying what you think. :D while Riddhima's character fascinates me as well as disappoints me because i know girls like her are out there being judged when they are probably hiding a story or bright spark behind the 'ghost make-up'.. Armaan simply disgusts me and guys like him. His lack of attention from his parents does not cover up for his sickening cocky-prick attitude.I completely agree, just because his parents have ignored him, he shouldnt behave like this, it's not realistic. But my dear, this FF has just begun ;) Let me tell you now, there are ALOT of suprised coming up, ALOT! This isn't the only reason why Armaan is like this to be honest, i can't what it is but hopefully it will be a good enough reason for you for him being like this. LOL i REALLY want you to like this FF and i want to know more of what you think. I want this to be what you expected, which is not expected :P unfortunately a lot of men are like him.Oh yeah, true fact. Most men are like that, well the amount i have seen around my area and places i have visited. It's annoying really because it's hard to find a decent guy nowadays because they all a like flirty or stuck-up :/ And usually those men are more hurtful towards other. This clashes completely with Riddhima's blockage of hurt from comments. She seems unaffected (and by unaffected i mean not sad or tearing up although her getting angry might be a facade she puts up to cover her sadness) Haha i like your explanation of Riddhima unaffectedness :P by his insults..i just want to see how this unfolds. What side will be brought out from this clash? Aah this will unfold slowly but the timing of it will be how it should be, not too fast or slow, i want it to be perfect and of course realistic. Riddhima already knows his weakness: his parents. no-one seems to know Riddhima's.Bull-eye! Now all you have to do is read ahead, and guess by reading between the lines ;)


good luck with exams. but update soon too hehe =)Sure will! Thank you SOO much for this comment Aliya, you have no idea how much it means to me. I love reading your comments on other FF's, and now you wrote on mine, i know how i can improve or not. :D I LOVE YOU <3

Originally posted by: ARKJ_4EVER

Hey Zarqaa hi...sorry for late comment...busy with school...awesome update yaar...hmm so Riddhima didn't do the work...was kinda expecting that...Armaan's hard work went in vain but during their talk i mean fight seems they quite know each other from long,,,interesting!!!

Armaan-Rahul r awesome yaar...their friendship is so amazing n rocking , just their talk ...

ohh Riddhima's taking those during school..well she's like that but now going to class-detention stoned n now in library , what will happen???seems trouble's coming...

Love the update

Cont soon

Take care

N all the very best for ur exams!!!

Muahhh

🤗

Pranishta