YAYYY So i get my ass on work and im finally editing YAYYY!!!!!! im so happy,t ears are streaking down my eyes :'( im editing before this thread and FF Finished YAYYY🤣 HAPPY SHAAPPY! :$😎
PEOPLE Z is a blackmailer, she makes you edit all zabardasteee🤣 BAHHH! DEvil Incarnate! OMGGG YAYYY Im first🤣 and first isnt the worst, first is the best😎 ILYYY ZEEUUUHHH! Youre a rockstarrr! I am so blessed to have you Kameeni in my life! you really mean life to me :( :$$ Yeahh im mad after another mad girl🤔🤣 Madness spreee :$ Im actually so happy that im giving you a comment, that i dont know what to type🤣 im blabbering😛 SHEEESHHH i just love that i know you, and youre my bestest pal :$ Get a SKYPE/CELLPHONE/YM MESSENGER though kameeni🤬
Honestly, you remember when we actually grew close, and i told you you should write, you were like id suck and i told you you wont👎🏼 I always knew when youd write, itd be just brilliant as ever :$ YOU ARE A ROCKSTAR WRITER! You prove it in everyway! :$ Even when you wrote LWFAW So beautifully, you need not to continue that nymore though, :PP and when id seen you develop as a writer :$ HONESTLY KAMEENEEE you were so perfect and polished since the start. I mean, when i started writing, i so badly sucked and when i first time ever read something from you, the excitement, joy, patience to see your work and when i actually saw it, it was like WOW you blew me OFF :| Youre AMAZINGGG DUDE! Honestly, and you gotta accept this fact! The way your mind works and thinks its, just so so so out of this world! Your FF is LOVE :$
OMGGG i remember when you first time told me about this concept. I was like :O :O blown away types. you so know my typicality with genres, and FF selection. I love such genres, but in my dreams, even not, would i have ever thought bout such an amazing concept you came up wid! YEAHHH MANN! This FF and the concept seriously is rOCKING! I dont think anyone on IF does have such an unique concept, and the way you projected it, presented,and the best part the way you wrote it was FLAWLESS! Im so happy you started it finally! the slow ass of yours, and wen you told me youll post it after you write it completely, i was like HAYE ALLAH im going to be now deprived of such an awesome FF for years to come🤣 I remember trying to convince you so badly hard to post the FF, and you were like no im completing it and i was like gayee FF meri🤣🤣🤣
When you told me the whole concept, it was utterly intriguing from the very start, and different ofcourse, oh man i envy your brain😍🤣 Its just one of the best concepts ive known everhhh :$ Mostly FF section is filled wd slow romance developments, and everything is just revolving around it, and how i nomore love such works🤣 Youre genre, was such a bang on for me to read, and i was so badly anticipating for an update to follow honestly! YAYYY and you finally decided to post the FF!😍 akal aagayeee🤣🤣
YAYYY! i was so damn excited for the FF, but my idiotic exams came up and id to study from before, and you couldnt post the FF :'(( CHORRYY :( But you finally did and i was so GLAD OMGGG! YEAHH! I was like got up after eating my burger, and i saw your message, and the sweet cute sorry of yours, ILY YOU KNOW :| LOADS :| LIKE HELL :|
youre the bestest person friend of this world, and youre all mine☺️ Like Radhu says, sock and shoe🤣
"Roses Have Thorns" Indeed a very very beautiful name it is. IL Radhu for this suggestion. Its a fact, but associated wid your FF its just way too AHMAEEZINGHHH! The title is really beautiful <3333 OMGGG You started the FF YAYY :$$$ aww ILY TOO :$$$$$$ LY so dehrsaara much miss Devil Incarnate🤣🤗 and im so happy for your first FF! Its a great feeling aint it? ;) and youre WAY TOO AMAZING WID IT WOMAN :$ YAYYY!!!!! LMFAO The disclaimer🤣🤣🤣 Okay sorry, im getting serious, LMFAOO BUT the disclaimer made me crack up too badly! seriousness doesnt suits you🤔🤣 Honestly, i was like MY DI, Z, ZEUUHHH Wrote this ;O🤣 you will anyway kill the person alive who tries to plagiarize your work, the poor soul, id pitty him way too badly🤣 you might end up fukn the life outaa him🤣 my condolences already😒🤣 poor him, and his family :P LMFAOOO! The disclaimer is actually scary, nobody would dare to :P
I LOVE YOUR WRITING STYLE! YAYYY and the biggest blessing its beautiful not like her you know🤣 It way too beautiful, mature, and descriptive! and theres this different beauty to it, i cant put my finger on, but the way the flickers of humour that you add up are brilliant :$$$$
I told you you are the DIALOUGE QUEEN KAMEENEEE! No one can ever have better dialogues than you, honestly, the best in humor, pain, explanation! Youre like the EPITOME OF DIALOGUES! :$$😍 You gotta teach me the way you write woman, its just way too beautiful. Even though i knew the concept, id read each line utterly carefully, and wit concentration, it just felt im reading or knowing it for the first time. YOU ARE A MAGICIAN WD PROJECTION! Bringing it down with words, in a proper form is never easy, and you just tend to bewitch me always kameeni! :$ The prolouge was so so beautifully written. The way you brought the real essence of the story into a prolouge, just hats off to you for that. Honestly, prologues are always the most important part of any story, and yours was just the best, so much told and so much concealed, and yet it let out so many elegant emotions, it made your FF more intriguing and interesting.
I really dont care whether its ArSh or AR. it remains to be my sexy Shilpa&Grover when i get down to imagining :$😍 FREAKNNN HELL I love the characterisation of your FF :$$$$ OMGGG youve done the best characterization ever! I simply, utterly irrevocably love your RIDDHIMA😍 OMGGG Shes the best🤣 AHHH Z you know, youre so polished at it. The way youve characterized her, its not always easy to portray it justly, but the way you did it, in the prologue, the actions, reactions, the beauty of her emotions, her dialogues, MANNN I LOVEEE RIDDHIMAAA! SHES MY GAL :$ The girl of 21st century LMAO🤣🤣
OMGGG HONESTLY, I really LOVE ARMAAN :$☺️ hes the man, hahah OMGGG they got stuck together, poor them🤣 how they cannot tolerate each other is so utterly funny🤣🤣 Poor Armaan, he had to go to his date, and he got stuck wid Riddhima, common, Armaan you know you want to🤣 OMGG im just imagining how fukn SEXY and BEAUTIFUL SA would look in the avatar youre describing. Her deep enermous big green eyes, her face twisted with pride and attitude, her hair flyin wd the breeze OMFFGGG! Shilpa and Grover, make me Shiver :$ and specially wd da way they are so kick ass in the FF :$$$ im already lovin it :$$$$ AHHH I love how college and uni FFs have this specialty to them, they just are so awehsome :$$$ Yours is just more interesting. Armaan and Riddhima share a past, that is so utterly clear from your prologue, the way youve so beautifully, shown it, and yet its hidden from the readers, you create a mystery here.
"Oh my God! I can't believe I'm stuck in here with you!" Riddhima screamed in anger whilst trying to kick open the door.
OMGGG She was kicking the door🤣🤣 this girl is so interesting.
OMGGG He called her a countes dracula🤣 OMGGG MAEENNN I love Armaan dude! Your dialogues :| :$$$$ IL THEM :$$$
the way you analysed it afterwards. the pain inside his heart, so transparent. You described it just way too beautifully! He is connected to Riddhima, and he cannot see her this way. It was clear it did matter to him. And How Riddhima froze for moments :$ It was utterly BEAUTIFUL :$ Her pain being flowin so beautifully through the moment. Her mind denying the change, and her heart telling her how she did not like being this part was beautiful! You wrote it flawlessly, and beautifully. Each emotion was so utterly clear in the moment. Riddhima missed her oldself, her life, her family and him. There was so many layers of emotions, pain dominating all, and she knew what shed made of herself. She had tried to sheild her pain and vulnerability, and yet in that one moment, the way his question tried to intrude the deep hidden chambers of her heart was more and more beautiful. and again you left people wondering, why is Riddhima like this, what made her like this, why does she not change, what is the reason for this rigid air between her and Armaan.
And in the end, tehhh, italic with him, was the most beautiful and ethereal part :$$$$
Now my electricity is going, will tell you more baad mein muah :*
*edited again*🤣
Editing ka second part🤔 I Hate power cuts🤣🤣 You should be happy shappy, im giving you the second installment aaj ki date mein😛🤣🤣 I want a line to line, word to word reply😛 il give you my two most hated emos for that --->🤣
OHH MAEENN Honestly, i loved everything about the prologue. The beauty of your FF came so wonderfully in your prologue. There was this perfect layer of every emotion, and with that mysteries :$$ There was pain, and in the most beautiful of its forms. KAMEENEEE youve turned so so GOODDD :| Shutup wd your banter i aint good seriously :| Youre a rockstar writer, one of the best in IFs, and as a starter, youre jus the best, youre WOW :||| Now that you have your own FF evil smirks, im remembering my BTLOO Days, when you so ruthlessly threatened and blackmailed me. MUHAHAHAHAHA! My Turn!👎🏼🤣🤣 Im gonna demand now. youre already demanding so much from your poor readers😲🤣🤣 I honestly was like OMGGG Shes updating so fast nowadays, which you said not fast, yet you know seeing your speed, and the tag "I cba" of yours🤣🤣🤣 i was like WOW MAEN :| This girl has grown fast, and than you broke my bubble, telling me youd written few chaps already🤣🤣🤣
I forgot wat tbh meant though, you and your abbreviations :|
OMGGG Make Armaan like GRAY-SETh-ADRIAN ROHAN-ROLFE-:$$$$$$$$ Il die than🤣 okay, i know not at the moment though. But vini is getting this GRAY craze back to me, i gotta read this novel back, so im imagining KSG as GRAY everywhere and in all FFs, i hardly read any its yours only🤣
I love this FF. It is needless to say so. The way you thought of this concept, the way you plotted it. I love how all the layers of emotions give a bright radiance to your work here. I dont like works so easily, you know me better than anyone, but honestly i love analysing and reading all that you write, and im so thankful to you for that🤣🤣 like others i cant tell you to nice update😊 update soon🤣🤣🤣
This FF, is going to be hella interesting, and to see how Armaan brings out, or provokes a change into Riddhima. She has a deep hole in her heart, and it will be beautiful to see how he fills it, and the magical bond of AR. The relation of AR in this FF is really sensitively done, and thats the uniqueness, and intense beauty of this FF. Riddhima is a girl, bad, rotten, but not spoiled. The circumstances are bringing a different reaction out of her. She has concealed herself in shades of darkness, and honestly, what will be the most interesting point to read will be how a man of a different character like Armaan, will see through the barriers, and bring his old Riddhima back. The feeling of belonging and LONGING is again utterly beautifully present in here. Its a rendezvous of all the complicated feelings together, which two human beings go through. And i look forward to the explicit beauty and opening of mysteries like i dont know🤣🤣🤣
This FF is brilliant, and so is the way you write. ITS BEAUTEEEPHALLL :$ and magnificent. And needless to say you got so many brilliant readers, and all are loving this ff so much, because its so unlike the normal FFs. Im looking forward to more of this riot Riddhima, my handsome SEXYYY ARMAAN :$ and their bonding through these interesting excruciating circumstances.
IM SO APPPYYY ABOUT YOR WORK BABYYY! Yeah remember that? baby lover, before Macko and DI came we used to call sweet names, phir your mind lose screws mackooo type🤣🤣
I always adore what you do. <333 Its beautiful and perfect :$$ And it has the perfect Z touch to it, that none else posess. I want the skill you own at flawless dialogues and projection honestly. Your work is LOVE :$
YAYYY PHEWWW I Want a big reply🤣🤣🤣 and i want my treat for the maths A :| NO EXCUSES I WANT IT :| 😛 and get a phone get a phone get a phone ZEEUUHHH! I really miss talking to you so so much :'( miss our old days. Noone is like you :'((( ILYYY DHERSAAARAAA! I hope and pray to Allah ke all your work, and FFs be a big huge success, and you reach threads of threads and threads :$ Which ek have already almost finished YAYYY TO THAT :$$$$$ and your work is always special to me, more than mine. Im so proud of you :$$$$ LY :-*****
and ILY M O R E :P
The FF and prologue rocks. Its already for all a treat for all the readers reading :$
LYYY KAMEEENEEE
MUAAAH :-*
P.S GRAY SETH ROFLE ADRIAN :$🤣😍
Shiv Shakti
Madhubala - Ek Ishq Ek Junoon
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